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Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Bloody Hale

Just sending some love your way! We all want another chapter, I want to know how they up the ante in their little dart throwing contest!!! Saturday is tomorrow, hows Jake and Bella going to react to seeing each other... any love tri-angels happen...

Thanks For Writing!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Bloody Hale

Ahhhhh....she's a dart shark!! YES!! I love that!! Hmmm....my fav barfly jukebox song would have to be....Crazy Bitch by Buckcherry!! LOL! (I just realized how lame that probably is)

Reviewer: ferrisdays (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Bloody Hale

Favorite song I've ever heard while out at dives is a tie between "Lucky Ones" by Broken Social Scene & Kevin Drew and "Their Cell" by Girl in a Coma. But if we're talking what should get any good dirty bar crowd moving then it has to be any classic AC/DC song. When "If You Want Blood You Got It" comes on and bitches don't get excited it is probably time to move on.

All that aside this story is highly entertaining. The twin connection is fantastic. Can't wait to see if Edward gets his presumptuous ass handed to him

Reviewer: vampirelust7 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Bloody Hale

The 'SWAN' is in! Damn, she can sing, give witty come-backs and kick ass at darts! That's my girl! ;D

Reviewer: SottoVoce (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Bloody Hale

OMG yes yes yes! hahaha love this ending. I cant WAIT for Edward to kiss Emmett...

Ooops...uhm.... I mean to kiss Bella. ;)

Reviewer: Radical (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Bloody Hale

That was just too freakin hot. *fans self*

Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Bloody Hale

ARRGGGG!!!! Don't stop there!!!!! More please, like now!

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Bloody Hale

I loved it! I was not expecting that, who knew Bella could kick Edward's ass, haha. He just assumed she did not know how to play, that was great! Please update soon, I can't wait to know who won. My best barfly jukebox tune is "i love rock and roll", or "Born to be wild".

Reviewer: vampirelust7 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Dazed and Invited

Wow! Bella and Rosalie bond! I am speechless ;D

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Bloody Hale

HAHA!!! Way to go Bella!! Loved it!! Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: vampirelust7 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Visuals

I love this ;) It is soooo cute and so much fun. I really hope things don't get tooo bad, like in some of the other stories. it's just a shame how everyone else seems to have it so easy and then BxE have it so bad. Drama is fine but I think some people go a little overboard with these to. Story's great though and I will definately be waiting for updates, so keep 'em coming!

Reviewer: darkchyld1980 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Bloody Hale

Just started reading, and I gotta say, I LOVE the verbal foreplay you have going on here. It is awesome and sinfully delicious. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Bloody Hale

aww... little Eddy's gonna get schooled by Bella in darts.... bet no one was expecting that!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Type set

OH My Holy Fuckadoodledo!!!!!the tension was just delicious and I loved reading every word of it!!

Reviewer: Mrs_Dynamint (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Bloody Hale

"I'll Take You There"- The Staples Singers

Grrrreat Chappie! Wheee...

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Melodic

LOVED it! Loved how they just melted into eachother while they he sang!! GAH!! Cannot wait for more!~!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Invited and Confused

OH MY GOD!! Could that be any more mortifying to bella!! JEEBUS!! Have a total erotic dream in the arms of someone you like! WOW!! Cannot wait to see how they handle being around eachother!! Loved getting epov on the guys asking bella to the dance!! Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Bloody Hale

love it love it love......update soon please!

Reviewer: aqua30 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Bloody Hale

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO STOP LEAVING ME HANGING, IT DRIVES ME INSANE!!! i hope bella wins, its about time Edward gets a taste of his heroin ;) Lovedddddddd it, write soon :)

Reviewer: terrabella (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Bloody Hale

Uggh! What a cliffy!!!! You must update very very soon....I look forward every day to updates, I absolutey LOVE this story!!!! It's on my fav alert list...on my iphone....like edwards....pleeezzz?

Reviewer: Dark Fea (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Bloody Hale

Of all the cruel and unusual places to stop a chapter

Reviewer: stargrl678 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Bloody Hale

I love Edward in this Fic!! I can't wait to see who gets the balls to make the next move on the other and when they find out that they are the people they are talking to on the internet!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Dazed and Invited

OMG!! When he touched her lips!! GAH!!!! Fantastic!Loved how she and rose sang that song!! OMG!! Cannot wait to see what Edward thought!! Loved it!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Visuals

OOOH!! LOVED it!! The chemistry and the sexual tension between Edward and Bella is just yummy!!! if they only knew that they were writing to eachother!! This story is so good! I am totally hooked!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Phenomena

There are no words for how incredible that chapter was! LOVED it!!OMG!! Edward saving Bella!Them working out their sexual frustration on their own!! GAH!Nothing is better than a naked edward jacking off in the shower! Emmett was cracking me up on how he teased edward!!! Cannot wait form ore!!

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