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Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 26
Great chapter!! Yes, I like it.
NM has me obsessed too. I saw it twice within 24 hours and I will have to see it again, soon.
If we don't hear from you before Thanksgiving, have a great one!
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 25
The lemon was amazing!
Really top notch work!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 26
can't wait for more
Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 26
Wow. What a great story. I am so glad he didn't let her leave and that things seem better between them at least. Now they have to find Alice......go get her boys!!!
Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 26
great chapter. update soon....
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 26
Way more intriguing and detailed than the books. I love how you are taking the minute details and expanding them. Fabulous!
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 26
Great chapter! I'm glad they figured Alice out a little bit. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: Mav (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 26
So glad Edward isn't being a butthead and is sticking by Bella! And it's awesome the way they're figuring out Alice's story - I'm dying to read more!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 14
i think this is a very realistic look at edward.. I too think it would have been very hard for him to live with all those mated vamps and their thoughts... I like that he moved out on his own and created his own space.. even just for the reason of not being able to hear peoples thoughts surely?
anyway good job, been reading thru the 25 chapters in like one day!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 10
bah ha hah that was the funniest chapter ever!! manscaped... and I know what you are.. your tidy.. you have more clothes than paris hilton... heeh eee
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 7
oh hes like superman.. spending all night helping people.. how sweet
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 25
Thank you thank you thank you so much for not ripping my heart out! I am so happy with the way you have resolved this. My heart is in my throat right now. This chapter was wonderful!!!!!!! This is a fantastic version of Twilight and it is so absolutely entertaining, fun, sexy and well-conceived. I love it! And of course, now that I'm caught up, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: swilson500 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 19
Wow! So beautifully written.
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 24
Ahhh, suspense! Love it!
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 23
Wow, that was satisfying. I am so excited for where they will go with each other next. Great tension - sexual and otherwise. Thanks for the great story!
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 22
No - they're not doomed!!!!!
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 21
so sweet and wonderful. I love how Bella makes Edward vulnerable.
Reviewer: corriebird (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 25
This is wonderful!! keep going! I have to know what happens!!!!
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 25
wow, so glad I found your story. I love this Edward, he is the perfect vamp. Strong, yet soulful! So, they need to find Alice, Kill James and Victoria, and then change Bella... Right?????
Reviewer: MasonsMommy (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 25
OMFG! I can't take it. I think I have tears in my eyes. That chapter was so fricken unbelievable! Filled with every emotion one can imagine. I felt the love as they expressed it to eachother physically. I actually felt her pain and anxiety as she was ready to leave. I felt the exhilerating relief as he asked her to stay. This story is the BEST EVER. I know this is unrealistic, but with writing this EXCELLENT, I never want this to end. Wow!
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 20
Wow - contact - irresistible!
Reviewer: haippa (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 25
pls continue..... u cant leave u hangin lyk dat
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 19
Wow, that was wonderful. Goose bumps all over my arms! I am so excited to read more more more!!!
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 18
I'd love to write a perfect review too but I also am not Stephanie Meyer. I just know that I really liked this chapter. It was clearly a turning point and I really just can't wait for these two to take the next step. It's a little harder, though more realistic, to read your Bella - she is less eager to give up everything. But I believe her and I believe in her.
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 17
Wow! Creepy and scary and wow!
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