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Reviews For Tropic of Virgo
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Games

vexatiously is my fav 'v' word!!  I love the way it rolls off my tongue!! 

Great chapter! I love the tension you created during the week for them. School can be so tough sometimes when you can't really show affection for your other half, but hey...what can they do?  Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Regetta (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Games

My favourite word is Virgoified.

It means to become obsessed with a certain fanfic...

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Games

They are so hot together it's sinful!  LOL  Great job.

Reviewer: Angie Baby (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Games


Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Games


Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Games

You did such a great job writing this.  I could feel the tension as I was reading.  Love this story.

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Games

Awe! a battle of wills, you know someone always gives in this case I'm sure it does't matter who gives because they both get. Any wasy great chapter can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Games

Vexing. Voluptuous. Volume. Velveteen. Vantage. Voyager. Voyuer. Vain.

Reviewer: dster (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Games


Reviewer: lizzie_4_taylor (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Games



love the story


Reviewer: lizzie_4_taylor (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Games



love the story


Reviewer: StarryStarryNight (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Games

That was amazing well let me start with me fgreaking out in the middle there lol. I was so nerv ous tht we were just going to be right back where we began with them lol. I looove how sweet he is with her and the way you write about them you can actually feel the tension and passion between them. As always I can't wait for the next xhptr

Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Games


Reviewer: SureYouAre (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Games

Vernacular-- wonderful chapter, as always.  I can't wait to find out what Edward writes next!

Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Games

Leaving a review is almost redundant because of the super-long post I left on the forum, but anyway...

You're still one of my all-time faves, blue! Love this little bit of fluff and can't help wondering if the exchange with Lauren foreshadows something...

And although I missed hearing from O_G and D_88, I loved the tension and interaction *ahem* between Bella and Edward. HOT!!!

As I said on the forum, my favorite V word: voluptuous. It just sounds and feels awesome when I say it!

Reviewer: spiderbitten (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Games

Vivified is my favorite V word!


I love your story!  I usually don't like it when someone tries to describe music in writing, because it never works out right--but I love your take on it, really.  I've been lurking this story for a while, and for that I apologize.  I'll review more, honest.

I'm hoping one of them will man up soon and saw those three words so they can get over this stupid tension, but I get the message of the inner battle!

You are a very, very good writer!  Keep it up!

Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Lost Angeles

phew.. fans hot hot.. and Bella can fight yay

loving it

Reviewer: CherBella (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Games

"The girl sang circles around me. And spirals. And clear sweet cascades of notes that wrapped around me like silk sheets and warm honey."

(sigh) Your story always makes Mondays so much easier. Love love love the back and forth between E&B, and the tension.

Favorite V-word... velvet.

Reviewer: spanglemaker (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Games

I can't even describe the embarrassing little sqeal of delight I made this morning when I saw you'd updated. This story is my happy place. I love, love, love your insanely talented writing.


Viridian- the word and the color.

Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Games


Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Games


Reviewer: itzmegan73 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Games


Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Games

Again, you manage to come up with a gripping chapter!  The tension is palpable between these two.  Fear can really do damage to a relationship- I'm hoping they will overcome it and be honest with each other.

Love the idea of them singing duets together.  It's sweet and lovely.

My favorite "v" word is veracity with vivacious a close second. 

Eager to read the "I love you" from Edward to Bella.  Are you interested in writing it?

Reviewer: Okkervil (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Games

Nice! I love how little Bella holds her own. Write more. Please.

Reviewer: Bonsai (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Opening Lines

oh, sorry - two other things.

love my chucks (alice would have to tear them fro my dead body)


who has biology and chemisty the same semester?

Author's Response: I did. It sucked moose.

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