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Reviewer: MichelleLee (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Night Marish
Lots of water and cold, fresh fruit.
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Night Marish
You have to be kidding me. I...I...and they were doing so well. Your story is sexy as fuck. As far as my best hangover cure: pancakes and a Diet Coke.
Reviewer: Cullenfan (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Night Marish
Holy shit! What the hell happened? lol. So did he know it was Bella last night or not? Love the story so much! Thanks for the update. :)
Oh yeah, and my best hang over cure is always toast with strawberry jelly. For some reason the only time I crave strawberry jelly is when I'm hung over and it always makes me feel better. Odd.
Reviewer: letsgetGRAPHIC (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Night Marish
Sleep lots of it.
Reviewer: DarkwardluvsT (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Interrogation Exposition
I'm SO waiting til they find out that their literary lovers are each other. <3
Hey there Delilah. And they ran it into the ground.
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Ghost Stories
My husband's US Navy shirt that smells like him all the time, even after I wash it.
Reviewer: LauraJen (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Night Marish
I really enjoyed this chapter, but I have to ask: Will there be a pregnant Bella in this story? Just wondering. I'm neutral to baby stories.
The scene with Jasper walking in on Alice and Bella made me laugh so hard. Haha.
I'm sure Edward is VERY confused now. I hope he didn't sleep with Lauren. YUCK.
My hangover cure is a cold bath and some asprin.
Author's Response: No. No babies.
Reviewer: DarkwardluvsT (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Ghost Stories
*sigh* ^_^ im going to make a playlist of all the songs from this story. <3
ooh. thts a toughy. prolly a tie between my Joker shirt, my graphic T with crows and headphones on it and my Edward shirt.
Reviewer: dster (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Night Marish
oh...............FUCK NO! wat the hellll??!???!?! ggaaaahhhh whyyyyyyyyy???????!?!?! that was such a good cliffhanger :'(
Reviewer: MrsCullen_887 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Night Marish
ohh man i feel bad now they always have an obstacle i really like the story but i think they need a break =) pleaseeee lmao but its your story ill read no matter wat =]
Reviewer: cullengirlx (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Night Marish
I reviewed and realised i missed my hangover cure....
Paracetemol and water, lots of sleep and a milkshake!
...Still dying for your update :)
Reviewer: TwilaEveningStar (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Night Marish
I never drank anything so I don't know. And oh my goodness! Did he sleep with Lauren too? Wow, this cliffhanger is going to get me nervous for the entire week.
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Night Marish
And here, ladies, is why you never leave your drunken/horny man in abed alone during a party!
Loved it though. ANd here comes the drama
Reviewer: Twinsmom (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Ghost Stories
Hmmmm. My favorite shirt. It's a two tone brown and says "Tootsie Roll" on it. It's a comfort thing and boy is it soft!
Loved Bella and Edward playing darts- so sexy!
Glad she sang to an audience even if it was drunk. Now she knows she can.
Yeah a kiss! But, they need to do that again when she's sober. I'm glad she let it slip that Edward was her dream guy.
Reviewer: shadesofgray (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Night Marish
"oh the hazards of love. you'll learn them soon enough. the prettiest whistle won't wrestle the thistles undone.
undone."
this is what I sing in my head when I read your words.
hangover cure? bojangles bisquits or double cheeseburgers from mcdonald's.
Reviewer: Meiki (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Interrogation Exposition
Such Great Heights has been torn from me, but this story is helping the healing process nicely.
Reviewer: MarathonKeyGirl (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Night Marish
Lauren's such a stupid skank!
Update soon, please!
Reviewer: okgrdnfn (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Night Marish
WOW! Next chapter please!
Reviewer: DarkwardluvsT (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Bloody Hale
lol. I love cocky Bella. <3
Probably I'm a Creep by Radiohead.
Reviewer: Soul_mate (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Night Marish
this was a really good story so far. i love the game that edward is playing with bella, loving her and wanting to make her his own but knowing that he shouldn't. and bella seems like this poor little vixen thats got it all but doesnt know how to get what she wants. it kinda sucks that edward may not have been completly sober when they had sex. i'm a little confused at the ending of this chapter though! did he and lauren do anything?
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Dazed and Invited
A margarita. And he'd lick the rim before dipping it in salt. Damn, that is one sexy visual. Love the chapter!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Night Marish
I kinda had a feeling that Lauren would be there because the bathroom light was on. Any was that whole scene with Edward and Bella was freakin hot, and done to onw of my favorite sex songs good job.
Reviewer: pseudocullen (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Night Marish
You left quite a cliffie there... I sure hope Lauren just fell asleep and didn't do anything else with dear Eddie. Please post the next chapter soon!!
Reviewer: biz8113 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Night Marish
diet coke and mcdonald's hashbrowns.
wtf, lauren mallory? i thought she left. stupid whore.
Reviewer: DarkwardluvsT (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Type set
I wish I could stop giving you stupid "^_^" but i don't know what else to do. This is so great! and to think this was my second choice. *sigh* ur awesome.
A girl I knew of called them "stuff" (girl) and "things" (guy). It's really funny if you think of this in average conversation. "Honey, would you go get my stuff? I left it in the car." or "I have to go unpack my things." Lol. Or "let me just grab a few things." hehe
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