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Reviewer: Twinsmom (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Bloody Hale
I loved Edwards reaction to Jasper settling the whole fuck Bella issue. Too funny!
So, Bella found and excuse to kiss his cheek and it turns out shes a darts shark! :)
Reviewer: Denisechi (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Night Marish
What!!!!!! Need update soon. Why is that hag in there? Will Edward remember? Nice Lemon by the way!
Reviewer: DarkwardluvsT (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Melodic
^_^ <3<3<3
Most of the time I have leftovers from the night before. Alot of cold pizza and reheated fettucini.
Reviewer: Twinsmom (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Type set
Ta-ta is my fav. It's whimsical, cute and musical. :)
More yummy tension. I loved Bella's vision of her new friends. Edward did a good job of trying to get Bella to get over herself until he brought up seeing her. Stupid-head! Loved that Bella wondered out loud why he kept running off when things got hot.
Glad Edward was the one to catch her when she fainted. This is some major anxiety. What the heck caused it? I have stage fright too, but not to where my body shut down so completely.
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Visuals
With ice, caramel and whipped cream. Granted, it doesn't really taste like coffee at this point, but still.
Reviewer: edwardsproperty21 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Night Marish
i knewit lauren was in the bathroom wasnt she oh about the hangover cure i heard waffles but ive never feel good enough to eat when i have a hangover
Reviewer: DarkwardluvsT (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Invited and Confused
Oh. My. GAH! You are awesome and I abso-fucking-lutey LOVE this story. *squeal* XD
Yes. And I dream crazy shit. Lol. Really crazy shit.
Reviewer: Twinsmom (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Melodic
It totally humors me to think of sweet Esme smoking a joint. Too funny!
I feel like I keep repeating myself. This is great! Better than great- it's hot! I'm totally loving this. This is totally fulfilling my need to read some romantic stuff this week! I was longing right along with Bella and Edward and everyone else. You are totally wicked!
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Phenomena
Let me see...I have my car key, a key to my husband's truck, house key, office key, parents' house key, library card, petsmart card, safe key, and a piece of metal with my name in Hawaiian on it.
Love this story. Love your writing and your characters. I can't say anything more heartfelt than that.
Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Night Marish
This last chapter killed me! I can't stop thinking about it. Does he remember anything? Does he think it was Lauren or Bella if he does? Did he do anything with Lauren after Bella left? Why did Bella leave and not come back? So many questions, no answers! Please come back with more soon so that my heart doesn't explode out of my chest with anticipation!
P.S. Fantastic chapter! And IHOP with friends best cure for hangovers.
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Night Marish
Stupid lauren!!!
Reviewer: Calling_Siren (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Night Marish
Don't tell me: Edward thinks he slept with Lauren? Or Lauren made him believe it?....Oh my god, this is complicated! :)
Reviewer: Twinsmom (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Invited and Confused
Bummer! I missed out on the fav drinks chat. I know I'm late but my fav is a mix of sexy name and syrup. It's called a Buttery Nipple. Yum! It's half n half Bailey's Irish Cream and Butterscotch Schnapps. Ya know? I think I need one now. The drink that is.
Especially after reading Bellas dream. Too bad Edward chose to control himself.
On a different note, I love seeing Edwards side of Bella singing. When he went to her all the words were so charged and erotic. Loved the moment they were having there until Esme came in.
off to read! :)
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Opening Lines
"I always wanted to marry a girl with green eyes. And I did. And she's more beautiful than I imagined."
Nice. Love your story!
Reviewer: DarkwardluvsT (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
YAY! XD
He could make whatever the fuck he wanted. ^_^
Reviewer: crimsonserpent (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Night Marish
best hangover cure . . . lack of cliffhangers, I have sadness :( lol update soon
Reviewer: princessitavalevale (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Night Marish
oh no oh noo!!!
pls continueeeeeeeee sooooon!!!!!
XOXO
Reviewer: Twinsmom (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
I actually had a Java Chiller today. Liberally doused with carmel tho'. I'm a tea drinker as well. But, it has to be mellow and Southern Sweet!
OK,- the end remarks had me just rollin'! They were so delivered from Jasper to Rosalie. But, Emmett! Dude, You totally, do I dare say- nailed Emmetts character. "I feel left out" That has to be the funniest thing I've read in days! Thank you!
Reviewer: Sierra-Midnight (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Night Marish
gosh leaves me waiting for more! best hangover cure? tylenol. lots of it. and noooo light or loud noises!
Reviewer: aqua30 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Night Marish
OMFG!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO plz update soon, gosh that was so awesome and painful at the same time, feels like my heart was gonna rip out!!! Poor Bella, and no i've never had a hangover....Yet ;)
Reviewer: lv7713 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Night Marish
4 gallons of water and a sausage egg and cheese
Reviewer: like_diamonds (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Night Marish
Bacon sandwich - mmmm
Reviewer: Twinsmom (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Visuals
Again, I love the parallel to canon, while being AU.
Love that Bella is just melding in with them. I was so nice to seem them all connecting.
Reviewer: terrabella (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Night Marish
Dick's Hamburgers & very greasy fries!!!
He was out...nothing happened with Lauren, right???
Reviewer: Twinsmom (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Phenomena
Oh. My. You write tension very well. Everything was suggestive without being over done. Totally hot!
Love how Edward was listening in to the call. Loved hearing both versions. You write the poetry, right?
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