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Reviewer: Paige Parkker (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 17
Fantastic!! I loved the time Bella and Edward spent in the museum ... she might as well have been on exhibit for Edward. And the scene with Bree was great as well. I look forward to reading more.
Reviewer: meta knight (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 3
kool knice ksuper
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 17
great chapter!Can't wait for more. ;D But,although Edward is a vampire he really needs to check his hearing,because Bella never called him a monster,only not human. ;D
Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 17
wow!!! that is an interesting way for her to find out what he really is. Great chapter!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 17
*gasp* Bella is safe. But wow, what happens next!! LOL. Update soon? Pleaseee?
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 17
Well as gruesome as it was to witness, at least she knows now.
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 17
Well at least shw knows now......and maybe can be more aware of what is happening around her....
Shame Alice couldn't have seen Victoria before she found Bella though.
Look forward to the next chapter
Reviewer: Make_Edward_Growl (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 10
OMG HILARIOUS!!!!!
Reviewer: Sporks (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 16
I was soo happy when I saw that you had posted another chapter! This was fantastic! I really like how you have gone about developing this. I cannot wait to read more, keep it up really you are a fabulous writer!
Reviewer: deacongirl01 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 16
I love it!!! This is a very well-written story and I am very involved with your versions of these characters. I find I kind of lilke slightly more mature versions of Bella and Edward than the high school versions. I sincerely hope you continue to update the story as I can't wait to see how everything works out.
Reviewer: TheLambToHisLion (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 7
very angel with s twist
loveit(:
Reviewer: TheLambToHisLion (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 4
He has to be a vampire.
I can't for the life of me see another option...
Reviewer: TheLambToHisLion (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 3
So, he's what?
Freakishly observant with OCD tendancies?
And Bella's scent both annoys him and makes him hungry in a completely un-vampiristic way?
He's an absolute enigma, which is what you're going for, I'm sure. But it is terribly frustrating...
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 16
Thanks for updating! Can't wait to see how their date is going to turn out...I thought Edward was going to run away from her for a second.
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 16
I'm so enjoying re-reading this one! I've read ahead on the "other" site, but it's nice to review one of my favourite stories! Congratulations on the nomination in the Bellies. I voted for you because I enjoy this story and you deserve it. I enjoy your imagination and the twists and turns you've added to these characters we love so much, while keeping them fairly realistic and believable and the Edward and Bella we already know (and in Edward's case, gush over). *snicker*
Reviewer: elisena (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 16
i really like this storyline! it's different than the others i've read so far. and i really liked how you had the girl from the coffee shop relate the tribal legends--cool! i can't wait to find out how the date goes!
Reviewer: CullenTX (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 16
Oh God please tell me that is not the end! I have been reading this whole adventure and neglecting everything else in my life. Please post more - I need his first touch, her first kiss and what about James & Victoria and the brooch.
I need to spend more time with them. Please, please, MORE!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 16
Good chapter! can't wait to see what kind of car it is! I'm so happy he finally asked her out!
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 16
Coolest car ever? Like the Spider? I love Edward's inching toward change. The sneakers were brilliant and the way Bella coaxed him into them was well done.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 16
Too late. I already voted for you and the coolest quote ever.
The whole scene with the boots was so funny...I can't wait to see what the coolest car is!
Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 16
date night!!!
Reviewer: Belli (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 16
Another cool chapter.
I love the shoe changing episode. Edward can be so akward and dorky, but atleast he's willing to try and change for Bella. I'm glad he's loosening up.
Very much looking forward to the date.
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 16
Haha! I can't wait for more! This is an amazing story! XD
Reviewer: Quinnlyn Kilara (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 10
WOWser!!!!
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