I am absolutely in love with your story and your poetry. Although people use the designation "AU" all the time, most of them are kidding themselves.  You, however, have really created a universe of your own here, and I have been living in it since I discovered your story yesterday.

I love the complexity, the creativity, the not shying away from hard things.  It is a beautiful piece of work and I will be waiting with great anticipation for the last chapter.

BTW - thought this opinion is too late to count, Alanis Morisette's first album does angry quite well for me.  And from my misspent youth, Patti Smith.  Ha - now you know I'm old.

Walking in memphis

Song while doing the dishes? Hmm... that's a touch decision. Probably Green Day songs. Most recently, Peacemaker off of their new album. :D Awesome chapter! Looking forward to more!

"You don't know how long i've waited for you" Twilight keychain

I read about this story on The Dominant thread,i gotta say i've just finish this chapter and i am not dissapointed.

i have felt every description every word as if it was happening to me,u have a way with words that pulls you in.

Will keep on reading,i'll review more when i finish reading the rest,or maybe in between chapters if one in particular gets to me more.

Bye for now,u will hear from me later.

Usually, just the scream of "Son get your ass in bed now!!!!"

Usually whatever song is on the radio...

I am really enjoying your story! I just came across it this evening and I have read it nonstop.

I am completely in love with this story! I found it yesterday afternoon (having avoided it b/c I am more of a Bella/Jasper girl) and started reading it at home on my Blackberry. I read until I couldn't keep my eyes open any more and my husband was grumbling about 'that damned phone'. Then I got to work at around 7:30 this morning with the intention of reading until everybody else got here. I have been unable to stop! (Shh...don't tell my boss!)

You are absolutely awesome! I am not a fan of poetry, but you have inspired me. I've been having serious writer's block on both my Twilight fic and my novel and I think some short poems might be just the thing I need. You've given me hope!

And, to answer your question, lately it's been Kryptonite by 3 Doors Down that I've been singing while I load the dishwasher.

While doing the dishes?

Ghost by Indigo Girls.  I'm a sucker for lesbian rock.  ; )

 

awwwwww
they're in love
gorgeous couple, and i hope whatever im sure James has planned isnt too bad
currently i end up dancing to Elevator by Flo-Rida
don't know why,
its just got a catchy tune i suppose
Oxo

I burn in her fire
I’m tortured to ash,
By the pain of desire
And the grace of the lash.

What beautiful poetry!  It's very touching and appropriate and brings me even more into the story/characters, if that's even possible at this point.  And I love Edward's internal dialogue when he's talking to Charlie! haha!  Great job, thanks for the quick update!

Can't wait for the next chapter. 

I burn in her fire
I’m tortured to ash,

Gawd that's awesome..beautiful and hot. :)

Oh poor Edward and Jasper and the rest of the band. I loved Jasper and Edward's reaction when they realized she was only doing that song for Charlie.

And speaking of, although you describe it all so well, I'm really wishing they were real and we could hear them really singing and playing, LOL.

Loved the scene between Edward and Charlie too.

Bella is definitely the canon Bella down deep. She feels so much for Edward but doesn't believe he will love her forever, thinks that he will leave, but yet she is willing to have him for as long as he is there.

I have been also waiting to see when they would find out they have actually been texting each other... until this chapter. They're online relationship is so lovely and one of the most unique aspects of this story, that I thnk I would love to see it last til the end. 

I HATE doing dishes, luckily I have a dishwasher! :)