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Reviews For Tropic of Virgo
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Ghost Stories

Beautiful.  Fucking beautiful.  Perfect chapter.

My favorite t-shirt says "Easily Distracted".  It's a joke, because I'm not easily distracted, but my twin sister is.  It's actually her shirt.  So when I wear it, everybody thinks it's funny, because here's this serious motherfucker wearing her twin sister's ditzy t-shirt.

Reviewer: LizPip (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Ghost Stories

I just got a TShirt from my frend who moved away, proclaiming the name of the vile place that stole her from me, "IOWA," so that's pretty near to my heart. But I think my Muse T-shirt, and my autographed Phantom Planet Tees take the cake!

Reviewer: MichelleVee (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Ghost Stories

Never before has darts been so hot!

My favourite T-shirt has She-Ra Princess of Power on it.

Reviewer: dracorium (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:31 AM · On: First Listen

I dont really review often, and usually only the last chapter when I come in to a story that's already started, but damn. I just wanted you to know that this story made my favorites list in 2 chapters, which for me is CRAZY.

Reviewer: aqua30 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Ghost Stories

Orlando Bloom as Will turner is on one of my fav shirts! Gahh Edward is in luv and so am i... wiith your writing. Write More, i loveeeee itv alll. ;)

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Ghost Stories

This is completely and utterly wonderful in every way. Love your poetry (it's inspired!) and the gentle, artistic way you move the story forward. Just discovered this today and now it's one of my most favorite, ever.

Please update again soon!

Reviewer: silverfaire (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Ghost Stories

my t-shirt would read:

 

I could never live in a world where you did not exist ... Yogenfruz!

Reviewer: khhc (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Ghost Stories

a big cherry

still lovin the story

Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Dazed and Invited

That WAS sex.   Awesome description of Bella finally letting loose...and with Rose no less.  Very surprising.  You are a genius.

 

Reviewer: swan_song (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Ghost Stories

A hummingbird.

 

Will they get a clue soon? Enjoying this one too much!

Reviewer: MonksMama (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Ghost Stories

Love this story. Seriously, safely in the top 5 of my list of favorites.

 

My best Tshirt says:

I gave my word to stop at third. East High Class of 1987 chastity pledge.

It's great 'cause I have a three year old son that I take everywhere with me, but was downright hilarious when I wore it pregnant!

 

Please keep up the awesome work. This story is brilliant and I love your poetry!

Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Ghost Stories

Awww....he held her hair....so sweet.  I was very happy to see an update and can't wait for the next one!!

 

My favorite t-shirt is a soft, well worn one w/my alma mater on it.

Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Visuals

I love fresh roasted coffee beans from Rwanda.  I get them from a shop downtown.  I grind them, air press myself an amazing coffee and add cream and sugar.  There is no better way to start the day except for sex.

Now,,,to review...this chapter is lovely..there is poetry throughout your writing..beautiful.

 

 

Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Ghost Stories

My favorite t-shirt says "I Love Dirt".

I wore that, jean cut off shorts and converse on  my first date with my now-husband.  He still says that was the sexiest outfit he's ever seen me in.

I love this Edward and Bella.  Definitely in my top 10.

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:20 AM · On: Nocturnal Prelude

Oh, this is wonderful! Mysterious and erotic; totally different from anything I've seen on the site. Please keep writing!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Ghost Stories

OMG!! That was just fantastic!!Loved how turned on they both were while playing darts! I was kinda pissed aty him for kissing that bitch Lauren, but at least he called out Bella's name! Loved how he reacted to Bella's kiss and I loved when she asked him "ehy he never kissed her!" OMG!! Loved it at the end when he realized he was in love with her!! Cannot wait for more

Reviewer: SecretlyObsessed (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Ghost Stories

*squeal* So amazing! I love this story. :D Great chapter!

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Ghost Stories

AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. THE BEST WAY TO END A CHAPTER! i looooooooooooooove it. update soon please

Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Ghost Stories

I love that Bella's slowly coming out of her shell with everyone, especially Edward, and that they're making progress together.

Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Ghost Stories

that was great update soonj

Reviewer: EASEmama (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Ghost Stories

My favorite t-shirts:
"English Major:  You do the math"
"National Sarcasm Society:  Like we need your support."
"Si Hoc Legere Scis Eriuditonis"  (I may have spelled that incorrectly.  The translation is:  If you can read this, you're overeducated.")

I love your story!

Reviewer: dmnsqrl (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Ghost Stories

I gotta pick one? Dang, I may have to come back to the forum (darn rl stealing my forum time) and make a list.

Reviewer: B-RizzleDizzle (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Ghost Stories

gnomes

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Ghost Stories

My favourite t-shirt is black and says "sorry, ranga" on it in orange lower case letters.

I love this chapter. They kissed! 

Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: silverfaire (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Ghost Stories

I fucking love this story.  It is agonizing to wait for it in bits and pieces.

 

 

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