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Reviews For Tropic of Virgo
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Bloody Hale

FUCK - that shit was hot.  

Loved the freak-outs on both sides when they thought they lost each other.  So cute.  

 

Best barfly jukebox tune?  Best of You by the Foo Fighters

Best ice cream shop jukebox tune?  Roam by The B52s.  All that happy pop makes a caramel milkshake super tasty.  

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Type set

The "watch me - I did" part hurt me for Bella.  

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Invited and Confused

Niice dream.  Poor Bella.  

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Dazed and Invited

Right now, I'd take anything.  N/A beer is the pits.  

 

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Visuals

Hard and smooth but too fast to enjoy the ride - AWESOME!

 

AWWW - he turned the volume down to hear her, not make her stop!

 

I kinda love that he's jealous of himself.  

 

coffee - dunkin french vanilla.  I miss it.  4 more months to go. 

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Phenomena

a sock monkey

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Opening Lines

The four-way calling, 7th grade what to wear bit cracked me up.

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:12 AM · On: First Listen

My sister has been on my ass to read this fic for AGES.  I don't know why, but I kept putting it off, "it's on the list, it's on the list," blah blah blah.   So, sorry it's taken me so long to finally read it.  

Two chapters in and I'm captivated by how this is shaping up.

Reviewer: whosthatguy (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Visuals

Ten years ago, I almost dropped out of high school to follow Ani on the road. Right after Living in Clip. I worshipped her. I loved your writing even before you brought her into the story but now I might worship you.

Reviewer: greenfirl35 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Curtain

Did you write this story from the very beginning with Possession in mind?  Because it sounds like it was written specifically for this story - I'm totally awed.  Even without B & E this story could stand alone with different characters - think about it!

Reviewer: concarr1 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Nocturnal Prelude

yes ....please:)

Reviewer: msbutterfly23 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Epilogue in Review

I could not stop reading! I felt torn everytime I had to stop! Even at work I was doing everything I could to read at every moment possible. Such a great story!

Reviewer: eglantine (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Epilogue in Review

Awesome, beautiful, amazing story. It's easily one of the best AUs I've EVER read. And when you say "Tropic of Gemini," I have to say "YES!"  

Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Hunting

Favorite leftovers...hmmm...cold pizza or lasagna or chicken & dumplins...yummy

Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 03:31 PM · On: The Goods

Kill Jessica, Fuck Lauren, and marry Angela.

Reviewer: BellaGioia (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Epilogue in Review

yes, yes!  Tropic of Gemini!  Love it. 

I seriously enjoyed your story.  Thank you so much for sharing your words - your poetry and prose - with us.  It was heart wrenching and beautiful and warm.  And I didn't write for the last chapter, but before I forget, I wanted to say that this line was totally hot:

"Alice and Rosalie left to go shopping, and I took Bella back to bed, sucked on her nipples until she was senseless, and filled her deep while she whispered my name. Twice." 

Dang.

Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Phenomena

On my keychain is a tiny music note.  It belonged to my brother.

Reviewer: BellaGioia (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Hunting

God, I've been reading and reading and not working, just to get to this point, and it's lovely.  so lovely.  and my heart is happy.  Thank you.  you're a gifted author.

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Hunting

Pizza

 

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Angles

no bulb joke.

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Party Favors

I really felt bad for Tanya.  Great job.

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Truths

Don't know.  I know its bad.

Bella rocks.

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Imps

The Boss

You kill me with your plot twists.

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Short Ended Stick

Green

I am really enjoying the ride.

 

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:15 PM · On: The Goods

Kill Loren Fuck Jessica  and marry Angela

I really enjoyed the banter in this chapter.

 

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