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Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 12:20 AM · On: Wildlife Management
good chapter, again
Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 10:41 PM · On: A Study in Black
i like that
Reviewer: VaniV (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 11:21 PM · On: Epilogue
Very sweet I enjoyed the story... lovely..
Author's Response: Thank you! Sometimes you just need a nice love story...<><3
Reviewer: VaniV (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Easy as Breathing
Sweet.. those two old guys are definitely getting sentimental :)
Author's Response: Don't you just know how pleased they'd be? <><3
Reviewer: VaniV (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Black Hole
Hmm.... I didn't get the part where Emily appeared.... was Bella just going crazy and dreaming ? Or did they really use her as a prey ?
Author's Response: Read on, m'dear! <><3
Reviewer: VaniV (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 10:08 PM · On: Dots
That Quileute blood thing definitely sounds interesting....
Author's Response: Actually based on some of my own family lore...<><3
Reviewer: VaniV (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Confusion
You captured us girls totally well... whatever he says, he won't win *gg*
As for the fight, well that's just typical as well, I've had some of those myself... you totally know you shouldn't say anything, and yet you do just the thing that will make everything worse..... until you make up ...
You're writing great
Author's Response: It just seemed so natural...they both have insecurities that run away with them. Issues don't go away just 'cuz you want them to...><3
Reviewer: VaniV (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Renee
Cute chapter.... I initially thought that Renée was not happy with Jake...
I like your story, life is not always full of crazy adventures....
Author's Response: R just needed a little time to get used to the idea! Thanks for r&r-ing! <><3
Reviewer: VaniV (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 07:05 PM · On: Interlude - Jacob's POV
It's really funny how guys always have pet names for their parts *gg* Lovely chapter
Author's Response: Well, IT does seem to have a life of its own, some times... *smirk* <><3
Reviewer: VaniV (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Momentum
I loved this chapter, you wrote very tastefully about it. I liked the realism of it all, Jake being the more experienced one of them.... loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I just couldn't think that the other girls in the area would have totally missed how hot J is (you wouldn't believe some of the flak I got for that!) and for particular evening, I wanted to try to capture that breathless feeling - before you KNOW what's going to happen. Long ago days...:) <><3
Reviewer: VaniV (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 05:36 AM · On: A Study in Black
This Jake and the little details you added remind me of my very own "Jake"... which makes me love your story even more....
Author's Response: He really is something, isn't he... *sigh* <><3
Reviewer: narcissusave (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 07:30 AM · On: A Study in Black
So much love going your way for this! It's great.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I promise, it gets even better... ;> <><3
Reviewer: jmack18 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 09:53 PM · On: Renee
haha, Bella's mom being unable to get Edward's name correct made me laugh. It reminds me of Samantha's mom from Bewitched.
Author's Response: Moms do have there ways of showing their disapproval! *grin* <><3
Reviewer: Nohemy (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Epilogue
Wow i couldn't thank you enough...
I've been so pissed off at Edward for the longest time and this totally did it for me
I can now breathe again lol
It would be awesome to read an Edward POV of this last chapter =]
It's probably terrible but i love that he's hurting...
LOVE JACOB SO SO MUCH
You did an amazing job =]
THANK YOU A MILLION TIMES THANK YOU
Author's Response: LOL!! I love J so much, too! Even before I became Team J (which didn't take long, I can tell you!) I was REALLY CROSS with B in the Saga for her treatment of him...had to get justice for my darling wolf - so, MS came about.
The EPOV is shaping up to be suitably heart wrenching - it'll be a 3 hanky piece, I'm thinking! Thanks for r&r-ing <><3
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Epilogue
This is the best Bella/Jacob story that I have read. Thank you
Author's Response: Why thank you! That's saying a lot, 'cuz there's a bunch of good ones. I really poured my heart into MS, it's so nice to have it well received! <><3
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Epilogue
*Dances* What a wonderful way to end it! Yeah! Take that Edward! Again, thank you for writing. It has been wonderful reading your work; I plan on reading plenty more soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you, darlin'! I got so tired of fics where B pines FOREVER and just 'makes do' with J that Ihad to write one where she's in no doubt as to how much better, and warmer, life is with J...for the finale I wanted ALL the principals to be convinced of that.
The way the Muse has been handing me ideas The Continuum may end up rivalling the Nancy Drew Series - just need to find time to write it all! Thanks for the r&r's<><3
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Easy as Breathing
I'm so sad that this wonderful story is wrapping up!!! Meh! Thank you for writing it, I have had a lovely blast reading it!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I can't tell you how much fun this story was - so fun that I haven't been able to stop! there's some other stuff from "The Moonshadow Continuum" posted and more in the works (click the link on the MS summary page) I'd love to know what you think! <><3
Reviewer: mrs_n (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Easy as Breathing
I just re-read this chapter cuz I realized there were more parts to this story and I had to point something out...
In Port Angeles Bella Italia is LITERALLY next door to the movie theater. Like RIGHT next door. So I would hope they would walk no matter the weather. If you park in front of one you're automatically in front of the other. I lived there for 18 years lol funny that I didn't notice before.
Anyways, just thought I'd throw that out there.
Author's Response: How funny! I haven't been in Port Angeles since I was a kid (won't go into how long ago that was!) Let's just call it 'literary license', ok? Hope you like the other visits to this AU...<><3
Reviewer: TheMadHatter414 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Interlude - Jacob's POV
"Clearing my throat, I explained the tradition behind what I translated as ‘nest', a word that came fairly close. I didn't think she needed to know what the guys had been calling it while we worked on it."
Yeah, in my head I can see them making it and singing the song Love Shack. lol sorry.
LOVE the story. Absolutly amazing!
Author's Response: That's pretty much the vision I had when I was writing this! LOL! You know guys! Thanks for reading! <><3
Reviewer: meetjay88 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Black Hole
"You want to have some fun, BITCH? Come play with ME!" that is the best line ever. I really enjoyed reading moonshadow
Author's Response: After Jake had to sit there in the attic listening to V threatening Bella, I thought he'd need to vent a bit! Glad you liked it! <><3
Reviewer: zee97 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Epilogue
I enjoyed the story keep writing
Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R! I've got several other projects working/posted...<><3
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Renee
I for one REALLY appreciate you writing a nice love story! It is so nice to not have a read a angsty, sad, depressed story and then finally get to the nice love, happy ending part! Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Thanks! I kinda wondered what would happen if Bella just had the chance to develop normally, w/o the whole rivalry/tug of war thing - if Edward & Co. really kept the promise... <><3
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Morning
Well I really loved the Jake POV! It was very refreshing! I am so envious of Ms Swan! Thanks for writing! You're such a pleasure to read becuase you write BEAUTIFULLY! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This particular chap was a lot of work, but well worth it in the end (I know what you mean about the envy bit - that's why I started writing this fic in the first place!) <><3
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Epilogue
Yeah. This chapter was a weeper. That was Very tough to read but it's a Bella/Jacob fic. All I can say is that your writing did change from the first chapter as if you became more confident in your writing as time passed. I look forwrd to reading your other fics.
Author's Response: Thanks for noticing! I hadn't written anything since, oh, around the War of 1812 - now I kinda wish I could do over the begining... *grin* Naw! I've got other ideas that want my attention! Thanks for r&r-ing! <><3
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Black Hole
This was very intense!
Author's Response: This chapter was A LOT of work, b/c it was so different & I was very worried that it wouldn't come out scary enough...I was satisfied in the end. <><3
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