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Reviews For Moonshadow
Reviewer: WendyJH2 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Epilogue

I am really really sorry that I didn't review every chapter. I trully and thoroughly enjoyed every single chpt of your story. Thank you so much for sharing this. I really wish there was more to this. I absolutely loved Jake and Bella in this. Your lemons where absolutely amazing and always left me running for a shower. Damn Bella sure is a lucky girl in this story and really really wish Jacob was real and imprinted on ME !! lol. I loved your ending. It was perfect. Reading that Eddie had came back worried me because you had not disclosed yet that they were already 3 years married and that Bella was pregnant with Jake's baby. But I love how you handled the whole reunion and how Bella was the one who decided it was enough. And the best was that you ended it with her seducing sexy as hell Jake and giving ol Eddie boy a play by play of how naughty Bella could be. Absolutely Beautiful, fun, Sexy as hell story. Again, Really sorry of not reviewing every chpt. good luck on writing more wonderful stories. ;0))



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed the story! I really wanted there to be a good bit of suspense about B's reaction to Edward's return - so the reader would wonder and suffer along with Jake... but I wanted to end it w/J having NO DOUBTS about where Bella's heart lay (the same place mine would!) Thanks for the comps on the lemons - I *ahem* found that I enjoy writing them;D <><3

Reviewer: HopelesslyHopeful (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Interlude - Jacob's POV

Aww this is such a cute story and a great one for team jacob and team edward a like!! No one can deny a good story!! :)



Author's Response:

I like to think of myself as Team Good Story (tho' my heart belongs to Jake!) Glad you're enjoying ... <><3

Reviewer: mzcullen (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Epilogue

now that i read them all i have to say that ..... you're fffing brilliant!it was one of the best i've read!you should write a book-I mean it!you're a natural!keep writing girl!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It was really fun to write, I've got some ideas for a side-shot that are slowly spinning up to the surface... <><3

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Epilogue

I loved the ending! It was a sweet but inconsiderate gesture when Edward popped in like that. Oh well, he got what he deserved.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it! Old loves who are gone should just STAY gone, IMHO! Anyway - if you had Jacob... *swoon* Thanks for reading! <><3

Reviewer: jacobgirl87 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Epilogue

 I absolutely loved this story!  I could not stop reading.  I am so sad that it is over.  You are awesome!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm sad it's over, to! Thanks for reading. <><3

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Epilogue

Awww... great job though I'm sad to see it end!



Author's Response:

Thanks for coming along for the ride, sweetie! I do have a companion piece that I'm working on... anything you'd like to see? <><3

Reviewer: tonya (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Epilogue

Nice...I think she would have been happy too!

Author's Response:

How could she not be happy - with Jacob, after all! Thanks for the review! <><3

Reviewer: Edwardmyedward (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Morning

THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I tingled from head to toe when i read their first time.  I can't stop reading! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I must admit, I got pretty tingly, too! Jake's a lot to tingle over :D <><3

Reviewer: celestialsparx (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Epilogue

Absolutely amazing story! Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I would never have believed how much fun I would have writing it - it's just wonderful that others like it, too! <><3

Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Epilogue

Sweet Jesus! That was good. Love the story--- everything I have thought about and hoped for between Bella and Jake. Bella stops being such a skitish, self absorbed freak show and acts normal making it normal for her to be with Jake. And I totally love Eddie coming back in the end and Bella being truly over him and in Love with Jake. No question there.

Author's Response:

Oh, thank you for that!! It always seemed odd to me that B would stay so sunk in misery for SO long - things happen at a very rapid pace at that age, even w/o supernatural intervention! And if you had a sweet warm hunk like J to help you recover... MMM mmm MMM!

I felt bad for E's sake: as Saga readers we know how he suffered - but B doesn't! She's not the same girl he left lying broken in the forest eight years before - she got a lovely LIFE with a terrific guy and things to look forward to *sigh* . So happy you liked it! <><3

Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Renee

I so love the easy going love story. I like the characters sooo much that just spending time with them is pure enjoyment. Thank you!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I wanted to spend more time with them, too ( esp, Jake!) and find out 'what would happen if'... <><3

Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Interlude - Jacob's POV

I've been reading but lax on the reviews. Deffinately a GREAT chapter. Jacob's point of view is amazing.

Author's Response:

Jake's feelings were SO strong they just had to be expressed - it just wouldn't leave me alone! <><3

Reviewer: jaclynheartz (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Epilogue

omg so good!!! loved the way it ended with Edward :D

One of the best Jacob Fic's I've read. Also Verry Funny!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Jake's just a really funny guy, one of the reasons I'm, uh, I mean BELLA is in love with him! <><3

Reviewer: AmyMelz (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:52 AM · On: After the Fall

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. As a hardcore Team Jacob fan it was a very nice read through. The epilogue was also very nicely done & i was happy that it was from Jacobs POV instead of Bella's to change things up....though maybe a one shot of the epilogue some time down the road of Bella POV or Edwards would be cool too, or maybe the wedding day *hint hint* lol. Thanks very much for the story, and I look forward to reading your future writings.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading! I just HAD to write a better ending for Jake - and for Bella! I really thought he would be the better choice. I am really sorry that Edward didn't have a happy ending, but that's the way life so often is: I've never heard of a love triangle that ended happily for everyone!

Thanks for the suggestions - I will definitely lay them before the Muse... <><3

Reviewer: Yaribella (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Epilogue

Fire and Ice is my fav. chapter also!!! I love this story!! I'm not 100% on Team Edward or Jacob, But i do have a very soft spot for MY JACOB!!! I love the fact that Bella was strong and happy enogh to say goodbye to Edward. Although i feel bad because i know that Edward will always love her. Keep up the good work, i really enjoyed this story!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for r & r -ing, glad you enjoyed it. When I was concluding this I tried very hard to remember that Bella doesn't 'know' the things that we as readers of the Saga 'know'... to make her response as natural as possible! <><3

Reviewer: Yaribella (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Momentum

I think it was tasteful.  Very well written.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I really wanted to capture that heart-stopping sweetness of, well, before you know what to expect.... *sigh* <><3

Reviewer: Yaribella (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Black and Blue

Jacob is very deep in this story, Ilike this side of him!!



Author's Response:

I just thought that he must have been through something really tough in order to explain his amazing patience with Bella, y'know? <><3

Reviewer: Yaribella (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Insights

Loving the story so far!!! I love that Bella is giving Jacob a chance!!



Author's Response:

'Bout time she came to her senses and took a look at what she could have as opposed to what was missing!!<><3

Reviewer: MelissaIsabella (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Epilogue

Such a good story - you are a very taleneted writer. Keep it up. I can't wait to read your next story.

 

It's so sad and happy at the same time. This is the better option. She has her whole family, never having to give up anything. But in the same vein, knowing what we do about the love she shared with Edward, the love that everyone feels that first time...well, it's just hard to think about the loss of the first love, no matter what amazing things have come your way since. I just wish, somehow, when Edward came back, he could have had another love. In breaking Dawn, Jacob was allowed Reneseme, so he wasn't just floundering in a horrible, bleak existence. It would have made it a slightly happier ending, for me, if there would have been some sort of happiness for the cullens, and Edward especially. Does that make sense? Yes, Edward left Bella, and in doing so caused her intense emotional pain, but he wasn't maliscious, and he believed he was doing the right thing, for her. I like to hope, after hearing that Bella has moved on, maybe Edward could find a way to move on as well. I prefer that to thinking that he goes to the Volturri to die. Do you have any intention of writing more with this story? Maybe a second book to follow this one?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading - and for the nice compliment!

I have some other fic projects working (which then got re-routed because I started working on some contest entries!) at least one will be about further adventures of J & B. I may re-visit the Cullens at some point , but, as you know, life - and eternity - don't always have happy, tidy endings... Who knows what the Muse has in store for me! <><3

Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Epilogue

Thanks for the GREAT story!!

Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Epilogue

Thanks for the GREAT story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for coming along for the ride!! :D  <><3

Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Easy as Breathing

I loved it!

Reviewer: kaykay86 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Epilogue

awesomness!!!!!



Author's Response:

gratefulness!!!!! ;>  <><3

Reviewer: thalyrocks (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Epilogue

that was mean and fucked up

Reviewer: janeeyre17 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Epilogue

you are fabulous!! this story has everything.  i love how you put Edward in at the end so that Jacob could see Bella choose him over Edward.  it was like his final doubt finally gone. and i like how you made Bella a little wicked at the end

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