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Reviewer: opal2084 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Balancing Act
Beautiful. I think Edward's adequately made up for his fuckery. Nice. And hot too.
Strawberry Cheesecake Ice Cream by Haagen Daz
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Balancing Act
That was so satisfying on sooo many levels! Your writing continues to rock me. Thank you for giving us the "big one" like no one else could. Thank you, thank you for an AWESOME chapter.
As for ice cream: Jamocha Almond Fudge, what's not to love?
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Balancing Act
I Love Temple of the Dog, especially "Say Hello 2 Heaven"
Reviewer: bryantjess (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Balancing Act
Rocky Road when i'm feeling indulgent, vanilla when I just want ice cream, chocolate when I need to talk about stuff with my girlfriends and coffee when fmy world is in an uproar.
Reviewer: mopstyle (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Balancing Act
wow. that was intense. fresh glorious fire. beautiful.
Reviewer: ipunchedawerewolfintheface (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Lost Angeles
I forgot to tell you that you win like a jillion points for using Love Song by Anberlin. One of my favorite songs by one of my favorite bands. :)
You = WIN.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Balancing Act
Rum Raisin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!So Very Sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SO SO SO Romantic...To see Edward in LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: vanessarae (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Balancing Act
Now that is the proper way to f*ck a girl.
Cake Batter from Cold Stone Creamery is my fave. Mix in some rainbow sprinkles and you are golden.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Balancing Act
That chapter is beyond perfection. I absolutely loved it and that was one of the hottest most sensual lemons that I have ever read!! Cannot wait for more!
Reviewer: libra girl (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Nocturnal Prelude
Love it...and I am drawn in :)
Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Balancing Act
Cookie dough. Definitely. I just love the little chunks. You?
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Balancing Act
***sigh*** i really REALLY love this story. can't wait to see where you go with them next!
Reviewer: Proffy (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Balancing Act
I wish the word gorgeous had more syllables so it would be enough to describe your writing in this chapter.
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Port Obvious
Great chapter. So glad Edward figured out what happened. Hope they talk it out soon. I don't like James. He seems weasely (not sure if that's a word, but that's what I think of him) and I have a feeling he could be the roofie guy.
Right now, my Ipod Touch is in one pocket and my cell phone is in the other.
Reviewer: MarathonKeyGirl (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Balancing Act
Strawberry.
Though I love the unicorns and rainbows, we need some type of angst :).
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Complicated
This chapter made me a little sad. Hopefully all of the misunderstandings will be resolved soon. Getting a glimpse into Edward and Carlisle's relationship was very interesting. How sad that Bella and Edward never even kissed! Still loving this story though. I really love your style of writing- your descriptions of things, and how sometimes your sentences run on and on, like how you would really think or talk. And especially your lyrics and poems between Bella and Edward online.
Not sure if it's silly or not, but I guess I would have to say Phish's cover of Gin and Juice.
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Night Marish
Oh no!! How the heck could he wake up with Lauren???? Before that happened, I was loving this chapter! Although I found it strange that she left him afterwards.
Who knew taking off socks could be so sexy?? Bella and Alice's relationship is awesome. When I think about it, my real friends are the ones I don't feel awkward taking a bath with or in front of. :) I hope Edward didn't do what I think he did. Have to read now and find out.
Peppermint tea with toast or greasy drive-thru breakfast meals, depending on just HOW hungover I am.
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Interrogation Exposition
Great chapter! I am really loving this story and you are a fantastic writer. I can't decide whether I want them to discover the link between their online alter egos or not. Either way, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Interrogation Exposition
Great chapter! I am really loving this story and you are a fantastic writer. I can't decide whether I want them to discover the link between their online alter egos or not. Either way, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Ghost Stories
WOW. Fantastic chapter. I thought the darts game was ridiculously hot, as was their kiss. So glad Bella didn't freak out over the Lauren thing. And go Bella for singing in public, even if she was all hopped up on moonshine. Moonshine is NO JOKE! Loved that she told him he was the one she was dreaming about. Can't wait to see what happens next!
My fave tee is either my Donna Martin Graduates t-shirt, or my Bayside Tigers Cheering t-shirt. Can't decice.
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Bloody Hale
LOL at the messages back and forth this chapter!! Still love jealous Edward- how he got Mike off the table. Can't wait to see how the dart game plays out. Great chapter!
Big fan of Bon Jovi- Living on a Prayer and Rick Springfield - Jesse's Girl for the jukebox tunes.
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Type set
Oh, and I prefer hoo-hah or lady bits. Worked in labor and delivery for a few years and hoo-hah was always popular.
And I guess "junk" or "package" for guys. Don't know why.
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Type set
Great chapter. This line really hit me- I was his, whether he wanted me or not. Jerk. I guess it just reminded me of past relationships.
After five years- really pulled at me, gave me goosebumps, had a tear in my eye. Awesome poem.
Loved how the chapter ended too. I give Bella credit for her willpower. If Edward had said that to me, there's no way I could have made myself get out of the car!! Great writing! Loving this story!
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Melodic
LOVED it! This is definitely becoming one of my favorite stories. The part where they sat together on the piano bench and Edward sang was fantastic.
We usually have chocolate chip or blueberry pancakes on Saturdays. MMmmm.... now I'm hungry.
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