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Reviewer: carms89 (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Port Obvious
was bella about to cut herself? and why is alice crying? oh dear.
i really like this story
thank you for letting me read it :)
Author's Response: Bella was about to cut her hair.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Port Obvious
What's gonna happen?
I'm glad Edward knows the truth now. All he has to do is talk to her.
Please update soon?
Reviewer: Augustus Snodgrass (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Port Obvious
Oh my goodness... thank god he remembered! But now he needs to get his shiz-nit together and fix it.
In my pocket: a $20 bill from my Grandma, cause she loves me.
Reviewer: 3 little cullen boys (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Port Obvious
Wow intense, I realy didn't think I would like this story when I first begain to read it but it's by far my favourate. Great writing love the raw emotion!!
Reviewer: meimei42 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Port Obvious
Cough drops are in my pocket.
Oh no! Whats wrong with Alice? Why is she crying!!?? I'm so glad Edward figured it all out. I hope he makes things right but not without a little drama first. Excellent chapter. I vert much enjoyed it.
Reviewer: sassy98200 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Port Obvious
debit card, money, and ma phone! Great chapter...I hope Alice tells Bella!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Port Obvious
oh crap...it wasn't Alice who drugged everyone, was it?? no way...I thought it was James, but then he'd have kept Bella from going to Edward's room. I'm so confused! And Edward better apologize to Bella next chapter!!
Reviewer: bubbadoghouse (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Port Obvious
A cigarette lighter because I am a closet smoker. I love this story almost as much as my smokes! This is my favorite story right now and I am very picky. Keep it up! Please let this be cleared up soon. I feel so badly for her.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Port Obvious
I really hope that all this gets worked out soon. Update fast please.
Reviewer: JESSABELLA (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Port Obvious
I love this story.. I hope nothing happened to Edward. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: misyx (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Port Obvious
SO good. This is my absolute favorite. Keep up the fanschmastic writin.
Reviewer: letsgetGRAPHIC (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Port Obvious
My work schedule and 15 cent
Reviewer: alie (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Port Obvious
THE RING TO RULE THEM ALL!!! But it wasn't really a question, though it does distract Gollum enought that Bilbo DID get away...lol
I have lint in my pockets if that's what you were wondering...Can't wait until next chapter. :D
Reviewer: Vess (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Port Obvious
You need to update more often! <3 this story ... reminds me of me in high school.
Reviewer: CherBella (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Port Obvious
ArrRRgggHH!!!! So many things happening in this chapter making me crazy!! In a good way... :) So glad Edward finally figured evrything out, I'm guessing Alice and Jasper are going to fill Bella in on what's really been going on. I can't believe Edward didn't try to rip James's throat out for what he said to him in the bathroom.
So much good writing... I loved Edward/Debussy_88's poem, I loved Bella's whole internal monologue in the car with Charlie:
he looks at me like he’s been lost at sea for a year, and I’m dry land, but I knew what I was doing, and I got what I wanted, and I’m not going to cry because I wear big girl pants now.
I love Melissa Etherdige's whole first album, great song choice... and quite appropriate that Bella didn't have the same musical connection with James. I love how she described that she felt guilty and it was wrong.
No pockets, I'm wearing PJs. :)
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Port Obvious
Good Lord...can this get anymore fucked up? Edward better get his shit together and talk to Bella! This whole situation has got to get rectified!
E/N answer: my phone
Kathy M.
Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Port Obvious
Uh oh....what's Alice wanting to talk about w/B???
Reviewer: AcidAngel (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Port Obvious
Cellphone. Chapstick. Bobby pins. Call me pragmatic, I guess.
This chapter is lovely. This storyline has me totally involved. If all fan fic was this good, I'd never get anything done. Lovelovelove. And lots of it.
Reviewer: starlit (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Port Obvious
OMW what a cliffie!!! Will anxiously await your next update - aaaagh!!!!
Reviewer: StarryStarryNight (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Port Obvious
OMG Im so conflicted right now, I can't tell if I'm ecstatic that this is updated or horribly depressed that there is not another chapter up. Thank God he finally realized what happened!!! I can't wait for them to talk it out. I just hope that whatever happens Bella realizes how he feels about her.
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Port Obvious
My literal pocket? Nothing except the 5 I stole from my aunt and will prob give back cause I don't deal well with guilt.
I hope Edward can fix this...
Reviewer: nemo (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Interrogation Exposition
I am really enjoying reading your story. You've got great voice when you write.
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Port Obvious
I cannot tell you how hot I think this story is and can't wait til they find out about who they've been writing to.
Reviewer: aqua30 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Port Obvious
I have Edward Cullen in my pocket, u noe travel size for anywhere anytime (wink,wink) ;) OHhhhhhhhhhhh plz Let all be right b/w Edward and Bella, but i want bella to play hard 2 get, just so he can work that brain of his :) write soon, this is by far the best fanfic on this website, i MEAN it, it..... DaZzElS me!!! :)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Port Obvious
OH SO SAD........................................Poor Bella..................Poor Edward- I hope you get things fixed and straightened out next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!I am really loving your story..................
I'm hoping you don't wait too long before they realize they are text buddies:)
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