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Reviewer: irishekl (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 21
Great, great story!
Looking forward to more :)
Reviewer: Sporks (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 22
That was fabulous! I love this story, I love what you are doing with it and I cannot wait to read more! I hope we can look forward to an update in the near future. You write for both Edward and Bella exceptionally well. Truly. This is awesome!
Reviewer: roxyrain (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 22
Great chapter. There are so many subtle things here that I just loved that made them so true to character. From Edwards cluenessness and jealousy and Bella's insecurity and quickness to anger, it was enjoyable to read. The sexual tension here is getting hot. I laughed when Bella caught him in the beginning relieving himself, too funny.
Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 22
great chapter
Reviewer: lollydot (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 20
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!
... and strangely enough- i think u did a better job with the first kiss scene than stephenie. ;)
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 22
Nicely done. The story is coming along.
Reviewer: cassandra417 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 22
Fantastic chapter A! Loved every word! I like how Edward's demeanor is crackling little by little at his job and how people are wondering what's going on between him and Bella. Keep up the great job and I'll be waiting for the next chappie!
Reviewer: lollydot (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 17
wow... poor bella.
at least shes not being too mean about the fact that her BOYFRIEND is a VAMPIRE. i no i would be cumpletly freked out.
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 22
Yes, I like it! Keep writing!
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 3
I LOVE you! You totally have come up with the most intense and exciting first meeting between Bella and Edward! KUDOS!
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 22
Of course I likeit. It's Edward at his most anoying but sexy self.
Loved the update. Looking forward to more.
=-D
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 22
Great chapter. Poor Edward, he was so mortified at the start of the chapter when Bella caught him. You gotta love his turn of the century attitudes to talking about sex.
Loved the Buffy reference.
Reviewer: mangler (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 22
not like it, LOVE it! Thank YOU!
Reviewer: lollydot (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 10
edward... is GAY? where the hell did THAT cum from?
totally surprised here...
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 22
nice
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 22
Great chapter!! The sexual anticipation is insane (in a good way)! Hope they get to a point that they reward us with a juicy lemon. Have a great weekend!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 22
i love that he wants her so much
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 22
The beginning of this chapter had me laughing out loud. well really it was more on a ROFLMAO!!
Reviewer: lollydot (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 6
omg. edward couldnt get any more clueless could he? i mean seriously! it couldnt hav been mor obviuos (that he cared about her) if sum1 had jumped up and down in front of him waving it in his face!!!!!!
hes so stiff! i mean, even stephenie's edward wasnt this uptight!
anyway, it was a good chapter... i liked it.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 22
Even if they seem to have problems, these two are too drawn to one another to stop trying to be together.
Edward's going to need to work on his awareness and control though...Maybe Jasper can help him work on that. That way he won't need to run to his office to "relieve his tension" and Bella won't have dreams that are unfullfilled.
Alice is going to have so much fun dressing Bella for the party-Edward is going to "wake-up" and ask Bella to go with him, isn't he?
Loved this update- so happy you haven't abandoned this story!
Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 22
What a great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens now!
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 22
I love it! You know Eddie needs to talk with Em and Jas and take some advice on the date thing.. I think I can be hilarious only imagine Emmet!
Reviewer: lollydot (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 4
very dramatic...
and edward is certainly keepin his over-possessive streak 4 sure... (ha ha :)
Reviewer: lollydot (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 1
off 2 a gr8 start! ;)
Reviewer: amorvincitomnia (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 22
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!! Keep writing please!
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