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Reviews For Tropic of Virgo
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Games

Values, vital, volume

Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Nocturnal Prelude

balloons.  I am afraid of balloons.

i love your story. I don't even know what else to say except for that! I hope it's enough. :)

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Patience

Poor Bella, she can't stay away from the spotlight lol Great update! Oh, and I am afraid of turtles btw................dont judge :)

Reviewer: Stephy B (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:58 AM · On: Patience

-Things that you don't see/can't see

-Bridges (not sure why...previously life fear maybe)


Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Patience

Epic fucking chapter. Seriously... Strawberry with sprinkles and coffee and... you? WIN. I think I'm drunk, but I don't get the "I might have done something bad." I'll reread tomorrow and figure it out. Cannot wait for the next chapter!!!


Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Patience

Oh, yay!  That was so perfect, new and butterfly inducing!  The real feelings are coming out, even if all isn't revealed yet!  I can't wait for the wrath of Bella to come!  It should prove to be most interesting as to how she responds to all involved!  My fears:  something happening to my children-that one is so bad I can't even be specific and dying before my children are grown.

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Patience

Haha oh shit! Just when things were looking up! Good chapter, can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: perspicacity (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Patience

I'll borrow words from one of my characters and say being thought cold, brittle, and unoriginal, and from yours when I say trying and failing at extraordinary. 

You tugged the joy-rug right out from under me with just a little bit of dialogue, and I love-hate you for it.

You make beautiful words.  Thank you for them.

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Patience

Finally they talked about dating. Can't wait for next chapter and find out how it will affect the group if she signed something with james....

I'm afraid of Clowns..big time...So thank you Stephen King for "It"

Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Patience

OMG, they all signed her up?! That's messed up. They should have asked her....

Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Patience

Uh oh..somebody isn't happy! And I don't blame her, even if their intentions weren't meant in a bad way...

That was really cute how Bella stuck her head back in and said "oh and I Like you too"! haha

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Martinibaby1 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Dazed and Invited

Wow, aznother amazing update! I was late for my concert btw, but it was great nonetheless. I need to run right now as well -late as usual because I wanted to read at least one chapter- but I have something to look forward now, chapter 7. Heaven! Thanks for this amazing fic, really. It's one of the best I've read this far. Oh and Edwrad would make me a pina colada, my fav!

Reviewer: tiderider (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Patience

`wow!!!!! great writing,  great story


Reviewer: Kate77 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Patience

I don't like cliff hanger and apparently you love them. Okay, okay I love them. (sigh)

Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Patience

Loved everything about this chapter!!!  So glad we got to see Bella's side of the night at Aro's.  Can't wait to see what happens with the Festival.   Loved the line "If you were in a skirt, I'd be inside you right now."  And I love cute, smitten Edward "She likes me"  Your Edward is by far my favorite.  The conversation about the ice cream was great!  So happy they figured that all out. This story definitely still owns my heart....

I am afraid of losing the people I love.  And bats.

Reviewer: Soulstar86 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Patience

Fucking Awesome. I'm Riveted .. By Both Your Poetry And Your Story And Just .. Everything!! LOVE IT .. You've Combined My Love Of Writing And Love Of Music And You've Twisted It Into This Glorious Thing .. I Am Now Addicted :) Can't Wait To Read More

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:30 AM · On: Patience

I'm terrified of big dogs!  They scare me to death!

Awesome chapter!  So Bella and Edward are still dumb as rocks, when it comes to the email/texting thing!  When are they going to figure it out!?

So Edward, Alice, and James sent a demo in with Bella singing and she didn't know at all!?  LOL

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Patience

A lot of things. i feel ridiculous talking this to a stranger but wht he hell, right ? not conquering my dreams. not conquering my dreams because im not good enough. conquering my dreams and fuck it up. my parents death. bugs, of any kinds. And, lamely enough, dark. LOL. I loooove it. you manage to write a poem that is a chapter, that forms a story, that is hot, and has coerence, and i actually understand it, and hell, i love it. so go, and update!! cant wait till they find out whos O_G and D_88

Reviewer: deathcabfortrish (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:01 AM · On: House Cullen

I just started reading this story, and I have to say I love it. Your writing is so eloquent, and it makes me jealous & wish that I was so creative and well-versed.


I usually don't review (I know, shame on me) but I feel the need to share my favorite dirty songS.


Here in My Room-Incubus

We Looked Like Giants-Death Cab for Cutie

War in Your Bedroom-A Change of Pace


Hope you like them ;)

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 03:49 AM · On: Aisle C

hm.. weather in sao paulo is weird. at least here, in the capital. the small cities around are even more weirder. there are days where its freaking freezing, but its doesnt snow here, ever, since its a tropical country and all. and theres the days where it looks like you are going to melt, and than evaporate. and funny thing is. its like out of day youre melting, and the other you are a popsicle. anyways, i loveeee it, and im heading to the next chapter

Reviewer: TRIsarahTOPS (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Patience

empty silences? loneliness in general.

Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Patience

It maybe stupid...but the thing that really terrifies me is to run over a cat/dog/, everytime I'm driving I'm really extra careful.

Oh my...I don't understand what happened at the end...but I bet everything will get clarified next chapter...

Can't wait for more!! Finally walls and miscommunications are starting to waver!! :D


Reviewer: ylimee (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Patience

the mundane and never getting out

Reviewer: progressiveprincess (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Patience

Losing the love of my life and my family!!!  Awesome chapter.

Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Patience

Spiders that crunch when you step on them, and any religious scary movie, I'm a good catholic, but nothing ups the creep factor in a movie like the Bible!

But your story...I love!  I started reading it during nap-time today and spent every free moment glued to the computer! I liked how the action started right away and didn't have to have three or four  chapters of build up. It's an incredibly fun read!   I am dying for them to figure out who the other one really is, and I find myself trying to guess what will tip them off. My current theory is that he'll sing a song for her that's one of the ones he sent O_G. 

Regardlee, I am immediately posting to my favorites and will be eagerly checking  for updates! BTW, your poetry and lyrics are AMAZING!!!

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