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Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 14
Very good. I love Carlisle.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 13
Wonderful, I love it.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 12
Very good, I love how you turned things around. Now Edward is Distracting Bella instead of the other way around. Awesome.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 11
Very good, So funny.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh my gosh that was SOOOOOOOOOO Funny!!! I love it, I love how you made it go along with the movie. Very good.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 9
Very good. I do so Love Edward.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 8
Very good, I esp like the way he took the key.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 7
Very good.
Reviewer: Jasper36ve (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 30
That was fantastic! I loved every second of your story, my favourite part (just because I was giggling hysterically) was chapter 10 when Bella is “outing” Edward, it was just brilliant I loved it! I especially enjoyed reading the last chapter where you have small entries from Bella diary I thought that was a nice touch. Amazing work, I can’t wait for the epilogue. :D
Reviewer: kochanski (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 29
Wow. I somehow didn't think James would really kill Bella, such a bastard. I hope James's last thought as Jasper pulls him to pieces is, "Huh...maybe this wasn't such a good idea."
Reviewer: lookingforhoofprints (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 29
Oh no! So much drama! Excellent chapter, hurry up with the next one... :)
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 30
I really enjoyed the journaling at the end. Wonderfully told story. Thank you for gracing us with you talent.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 6
Clueless Edward. Very Good.
Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 30
So Seth died? Or James just beat him unconscious? This was such a great story! Is Bella and Edward going to get married to make it "legal"? Cant wait to read the epi!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 5
Very good, Interesting.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 4
Very good. Nice addition of Tyler and Eric.
Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 30
Loved It!!! Can't wait for the epilogue :D
Reviewer: roxyrain (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 30
I love that you focused on the fact that the transformation was not easy for Bella and that it would be something that she would have to work at. Their imprefections are what makes them more true to their real character. I think you did such a fabulous job with this story, I truly loved every word. You stuck to some of the same ideals as SM but you made this story so very unique. Can't wait for the epilogue!
Reviewer: roxyrain (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 29
So very intense, I knew that he would make Edward choose between Bella and Alice. I'm glad that Bella was able to speak to Alice about her choice to become immortal. Can't wait to see vamp Bella! Great chapter!
Reviewer: citrine (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 30
awh, i'm so sad that it ended D: good effort i loved every single chap :D
Reviewer: wideyess (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 20
I'm still loving this story, even more. I'm just a little confused at this chapter.
The one line Edward says "It's in my nature to protect you" I thought that was strange. kind of a contracticion of his nature. It's in Edwards nature to kill Bella. His nature is what he fights against.
It's is 'desire' his greatest wish to protect her against is nature.
The other thing that didn't fit for me in this chapter was the line that said
"So what you're saying is that James is murdering people, turning humans into vampires, and stalking me, in an attempt to get back at you? Edward nodded
But this is what James would be doing regardles. He lives on human blood. Just doing what is natural to vamipes. It's not something he chooses to do to get back at Edward. The part about stalking Bella was a way to get back at Edward though.
Don't be offended by my questions. I'm just trying to understand a confusing chapter in a great story so I can get back on track :)
Author's Response: Not offended.
second qusestion: as you read on you will discover more about why James is doing this to get back at Edward...but really, james has made it clear in their communications that he is particuarly focused on bella and people surrounding his life.
the nature one? idk...you gotta work that one out on your own. Edward is coming to terms with bella and her effect in his life. as much as he wants to kill her he wants to protect her more.
Reviewer: CullenLovingMom (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 30
Great story! Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 3
Very good.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 2
Very good.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very good. Interesting.
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