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Reviewer: yourbrandofheroin (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Lost Angeles
Wake Up-Coheed & Cambria or Calling You-Blue October
Reviewer: Lanemyer (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 12:14 AM · On: Lost Angeles
Well when you wrote about playing Elton because people would know it; it made me sing Your Song through the whole chapter in my head. Your Song is the only gushy love song I can think of at the moment now. Strangely good song though, don't mind a little Elton. In v. small doses though.
Reviewer: crimsonserpent (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Lost Angeles
Actually . . . Not that Cure song . . . but Just Like a Dream . . . when I was young, I swore one day I would marry Robert Smith, now I wonder at my taste . . .
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Lost Angeles
Oh, I love this, thanks for fixing things between them. Am looking forward to lots more SEX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Gushy love song.............Hmmm............."Things We Said Today" The Beatles
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Lost Angeles
I love this story. The way you write all the angst, and close encounters and the friction between Bella and Edward is amazing. I can't wait for the update.
Reviewer: opal2084 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Lost Angeles
Yay, one step closer to clearing up all those misunderstandings. My heart was literally aching for Bella's mistaken beliefs about Edward's actions. Now I only await the truth about the blog posts or cyber courting thing... Great job once again.
A few possibilitis for your question though. I'm a little unsure about what qualifies as "gushy." For straight up sweetest and earnest sentiments in a lyric would probably be Something by The Beatles. But the likes of a saccharine cavity-inducing sapfest qualifying for secret shame status in your Ipod would be How Deep is Your Love by The Bee Gees or Edwin McCain's I'll Be.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Lost Angeles
Great chapter. I'm glad they talked and figured out everything. The kiss was amazing. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: carms89 (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Lost Angeles
ooh i liked that chapter.. i would like to hear what alice said to bella though..
MY fav love songs... that maybe aren't quite so mainstream :)
our love by the bee gees
todo cambio by camilo
another number by jason manns
.... i think that they need to work out some serious ISSUESSS yikes.
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Lost Angeles
This is beyond wonderful. I adore your writing!
Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Lost Angeles
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
omggg so cute!!
thank god theyre all good
gushy love song? dont really have one
cant wait for more
Oxo
Reviewer: bacmel79 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Lost Angeles
awesome chapter!
I like "Love Song" , but "Love you to Death" - Type o negative has scentamental (sp?) value to me as a gushy love song.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Lost Angeles
Awesome chapter. I was afraid that Edward wasn't going to see Edward for a moment. Bella and Edward getting into that fight was pretty scary but it was preety awesome when Bella was fighting back too.
It seems that now these two are going to start and work things out. Yay! It's about time that they work things out and start dating. I can't to see when they find out that they've been commenting on poems they have been writing.
Please update soon? I can not wait to read more!!!!
Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Lost Angeles
That's all kinds of awesome - not only is Bella getting better about singing in public (which is f-ing fantastic!), but they're working things out between them. I would like my very own Piano-playing!Edward to take home with me, but I'll have to just make do with reading him here.
Love Song works for me - I also like I Will Follow You Into the Dark by Death Cab for Cutie - not sure it's a gushy love song, but the sentiment is there.
Reviewer: carolinacrc (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Lost Angeles
gah!!!
"the very thought of you"- it makes me melt.
Reviewer: LauraJen (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Port Obvious
Wow, that chapter was so sad...but I loved it! So emotional!
Update soon.
Reviewer: redk9 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Port Obvious
Seriously. This is my favorite story ever. I am new to this, only reading so far. I've never posted a review before. But this story is fantastic. You better actually finish it...don't leave me hanging! Really good writing, fantastic dialogue and characters. More! Please!
Reviewer: JexMorgan (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Port Obvious
What’s in your pocket?
lint. usually my cellular phonotic device
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Port Obvious
Oh Edward!
Looking forward to next chapter:)
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Port Obvious
Great chapter. I'm so glad Edward's figured it out. Now he just has to fix it. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:56 PM · On: Port Obvious
I love how you portray high school so well. Its like a timewarp! It's like I'm back in high school when I read this fic. I keep thinking why don't they just talk, tell each other their feelings? And then I remember they're young and stupid, and I forgive them everything for that. It's weird. Anyway update again soon!
Reviewer: gigi (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Port Obvious
Oh my. I just finished this after reading every spare moment I have had today, and I am so in love with this story. Your writing is so lyrical and descriptive, and I could drown in it. I can't believe that now I have to wait for more, and I will eagerly! Great job. I adore this one.
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Interrogation Exposition
I want to start answerig your woderful questions on the bottom, but I can't do it until I am caught up. I usualy do not reply until I have read it all, but I have to say that you have a way with words that is amazing. There are so amny great one liners that I have to tell my husband...he actually enjoys them too..even if they are Twilight based! ;) Now back to reading.
Reviewer: DarkwardluvsT (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Port Obvious
Awww, stupid Edward. Stupid drugged horny Edward. He makes me shake my head. Poor Bella. Dang it. Oh well, I know that everything will turn out super. ^_^
Ultra fine point Sharpie, pack of 5 gum, and a bobby pin straddling the rim of my jean pocket.
Reviewer: effward (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Port Obvious
I just love this story. I have been reading it since day one.
It his all kinds of awesome, and I do not want it to end.
I love the E-mail between the two. Yours words are awesome.
Reviewer: Naelady (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Port Obvious
Oh yes, Edward, because running away is going to help, soooo much. Pffft. ... I guess we'll have to see where he's running to, before I mentally bitch-slap him again. At least he remembers that he slept with Bella now. Not that that helps him much, since he doesn't remember her willing and very active participation and instigation.
Bella's moving to a New Moon-level of funk. Please please please don't let it get that far? Please? *sad kitteh eyes* Although, since Alice and Jasper are intervening (I think) it might not.
I'm one of those people that has lots of things in my pockets. I always have nail clippers, a pocket knife, chapstick (Bert's Bees!), my cell, and a small notebook somewhere about my person and distributed among three of my four pants pockets.
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