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Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 22
I'm so happy I caught your update before leaving for work!
Loved the Edward getting caught moment. And the dress...
Fantastic story!
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 22
How embarrassing for Edward, being caught like that!
Loving it and can't wait for some more!
Reviewer: sdnez (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 22
Bella catching Edward masturbating... that's a first, well played!.... KUDOS!
Reviewer: SpaCullen (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 21
this story is awesome! i apologize for not reviewing sooner, but i often get so wrapped up in stories that i don't stop to review! can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: disharmony (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 10
I absolutely love this chapter, I am reading this story again for the third time and it still manages to make me laugh out loud!
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 21
OH. MY. GOD.
HOW COULD YOU!?!??!?!?!?!
How could you not tell me that this story is on ff.net?!
It is taking EVERYTHING, EVERYTHING I have in me to not scream aloud and wake the country.
OMG.OMG.OMG.
*Dies*
Okay. Sorry about that. But omg. I cannot believe that it's finished on there and I have been WAITING on this site! LOL I'm so angry with you right now that I just called Rob and Kris and told Rob to come whip yo' ass.
I'd just like to say that this is by far the best story ever. Thank you for sharing. Sorry I freaked out on you. It shocked the shit outta my ass. Can't wait to read more of your work! <33333333
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 20
OME. Beautiful kiss!
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 19
That was an excellent twist having Bella break into his bedroom. I love how you manage to write her so strong yet still vulnerable and in need of saving.
Reviewer: Gertie (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 21
Awesome! I'm completely hooked!
Reviewer: Urs (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 10
That was amazing. I thought I would die of laughter. "Say it. Out loud"... Can you even imagine our Edward Cullen anything but a woman-eating piece of man candy!
Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oh...So Edward isn't a virgin. Whoops! This chapter was thrilling! Moving on.
Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 6
Aww, poor little virgin vampire. LOL! You're right, he is clueless, haha!
Reviewer: gingin2 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 21
I love what you've written...and the set up for what may be yet to come is very exciting too. Please continue!
Reviewer: lovebooks (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
So she is still his singer, does Charlie live in Forks?
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 21
Aww they so cute together!
ROFL "does IT sparkle?" !!! LOL That was awesome!! & I love that he tells her everything; no secrets. Unlike SM's Edward
Hmm...soooo how will they find out if their, um, "compatible"(If they can have sex) ? can't they jus ask Carlisle?
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 17
WOW. I wondered if they would use Bree to get to Bella, but I didn't know how they would know to do that
Soo...what is James up to. Why does he refer to Bella has "his" & "treasure" ??
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 12
Oops.... tho thats kinda sexy *giggle* him unzipping her hoodie to see his shirt
OMHO I like the pace of your story ^___^
Reviewer: lookingforhoofprints (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 10
Hahahahahaha! I love that you used the movie's words for The Outing. Which is what I'm refering to it as from now on. Because I have never even considered the whole gay Edward thing, but it totally makes sense. Now I will forever have this image of RPatz going "Like, so TOTALLY cool" with the little hand gesture. I'm now crying laughing tears :)
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 10
LOL Gay!! Gayward. A Gay Vampire. OMG this is sucha hoot!!! LoL Oh that is priceless!!
I kept wondering if he would just grab her & kiss her, then just walk away
Oh this is just too fun!! ^___^
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 8
Very..VERY interresting
Hmmm....
Reviewer: sillybean (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 10
I just have to say that I laughed out loud and had tears in my eyes when I read the part about Bella telling Edward that he was gay. It was perfect.
cheers!
Reviewer: Sleeping_Stars (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 21
Love it! I like the pace. It's a little slow, but it's necessary. Relationships are not built overnight. Good job. Update soon please.
Reviewer: Moonlightdarkness724 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 21
:) I love it! :) It's getting better and better aaaalll the time!
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 21
Loved the way she persuaded him outside into the sunshine, that was amazing. Poor Edward though, he felt a little awkward with the sex talk, but I'm sure he'll become more confident in time :)
Absolutely in love with this story and can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Sushi (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 21
i'm lovin this. its fantastically written, and the little moments of intimacy are captivating. the anticipation for something more is killing me, but i'm sure it will be worth the wait. i love your depiction of edward, too. keep it up!
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