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Reviewer: dank (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
Your poetry is amazing.
He can surprise me, I'll have to watch though.
Reviewer: jonquilemm (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Opening Lines
1) This story wins. I've only read a couple that incorporate lyrics/poetry in which said lyrics/poetry are actually good. Yours are better than good.
2) How long ago did you have a betta named Max? I once knew a girl who had a betta named Max, it was about ten years ago. I'm having one of those moments.
3) Best thing anyone's ever said about my eyes (they're hazel): "I love your eyes, it's like they used to be green, but all the hot coffee you drink made them warmer."
Reviewer: K_Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
crown royal reserve and dr.pepper
Reviewer: emmettsbutterfly (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
WOW this is a great story! I love the poetryy as well as all of your musical references, you Bella is pretty kick ass too!
Reviewer: yourbrandofheroin (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
Just a nice glass of Jamesons for me.
Your writing style is gritty and real. Not superficial. A lovely break from monotony. Brava.
Reviewer: istandcorrected (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
loving this whole thing, excited for more. refreshed at your style and blend of music, writing, and teenagers
Reviewer: smile4thepaparazzi (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
ahh! this story combines my four loves, quick updates, awesome plots, great chapters, sexy frustrated/jealous/possesive edward, and music! seriously, this is one of the best stories i've ever read! i love you writing style and your characterization of both Edward and Bella is so friggin' perfect, gah! i can't even talk about it without squeling! haha, anywho, these quick updates are making me so excited, seriously, i check this site twice a day to see if you've updated! ahaha! i have a song rec, im sure you're familiar with it, but just in case you're not, i thought i'd through it out there, its: 'Time is Running Out' by: Muse. like i said, i'm sure you've read it but it just reminded me so much of this fanfiction that i had to reccomomend it! :D
please update soon, i cannot wait to read more!
Author's Response: It is a great song.
Reviewer: blazefury (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
Oooh...see this assuming thing is silly. Hahah. Teenagers. Feh. Great chappie though!
MMM. Dunno....how about a nice seabreeze.
Reviewer: yourbrandofheroin (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Opening Lines
Your eyes, brown like the earth after a hearty September rain. Dark as sin, melting into my exsistence.
That was the most fabulous thing someone has said about my eyes.
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
I like jealous, fumbling Edward in bio. He's usually so in control and cool it's nice to see him akward and then giggly. That scene is fantastic because I can completely picture it.
And the line: "Did someone put a sign on my back that says ‘I do anal’?” made me practically snort my wine out my nose!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
loved it!
Reviewer: khhc (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
SLIPPERY DICK
GREAT CHAPTER BY THE WAY....
Reviewer: istandcorrected (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:17 PM · On: First Listen
love this, I love the descriptions Edward has for Bella, the descriptions of everything in general are divine.
Reviewer: cindyxcinderella (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:15 PM · On: First Listen
i love the way you describe the feelings and everything,
its's amazing:]
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
A margarita, mostly tequila. Or just tequila.
You're my hero, by the way.
Reviewer: aqua30 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
I LOVE YOUR STORY, SERIOUSLY, IT MAKES MY BLOOD BOIL, MY HEART SCREAM, AND MY SOUL SING...... WRITE LOTS MORE!!!!!!!!! BEST OF LUCK ;)
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
Awesome story.
And pathetically enough, he'd probably just pour me a glass of water since I don't really drink! lol
Reviewer: Jalice (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Nocturnal Prelude
This is one of my favorite stories on the site! I can't wail until the next update and I hate to say it, but I love that Edward is kind of a dick. I guess It makes him seem more real... or something. Update again soon?
Reviewer: The_Reader (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
aha a fresh pina colada sounds good.
Loved this!
Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
Carolina Sunset...the best drink ever!!! Nice chapter, will you please get these two together already!!!!! You are such a tease!
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Nocturnal Prelude
I've been waiting for this to have a few chapters before starting. I'm glad I did get to it though. I wish Edward wasn't such a dick (whether you meant it or not, I think he is with using girls he doesn't care about) but overall I like the plot. Wondering how long they'll exchange poem and lyrics before meeting. Wondering if you will have them clash in person while meshing online. Better keep reading rather than merely wondering.
Reviewer: themoose-within (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
Dear god, this story is just so good. Exactly the style I love, the style that's missing from almost all the stories on this site/fanfiction universe.
For me? A nice, boring old coke and rum. Generous with the rum.
Reviewer: lv7713 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
tequila sunrise
Reviewer: thisistami (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Nocturnal Prelude
great story.
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
I could drink a case of you and still be on my feet...
love this!
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