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Reviews For Tropic of Virgo
Reviewer: Icydgirl (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Night Marish

I have been blessed to never ever have a hangover...

FYI...have I ever mentioned how much I hate Lauren Mallory...she is a venomous, skanky whore...and it doesn't matter which story you read her in, she is always the same bleh!!!!

Reviewer: angelvamp (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Night Marish

Edward had better have a godd explanation for this.

The only hangover cure that I've ever found to work is sleep and an ice pack, or a bag a frozen vegetables. And water. LOTS of water.

Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Night Marish

oh well that is great

Reviewer: starcrossdlover (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Night Marish

oh no. oh no oh no oh no. let me just say that i've always hated lauren, but this may just take the cake. please let someone, anyone beat that bitch down. and i know it may take a little bit, but please let this get sorted out. i can't wait for more :)

and as for my best hangover cure? silence, darkness, water and rest. and maybe some hot tea...

i just started reading this last night, by the way, and i absolutely love it. great job! :)

Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Night Marish

I am wondering if he even remembered what he did last night. I am sure bella is wondering that too.

Love this story. update soon

Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Night Marish

Fucking Mallory.  Can Tyler accidentally crush her with his minivan?

When drinking my weight in liquor every weekend was a common occurance, I would keep vitamin c tablets with me or on my nightstand and take 5-10 of those on my way home from the bar or when I got home....along with a bottle of water, tylenol and ibuprofen before going to sleep. 

I'd wake up feeling stiff, but never an inkling of a hangover. 

By the way, this story owns me.  I have 58 stories faved and I am really only looking for this one when I check for updates.  It's haunts.

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Night Marish

 

omg, what the f....??? Ok, I definitely need to read this again, and then kill Lauren, actually I may kill her first and then read...this was packed woman, my head is still a little fuzzy but I can tell you nonetheless that I absolutely loved it and I can’t wait for Edward to start wallowing in guilt any second now....

Reviewer: graceisgone (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Night Marish

i just feel so bad for the both of them. i hope i don't have to wait long for the next chapter!

oh, and my hangover cure is to stay away from liquor. if i drink beer, i won't have a hangover, no matter how much i drink. if i drink even a little bit of liqour, i am dunzo the next day.

Reviewer: alternate universe (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Night Marish

a can of coke and mcdonalds....edward is totally frustrating me by the way argh he is such an idiot and bella needs to kick some girls asses soon=) i <3 this story =)

Reviewer: TLammy24 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Night Marish

God I hope he remembers it was her, he did say her name during the act but he could have thought he was just dreaming.  Hope you can update soon, I love your story but hate the feeling I'm having right now.  When that happens I start to dread updates and wait until the story is finished before continuing.  Call me a wimp if you must but I read for enjoyment, not knots in my stomach.  Still love your writing style.

Reviewer: x-stephanie-x (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Night Marish

nooooooooooooooo!

what the hell??????

omg what a horrible cliffie!

well done with the story and keep up the super awesome work!

i can't wait til the next chapter!

-stephanie x =)

Reviewer: purple chinchilla (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Night Marish

best hangover cure?  you put lauren mallory in his bed after fucking bella and you ask that insane question?  LOL  you've got balls!!!!  hahahaha

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Night Marish

no no no no NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! o.m.g.

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 05:44 AM · On: Night Marish

OMFG!!!!!! What the HALE?!!! Please tell me that he wasn't so drunk that he knew it was Bella he slept with?! GUH!! What was Lauren doing in his bed?!! Oh Noes!!!!!!!!! Please update again soon! I LOVED this chapter

Reviewer: alicedances (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Night Marish

This is, hands-down, my favorite fic at the moment. Your writing is beautiful - it's fluid and melodic, and swells like the music featured so strongly throughout the story. It's absolutely lovely to read. The story itself is excellent - the characters lovable because of their flaws and their talents.

Generally speaking, it takes a lot to get me to gush over a story, especially fanfiction. You've accomplished it easily.

Looking forward to more! :)

Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Night Marish

NO, NO, NO, NO, you CAN'T leave us like this, OMG ! ! !

So, Edward thinks he did Lauren Last night?  This is SO messed up!  Please, Please update this soon. 

 

Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Night Marish

ohhh no!

he wouldnt

no way

poor bella!

oh god

hangover cure? while i believe that mostly you have to sleep it off...raw egg works quite well as a wake up...eugh

please please update

Oxo

Reviewer: cutekat (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 05:05 AM · On: Night Marish

OMG, I can't believe she lost her virginity that way and then see him with Lauren that would crush every woman out there. But I'm, hoping it won't be a heartbreakening crush for Bella, not now when they finally are moving forward for real in their relationship. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon, this is just to good for me to have any patience left for waiting for the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: Audrella (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Night Marish

Well he out to have fun explaining this one.  What a jerk!  Or what a biotch Lauren is...OMG.  She was probably in the bathroom the whole time, huh?  OMG.....

Reviewer: Mirabel (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Night Marish

Guess the faint light from the bathroom should've prompted some worry.

Great Santana song.

My hangover cure? Just avoid Jameson Whiskey at all costs.

Reviewer: Hollycooks (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Night Marish

love it, great story!

Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Night Marish

oh no...not good at all!  i'm going to "Assume" nothing happened with them so that i don't get pissed at edward, but i'll let you, the master writer, work it out.  great chapter!

Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Night Marish

night marish indeed...

i hate lauren mallory

Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Dazed and Invited

i don't drink but if he made me a drink i would drink something nasty for all i care :)

Reviewer: Naelady (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Night Marish

Um... oh my... *fans herself* Niiiiiiice. Verra verra nice. Although poor Edward seems to be, well... just a bit confused now. I'd like to know where the hell Lauren came from, though. She certainly wasn't there when Bella left. Now I want to know what Bella was thinking as she left the room. And what Edward will do next. It's fairly obvious that nothing happened after Bella left, but Lauren still shouldn't be there.

I liked the teaser about her liking lemony drinks. He really should have picked up on that one a little better. But then, I suppose he is still a guy, and they're oblivious like that sometimes.

Excellent, wonderful chapter as always. I especially liked the feel the run-on sentences gave the sex scene. It was like she was focusing on everything individually, and it was all blurring together at the same time.

I seem to be completely incapable of sleeping after 7am when I'm hungover. My favorite cure is three ibuprofin and stumbing back into bed for a couple hours with my cats curled up under the covers with me.

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