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Reviewer: BellaWillow (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Balancing Act
Chocolate Chip Mint. The best of both worlds in my opinion.
The chapter moved me :)
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Balancing Act
Can we just have a resounding "AWWWWWWWW"?????? I love this story it's so angsty with a side order of angst and a dash of sexy sexiness. LOL Sorry I didn't review for every chapter (I will of course from here on out :) ) but I honestly just inhaled this story when I found it. So therefore, you need to update soon- so I can dutifully review, of course.
Reviewer: JEM1979 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Type set
Your words just inspired the most raw, emotional and personal poem I have ever written. Thank you.
Reviewer: vampire-romance (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Balancing Act
chocolate =]
its so cute hehe
Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Balancing Act
Their moment was so beautiful, so perfect. Exactly how it should have been at the first time.
Loved this chapter, but I always do... each one of them.
Ice cream flavor: Coffee
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Balancing Act
Wonderful, funny, touching, erotic. You are gifted!
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Ghost Stories
SHIT SO GOOD
Reviewer: darkchyld1980 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Balancing Act
Chocolate Chip Cookie Dough! And that was one hot chapter. And awesome on top of that! Keep it up. When will they realize that they have been talking each online?
Reviewer: TRIsarahTOPS (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Balancing Act
Raspberry Sorbet.......Imagine whirled peace (Ben & Jerry's)....Rcky Road......Strawberry (Breyer's)
I'm undecided
Reviewer: Luvrgrl0520 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:53 PM · On: First Listen
Yes please..........and going!!!!
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Balancing Act
Mint choc chip. That was fuckgoood, though a little technical. I still can't wait until they find out about each other...
Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Balancing Act
Bryers: Very Cherry Chocolate Overload...ambrosia of the gods!!!!!!!
Maggie Moo's Banana Beach is also to die for!!!
But then again I have a huge ice cream problem!!!! HUGE!!!!!
I love this story, please update soon!!!!!!!
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Balancing Act
I really enjoyed this chapter. I was very glad that they were able to make up for the past and start again even better.
Also, my favorite flavor is cookie dough.
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Balancing Act
Happiness! I can't tell you how excited I am for the happiness!! Now, I'm anxious to find out how they will do as a couple- no need to drown them again, there is still plenty of story without anguish in the love department. Like Bella getting over her stage fright and will they ever figure out that they are each others online soul mates.
Strawberry Cheesecake Ben and Jerry's...
Reviewer: AcidAngel (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Balancing Act
My heart is all flip-floppy in a good way from this chapter. Clearly I can't write anything eloquent in a review of this because it would always pale in comparison, so I've given up and written "flip-floppy" instead. This story and this chapter are so good. So beautiful and sweet and lovely and sexy and romantic and wonderful. You are fantastic.
I guess I'd have to say cookies and cream, or maybe plain old vanilla for the ice cream flavour.
Reviewer: JEM1979 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Phenomena
My key chain: A silver fortune cookie.
Reviewer: Luvrgrl0520 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Nocturnal Prelude
Definatly keep going
Reviewer: wanderingstill (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Balancing Act
Choco-chip cookies dough...
Excellent chapter, once again! :D
Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Balancing Act
ice cream with nuts.. no really!
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Balancing Act
Just fucking ghuh. I wasn't happy with the do-over until he decided to do it how it should have been rather than repeat how it was. I was no better than Ordinary_Girl’s pretty boy, taking a virgin without any finesse at all. There was no reason to have the second time lack finesse as well. Then it was lovely and what she deserved. She also deserves the words though. I still think he needs to verbally explain the morning after wrong girl convo - that he has wanted her thought he had Tanya and was telling her he thought he'd screwed up. Beyond the need to to clarify the past, she still doesn't know he likes her. She's thinking it may be a repeat of a one night stand (the sing with me at the end). They both need to at least admit they like each other. I can wait for them to find out they are text buddies, but they need to know in person that it's more than a fuck. And like him thinking he was no better than Ordinary_Girl’s pretty boy I expect they will start noticing more similarities.
Reviewer: hwimsey (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Balancing Act
I think that is singularly the most staggering, amazing, poetic sex scene I've ever read. I've just found this story, feathers_mmmm rec'd it to me. I'm speechless -- if there is any justice in the world, please tell me you have published your own work somewhere, and if not, you must. It's a sin to keep this here -- work like this needs to be in a book, out there, to be seen by everyone and anyone.
Truly awe inspiring. Thanks for letting us into that staggering brain of yours. H.
Reviewer: JESSABELLA (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Balancing Act
Hot, Hot, Hot!!!!! Loved the chapter, you are awesome. Update soon please.
Reviewer: Icydgirl (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Balancing Act
My favorite is Ben and Jerry's Chocolate Fudge Brownie or the Half Baked...yummy yummy in my tummy
And I had forgotten about "In your eyes" by Peter Gabriel...yet another mushy love song that makes me melt....I can always see John Cusak with his boombox in "Say Anything"
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Balancing Act
Mint Chocolate Chip is my most favorite ice cream. However, if they ever made EAC ice cream, I might have to switch! LOL Loved the chapter, that is exactly how their first time should've been.
Reviewer: CherBella (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Balancing Act
Awww... finally, finally, they are together (and no one's drugged :). Beautiful chapter made even more perfect by ending it with the beautiful words between them as OG and DB.
Favorite ice cream--Ben adn Jerry's Chocolate Fudge Brownie
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