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Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Aisle C
Oh that poor boy needs to learn how to ask a girl out on a actual date. LOL How was Bella to know that asking her if she wanted ice cream was his code for do you want to go out on a date? Silly boy!
Can't wait to read more. :)
Reviewer: mona123 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Aisle C
Yay!! Loved it! Loved it! loved it!
And the weather is currently a mix of sunny and overcast rain.
Reviewer: catastropy (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Aisle C
this story is more delightful than a bowl of strawberry ice cream on the hottest summer day.
Reviewer: Alyss In Wonderland (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Aisle C
Hey. I've been reading your story since about chapter 2, and I rarely leave reviews because I never know what to say.
But this story is amazing.
And today I thought it would be fun if I made you a Tropic Of Virgo Trailer, because I wasn't sure if anyone else had.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=72yexMvr9W4
Author's Response: Wow.
Thanks!
Reviewer: Aalfons (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Aisle C
Cloudy with some sun. Atleast its not not raining like mad anymore after days of it. Even had some hail earlier, but its the typical weather here in Sweden with 14 celsius.
I love the ending.
Author's Response: Hej!
Tack.
Reviewer: tequathisy (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Aisle C
absolutely adore this fic. loves it!
Reviewer: SureYouAre (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Aisle C
All blue skies and sultriness here, for now. So glad Bella got up the nerve to sing, and Ed got up the nerve to ask her out!
Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Aisle C
oh the weather here is so crazy... it rains then in the afternoon its so hot!!! i love the last line!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Aisle C
Hot - like your story. Great update - made my morning!
Reviewer: jennifer_lyn215 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Aisle C
the weather here is bipolar, much like how bella thinks of edward's mood swings. one day is 75 degrees and sunny, the next it's 45 and raining with a chance of snow at night!
loving the story so much, i look forward to all of your new updates!
Reviewer: Proffy (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:00 AM · On: Aisle C
Well, finally the boy speaks!
I will no doubt come back and read this chapter again; they are getting closer, Bella and Edward, circling around each other and closing the distance just a little bit with each pass. You write it so well. Layered phrases.
Reviewer: Pkullen (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Aisle C
Grey and overcast today, threatening to rain but undecided as yet. Love the chapter - so glad that Bella sang with them and Edward is being more direct with her. Looking forward to the next one!
Reviewer: letsgetGRAPHIC (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Aisle C
Its running hot and cold, todays suppose to hit 85 and yesterday was a lowly 62.
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Aisle C
OK, no offense, but to parphrase Bella, your story is giving whiplash. He's going to ask her out, then he doesn't. She's going to sing with them, then she doesn't. She says she wants him, but he says she doesn't. Come on already. This is frustrating.
Reviewer: forever_dreamer (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Aisle C
Summer sun being swallowed by thick clouds and heavy rain.
I love this story - it's positively brilliant.
Reviewer: spanglemaker (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Aisle C
Ahhhh, good boy. Manning up to ask the girl for a date by the end! Love how you handle the whole back and forth, the lust plus the emotional terror. Nicely balanced. Poor Edward. It's a big scary world.
It's Forks-ish, where I am, but clearing.
Reviewer: like_diamonds (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Aisle C
HORRIBLE WEATHER
Reviewer: silverfaire (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Aisle C
AWESOME!!!!!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Aisle C
It's raining where I am. Winter decided to suddenly start and I'm unprepared. So cold.
Great chapter. I loved the last line. Lol oh Edward. He wasn't exactly clear when he asked Bella out.
Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Aisle C
Awesome update, loved the last line a lot. There's so much misunderstanding/miscommunication going on, except with O_G & D_88. Hope it all gets out in the open soooooon.
Reviewer: ylimee (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Aisle C
cold, damn cold, not even rainy just cold, winter is fail.
Reviewer: dandyangie (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Aisle C
Poor Edward and Bella....human or not, they always take awhile to get it together...LOL
Love this story so much!!
Reviewer: vampgirl138 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Opening Lines
Bitch, I don't know who you are, but you write some sexy shit!!! Good Job!
Reviewer: jasmineflava (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:26 AM · On: Aisle C
Currently 42F, raining, cold, windy ;)
Manchester, UK =D
Loved this chapter x
Reviewer: Ammage (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Aisle C
Gah! I think Edward needs to man-up and start actually talking to Bella. The reason she said no to ice cream was cos he was being all criptic and 'smooth' and not actually getting to the point of asking her for a date lol!
Loving this story, can't wait for teh next update.
It's all rain and thunderstorms where I am. Just wish I had an Edward to make me against the kitchen table. That was HOT =P
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