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Reviewer: ylimee (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Phenomena
tiff and co actually nothing as cool at bella, the thought of bella as carmen is a winner and we all know edwardo will cure her of her stage fright or maybe edward with a little of jaspers secret stash oh the fun that will come
Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Phenomena
my keychain: a pink bubble with a picture of the car I am on my way to earning!!!! I can't wait to drive for free.
I like the chapter, I can't wait for these two to actually have a conversation.
Reviewer: effward (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Phenomena
This story is all kinds of hot! I love it. I cannot wait until the next chapter.
Reviewer: Audrella (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Phenomena
Loved the shirt and I love their interactions on the net. And him whispering in her ears the color of her eyes....oh swoon! LOL. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh and a Detroit Red Wings logo and a Tony Stewart 20 LED cube light thing that my 2 yr old neph likes to play with.
Reviewer: Naelady (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:46 AM · On: Phenomena
Ah... *drools* Ok, that was wonderful. It's very cute how easy they are with each other on the blog site, but so terminally awkward when face to face. I have to wonder, however, if Bella can overcome her problem with singing in public so she can join the band. Because that would be awesome. Maybe Edward can help her with that? *batts her eyes innocently*
Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Oh, but what kind of plot would that be without the angsty bit in the middle?
(cue evil maniacal laughter here...)
Reviewer: dank (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:31 AM · On: Phenomena
Old keys I don't use anymore. Nostalgia, you can call it, on my keychain.
Reviewer: The_Reader (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Phenomena
A kubaton.
You seriously have a way with the English language!
I'm always anticipating the next line.
Reviewer: IlCantante527 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:22 AM · On: Phenomena
This story is very interesting. I like the twist. I can't wait to read more. Did you write the poetry? It's very good. =)
Author's Response: Yep, I write it...
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Opening Lines
I found the thread for this today and thank god I decided to check it out, this story is fantastic! Can't wait to read more :)
Reviewer: psychochick89 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Opening Lines
Ooh, I really like where this is going so far!
Reviewer: K_Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Opening Lines
I really love the premise for this story, definately waiting for an update.
to and answer your ?:my ex boyfriend called my eyes ice rimmed by oceans because they are a very light blue encircled by a very very deep sapphire blue.
Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Opening Lines
Believe it or not someone ones told me my eyes were dark pools of chocolate, maybe that is why I like the books!!!
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Opening Lines
Okay, I just found your fic, and read all three chapters, and am totally loving it! I love the poetry of their posts, and responses to each other, and of course I'm loving the changes you've made to the characters themselves too. And OMG the reaction to Bella's shirt was terrific! LOL
Great job so far! I'm really looking forward to reading more of this. :)
~Cat~
Reviewer: cullenXcrazyX85 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Opening Lines
That was amazing! I love the beautiful giants comment. AWW, that was so incredibly sweet. Even when Edward is checking out her boobs hes romantic. And he sang Fever; he is the perfect man. Can I please have him??
Reviewer: dank (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Opening Lines
"They're searing into my soul right now."
Reviewer: cinnamonfairy (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Opening Lines
Unfortunately I've only had....'they're green!' I love how my boyfriend seems to be just like Taylor lol.
I love the update! Keep it coming...
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Opening Lines
I don't think anyone's ever said anything fabulous about my eyes. I guess I'll have to wait for my Edward. ;)
Great chapter, can't wait to see where this is going!
Reviewer: farewelltothefairground (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Opening Lines
That chapter was amazing! I really love this story so far, and cannot wait for next chapter!
Reviewer: The_Reader (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Opening Lines
My friend always tells me my eyes remind her of Tiger Stone.
I LOVE your writing!
MM, Fever! My favorite :D
Reviewer: ylimee (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Opening Lines
ha ha 'Jasper’s epic taste in whiskey' i love a jaz that appreciates his liquer
Reviewer: childrenwith4legs (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Opening Lines
hmmm, the most fabulous thing anyone ever said about my eyes.....
When I'm sad or tired, they look like a storm coming with dark gray clouds, and when I'm happy or content, they look as blue as the ocean.
But the way you have Bella's eyes described, damn I want some brown eyes.
Great chapter.... can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Opening Lines
the most fabulous thing was my friend when we were eight ! wow i cant see your pupils! LOL. I Love it! update soon please
Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Opening Lines
well nothing like that!! LOL
seriosly your writing is trully amazing!! im in love with your lyrics and poems... and your edward is total sex... love it.
Reviewer: SoImpossible (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Opening Lines
Hot. Ohh Edward, you charmer. Sexually repressed Bella mixed with manwhore Edward should be interesting.
Just read the first few chapters tonight. I love the idea of them bonding over music. Especially that they are writing lyrics/poetry back and forth to each other anonymously online.
The Jacob mention did squick me out a little. Please, no Jacob triangle. Hate that.. plus its gotten beyond cliche. Although, giving him a wench like Lauren is totally allowed.
This story is pretty creative so I think you can avoid the pitfalls of obvious Twilight cliches. And, I know its a while off (probably) but I can't wait for Edward to break all his rules for Bella. I want him to open up to her, pick her up for school, and brand her with his letterman jacket if this was the 1950's while the rest of Forks looks on in shock. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Jacob exists... But he doesn't have green eyes.
This will get squicky in places, for there must be angst to have good plot.
Thanks for your words!
Reviewer: khhc (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Opening Lines
You know, there are stories that you wish youd come across once they were already completed...CAUSE I DONT WANNA WAIT FOR AN UPDATE!! I love it!
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