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Reviews For Tropic of Virgo
Reviewer: octoberiste (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Night Marish

i think i might be really mad at you. grr. lauren? :-) *deep breaths*

Reviewer: mclaire (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Unconfessional

Good day by the dresden dolls

 

cant wait for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Unconfessional

Great chapter. Poor Bella. That's brutal! Hope things work out. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Unconfessional

"Hit the Floor" by Linkin Park

It's truely ironic that they love it each even more than they know because of their secret "chats".  I know love is blind, but really people, get a clue!  Edward, man up and take proper care of these female who have given you everything.  Bella, don't take any crap because you feel like you aren't what her deserves.

I LOVE this story more than words can say, but sometimes I just want to smack the characters around a little to get their attantion!  Update soon!  Your writing gives me warm fuzzies and I can never have too many of those.

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Unconfessional

I don't know what it is but you write the sexiest stuff. I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: EMILIE00 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:33 AM · On: Unconfessional

excellent

Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Unconfessional

"His hands lay on the black slab table, pale in the dark, and I was fascinated by the masculinity of them; broad palms with heavy wrists, long fingers with blunt tips. A few wisps of bronze hair ran along the outside edge, and I wanted to trace my own finger along them to feel the texture. The knuckles on his right hand were scraped, and the middle one was slightly discolored. They were a musician's hands, a fighter's hands, a lover's hands and they defined him."    

Beautiful descriptive paragraph. 

I don't have an "angry" song, as how can one be angry when listening to music?

I have "sing screaming" songs which are those ones I scream in the car while driving around...Beth Hart's Broken and Ugly and Tracy Bonham's Mother Mother.

 

Reviewer: SecretlySeverus (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:01 AM · On: Unconfessional

Wow... I have a very strong desire to punch the other girls in the face myself!  I hope Bella & Edward can find a solution that doesn't involve Edward ignoring Bella "for her own good"

In college my angry song was "She hates me" by Puddle of Mudd... and I've yet to replace it

Reviewer: dazzled22 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:52 PM · On: Unconfessional

i'm having a hard time with Edward letting her get so fucked with at school.  it's awful.  why doesn't anybody help her?!  why doesn't she stand up for herself?!  c'mon, Bella!  i want her to bitch slap somebody or punch them in the mouth.  or Edward to tell those bitches off.  

i do love your story, don't get me wrong!

Reviewer: TwilaEveningStar (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Unconfessional

My angry song is I Hate Everyone by Get Set Go.

Reviewer: Kenzerr (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Unconfessional

I don't really have any angry songs... When I'm angry, I'm just really upset. And when I'm upset, I listen to Secondhand Serenade.. It never helps, it just makes me cry more. But ususally I just need to get it out.

I lovelovelovelovelove this story. I really hope you update soon. :)

Reviewer: Naelady (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Unconfessional

Ah, Edward's reputation is biting him, and thus Bella, in the ass.  Would not have been a problem without his famous "rules" and his habit of laying almost anything that walks, but oh well. They'll get through it. He's going to have to jump through some major hoops to convince her that he's serious, though. And probably will have to have Emmett help him punch a few people.

 

I don't have a single favorite angry song, but I tend to listen to a lot of Staind, Linkin Park, and Shinedown when I'm angry.

Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Unconfessional

Tori Watress... really really

Can I tell you that I love you for writing this? because I do.

Reviewer: zimphella (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Unconfessional

"Kiss Off" by the Violent Femmes......it really helps me work out the anger

Reviewer: StarryStarryNight (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Unconfessional

I so wasn't expecting this chapter! I guess I wasn't thinking about how Edward was going to react to everything happening. I guess I was just excited that soemthing real was happening between the two of them. My heart is still breaking for Bella....eveyone is being so horrible to her, I just really hope she proves them all wrong and is different for Edward than the rest of the girls.

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Unconfessional

Girls can be so mean and ruthless sometimes.  Edward better grow a few and just tell them how it is!  Bella doesn't need to take this crap!

Reviewer: dylansmommy06 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Unconfessional

So i feel like a DORK i sat down and Read this whole thing lol NOT WANTING TO DO anything until i finished it.... BUT THEN i got to this point and NOW i am ("PATIENTLY") WAITING for the rest.... Great story KUDOS to you

Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Unconfessional

Poor Bella taking shit from those bitches. Edward needs to straighten their asses out.

One of my favorite angry songs is "You Oughta Know" by Alanis Morrisette.

Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Unconfessional

Great chapter.  Glad that Alice made Edward see what was really going on.  There's nothing worse than jealous girls.  Loved Emmett's lunchroom scene and the end in Mr. Banner's class.  Can't wait for more.  LOVING this story! 

Pearl Jam's Evenflow has always been my angry song. 

Reviewer: angelvamp (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Unconfessional

I'd feel bad for Bella getting harrassed so much, but I think having Edward more than makes up for it :-) It would be fun to have a chapter where she gets back at Jess and Lauren somehow.

Fav angry song = My Life in the Knife Trade by Boysetsfire

Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Unconfessional

Lust A Prima Vista by the Spill Canvas

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Unconfessional

Totally Fucked (from Spring Awakening)

Great chapter...poor Bella...she has no idea what's going on.  Maybe Edward just needs to take her in the middle of the lunch room? :)

Reviewer: dandyangie (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Unconfessional

anything by Tool

Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Unconfessional

I've got to say that this was Emmett at his very best, EVER!  Breaking into a "STOMP"  routine to take everyones attention off of Bella warmed my soul to Emmett in a way no other story has.  I'll never look at monkey man the same way again.  You continue to excite and never cease to amaze.  Update soon please...

Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Unconfessional

Cry Me a River -Glen Hansard

I still can't wait till they put two and two together!

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