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Reviewer: lilsabeth (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Games
i do quite like vulgar. it has a nice ring to it. your mouth spits it out like it doesnt want it in there.
Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Games
violet is my favorite V word. I love this. It's beautiful.
Reviewer: Milissa (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:20 AM · On: Games
Fav V word? - verdant
Reviewer: AngelinaBallerina (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Games
Vampire and venom! lol
No, actually it's vacation. :)
Great chapter! Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: ylimee (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Games
vanquish.
Reviewer: Aalfons (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Games
Wanker
May be out of contest, but I still have to mention is as im very found of English slang.
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Games
Fan-fucking-tastic! This is easily jumping up the list to my favorite story! I am loving the interaction between Bella and Edward. Thank you for being so good about updating!!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Games
Great chapter. Love all the E/B stuff and the group interaction. Ending was great. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:42 AM · On: Games
vehmentaly
Reviewer: a_kowald (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Games
Vampire!
I enjoy this, I want to congratulate you and ask you to please keep it going.
Thanks
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:05 AM · On: Games
Versatile!
Reviewer: Mama_Marinara (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Night Marish
To quote Edward, "What the fuck?" Why is that bitch in his bed? And the spread, was it Nutella? That shit is delish!
Reviewer: Mama_Marinara (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Interrogation Exposition
OK, I don't get why her screen name would ve a song hat she hates. I didn't realize it was a song until I read this chapter.
Reviewer: Mama_Marinara (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:11 AM · On: Bloody Hale
Gotta answer this one!!! I'm not the barfly, I'm the bartender, but I'm quite partial to four non blondes "What's Up" and that Bartender song.
Reviewer: Mama_Marinara (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:06 AM · On: Type set
I really like the way you take the scenes from Twilight and adapt them for your purpose, like with her fainting before speaking in front of the class instead of from the smell of the blood. You even made Edward almost skip class. Genius.
Reviewer: Mama_Marinara (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Melodic
I have to go back and review some of the chapters that I read on my phone tonight at work while I was slow. I read on my phone there and it's no iPhone, so the reviewing thing doesn't always work. I gotta say, I played Stormy Weather 3 different times tonight each time the crowd changed, you just made me crave it.
Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Matters
I've just found your story and really couldn't stop reading!!
I must say that I'm not a big fan of poetry but your is...WOW, you're so articulate, putting into words the most fantastic emotions, and so accurately...it amazes me in such a good way :D
You have captured the essence of their relationship so wonderfully, it's all in character and it makes a fantastic, complicated sense.
And you know so much music!! I've tried to keep up, but it really blows me away... and I thought I knew some music ;)
While doing the dishes...mmm I just put my playlist really loud and sing, something peppy and upbeat most of the time ...cos I don't particularly like doing that chore (though I hate ironing even more)
Thanx so much for this awesome story!! Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: Mama_Marinara (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Invited and Confused
"I wanted to hear everything, every song I knew come out of her mouth."
I have a terrible habit of reading a few lines down from where I'm at and for a second, this line said "cum in her mouth", which wuld be hot, but it didn't really seem to fit the context.
The whole cuddling on the couch and falling asleep together was so sweet until it got all hot and Edward had to be an ass and ruin it.
Reviewer: Mama_Marinara (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Dazed and Invited
That was sex, wasn't it!? Edward could make me a Jack Sour
Reviewer: Mama_Marinara (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Visuals
Wow, I'm glad I found this! I love the relationship between Debussy_88 and Ordinary_Girl. I'm quite fond of screennames with underscores in them LOL
And my coffee, black as night and sweet as sin. I prefer rest stop vending machine coffee to starbucks.
Reviewer: Proffy (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 02:53 PM · On: First Listen
I just re-read the first chapter and realized (having re-read the last few chapters earlier today) that when Edward tells Bells she tastes like lemons in chapter..20?...he is actually referring back to that first poem of ordinary girl's that he read.
Now I'm feeling I might need to read the whole thing again to pick up on other subtle hints and clues. Will Bella have a shock of retroactive recognition at those words at some point, I wonder?
Really lovely. I like it when suspense builds in those quiet, textual ways.
Reviewer: Mirabel (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Matters
"Edward pinched the bridge of his nose like he had a nosebleed."
For some reason, this made me laugh out loud. I like the variation on the canon nose pinch.
Another well thought out chapter. Loved the interaction between Edward and Charlie.
For doing dishes, I like to go with anything from Shakira's "Dónde están los ladrones?" Album, or some Pitbull songs.
Reviewer: Marie-Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Matters
Ok finished for now...When the HELL are they going to realize that they are talking to eachother??? i am desperate!!!! AAAGGGHHHHHHH!!! LOL
I'm a sucker for musicians,so u know i LOVE this Edward,i love this story(read it in a day).I might lurk around the thread give a better review there later.Well is 3:46 am here in PR so off to bed...later!!!!
Reviewer: Marie-Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Balancing Act
Mint chocolate chip.
They made it right and that's what counts,now who brought the blue drink??? maybe James???
Loving it, loving it, loving it so far...
Reviewer: Marie-Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Complicated
"Barbie girl" Aqua
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