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Reviewer: NyteRock (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Port Obvious
I love this story. In all honesty it's got to be one of my favorites, probably my *absolute* favorite. I love your writing style and how you get into the characters head. The confused, jumbled thoughts that come out in your writing are amazing and accurately portray a teenagers thoughts. I know I never had clear cut, grammatically correct thoughts when I was in high school, haha.
Currently in my pocket: a half used tube of Blistex, $0.12, my motorcycle keys and my iPod
Reviewer: TwilaEveningStar (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Port Obvious
In my pocket, I have a Burt's Bees chapstick, $2.25, and my house keys. Love the drama in here and I am so excited for the next chapter.
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Port Obvious
i love this story. so finally edward has discovered he slept with bella. omg, they didnt use condoms. they are both clean, but is bella pregnant ? ooh, u need to update soon
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Port Obvious
my pocket contains my purple slim zippo and the other has my blackberry :) Yay for Eddie finally figuring it out... and poor bella... can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Reviewer: jdogggz (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Port Obvious
I've just found this story today and I don't know what to say. It's exquisite. I suddenly feel like I'm in high school again, pouring out my emotions on the keys. I don't know what to say that would be high enough praise but wow.
Reviewer: ValiantxChild (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Port Obvious
Pajama pocket = a little bit o' air, and this pinkish white stuff(?) that resembles lint. That (?) made me laugh, hardcore.
Chapter made my heart clench and play skip but that CEN made it almost perfect; if only there were a bit more, or another chapter already up. Now that; that would make my day and be as close to perfect as perfection can be perfect. Each chapter has left me hanging and wanting but now, I'm just begging for more!
Reviewer: Icydgirl (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Port Obvious
today...nothing...but usually I have hair clips or something that my kids leave laying around the house in there...
Reviewer: Pkullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Port Obvious
Oh my God! I love this story - it is completely engrossing and poetic and so well written. Thank you and please keep going!
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Port Obvious
Change....always loose change in my pockets!! It's rather annoying at times!! LOL!
Great chapter! I'm glad Edward figured out the mystery that was plaguing him about Saturday night! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: melbourne-cullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Port Obvious
ooo where did edward go?? what is alice upset about?? what do her and jasper want??
so many questions!!
can't wait for next chapter
oh and took edward long enough to figure something out that he already knew
bella and edward are slowly starting to see glimpses of each others internet personas come out into real life...it's getting interesting!!
Reviewer: Shanabella (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Nocturnal Prelude
Incredible...the words spiral like music to me - sometimes I can almost feel the words pulsing with life as I read them. The life and heart of the words is why I love this so much and why it completely captivates me. Sometimes I'll be sitting somewhere and a line will run through my mind and I'll just smile. This is how beautifully affected I am by your story. The passion is tangible and rich, the speech perfectly uncensored and the emotions raw. Thank you.
- Shanabella
Reviewer: teenagain (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Port Obvious
Love this story! ..so well written... I know I sound kind of pathetic, but please don't take too long to do the next chapter..
Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Port Obvious
oh my god
SO GOOD!
seriously amaaazzzinnnng
loved it
cant wait for more
tonnes of things constantly in my bag, but my pocket always always carries a chapstick
Oxo
Reviewer: tuff-duck (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:01 AM · On: Port Obvious
oooohhhh!!!! whats going onnn??? alice, crying???
gahh,, edward the dumbass. no offence. at least no he's finally understanding whats going on.. he needs to straighten things outtt!!!!
in my pockets: sometimes my cell phone.. or nothing.. or my buss card... but usually nothing.
update soooooon!! :)
Reviewer: cummingsismyhomeboy (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Port Obvious
in my pocket: half a line from a sonnet and no will to finish it.
Reviewer: SecretlySeverus (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Port Obvious
And here I thought Bella realized what was going on! Wow... glad Edward finally got his head out of his @$$ and figured it out! Thanks for the quick update...can't wait to find out what Alice wants to talk about and how Edward fixes this!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Port Obvious
OME, I thought it was going to be Edward at the door! He finally pieced together that night! It's about time. Now he needs to get that CD from James and destroy it! Also, they need to figure out who each other are.
Reviewer: childrenwith4legs (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Port Obvious
Woww... nice cliffie!!! I cannot wait to see what Alice & Jasper have to say! I'm on the edge of my seat with this story, it's just absolutely awesome. You're writing is wonderful and your imagination ROCKS!
My pocket is being filled up with one stick of chapstick!
Reviewer: TRIsarahTOPS (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Port Obvious
No pockets...sweat pants...earlier I had a cell phone, chap-stick, movie ticket, and lighter
and a rocket... :D LOL!
Reviewer: dank (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Port Obvious
Melted chocolate and old pieces of a good time.
It always frustrates me with how we always get tangled up in each other wires, misleading ourselves and others because it's so hard to be direct and straightforward, or at least honest. Edward and Bella have always been a good example of this frustrating human condition, your two are almost perfect.
Wonderful writing ;)
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Port Obvious
This is so totally unique and wonderful. Love the poetry. Love how you are spooling out the story, a little bit at a time. Every paragraph moves the plot forward. Terrific writing!
Reviewer: khhc (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Port Obvious
rubber band and a tampon....?
Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Port Obvious
There's so much going on in this chapter, I love it! I hope you update soon, I'm dying to know why Alice was crying. E&B need to talk to one another asap, before shit get more complicated.
I have my cellphone in my pocket.
Reviewer: vampirelust7 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Port Obvious
Well I read this chap already on ff, but I love it so much that I read it twice ;P I do hope Alice and Jasper clear some things up for her so she can get out of her self loathing, but what's a girl to do when her heart is broken and she thinks she's just a side piece?
In my pocket right now...let's see...Stirde gum, of course, my flash drive for work, Blistex, 3 quarters for the juke box in the diner I'm going to for lunch and dental floss for after my meal.
Reviewer: coffee_for_closers (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Port Obvious
what's in my pocket: starburst lip balm. every time my kisses taste like candy.
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