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Reviewer: BabydolCullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
twilight: PERFECT. And, I loooooove this story!! This chapter made me cry. These 2 are fools in love. Operative word-fools.
Reviewer: graceisgone (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
edward needs to get his head out of his ass.
Reviewer: combat (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:25 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
underestimating
Reviewer: BabyBlues (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:23 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
no no no no no... u absolutely have to update soon again... and edward; fix it!!!!!
Reviewer: silverfaire (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
AWESOME!!! hurry with next update or I will have a traumatic experience!
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Reviewer: nobodysgirl8 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Oh my God, this is pure torture!!!!
Edwards and idiot for not telling her what he is thinking...if only he would speak his inner monologue...and Bella, Bella, Bella, I can understand what she is thinking, after he tells her he wants to take someone else to the party, but when he says he doesnt want to be her friend, you can just picture the shock and pain in his eyes....
Oh god, great chapter, i love the angst but only when there is happyness in sight...please give us some happiness next chapter....
Reviewer: B-RizzleDizzle (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
He's such a fucking idiot. Ugh. Write more, please.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
omfg!! I hate Tanya and why the hell couldn't he just tell Bella about how Tanya is blackmailing him!!!!!!! I am so pissed at Edward right now!! Poor Bella!! Edward cannot seem to communicate anything right!! Looking forward to the next update
Reviewer: Aalfons (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Stars
I can understand that It had to happen for the story and maybe its just me who have read to many storys with this kind of reaction between Edward and Bella or maybe its just me who is naive with to little experience with unsure relationships, but this type of behaviour is just anoying and irritating and god do I hate it.
I can understand why Bella does it, Im totaly on your side there, Its just this typical Speachless thing from Edward im against. An action thats usually followed up with as many wrongs that can ever happen, that keeps escalating untill both of them are so misserable and heart broken that they cant see straight. Something that is so easy avoided if they hadnt decided to leave before everything was said, interupted eachother at the most critic point or pop up in the entirely wrong moment or what ever else there is thats gonna go wrong just cus of extreamly bad timing. And then some small thing just change the story compleatly over and they get their happy ending.
And I just think Its old, used and cheap.
Witch is why I loved your writing style from the beginning, since it wasnt any of that. Its new, fresh, rich and something Ive never seen before.
I was just hoping for something more. Ofc I havnt read whats gonna happen next but what ever it is, I truly hope that what your planning for thoes two Is gonna make my mind blow and making me truly sorry for ever have the slightest doubt in you.
Everything else Is more then lovely and you have my heart in your hands.
Author's Response: I'm sorry if I've shaken the writer/reader trust. I am new at this, but a lot of the premise of this story involves two incredibly eloquent people who can communicate beautifly as strangers but are completely unable to do so in person. It may be a cliche and an overly used device to cause the angst that I did, but to NOT show consequences for that shortcoming seems untrue to the story. Thank you for your honest thoughts, and I hope you stay with me.
Reviewer: Ammage (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Oh wow... that made my heart hurt! These guys need to talk - seriously!! So many crossed wires - its rediculous!
Gah, I hope they work this out soon - was a fantastic chapter, looking forward to the next add
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
oh my!
your beautiful words are pained and mealncholy and make me weepy!
Reviewer: Pkullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Edward - God, they are so awkward with each other. I wish that they could just talk to each other without screwing things up.
Reviewer: MsLessa (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Edward is an idiot.
It's just that simple.
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
OMFG that hurt... I just want to cry now! Edward really needs to get his shit together and Bella needs to stop jumping to conclusions. Please update soon!
Reviewer: leoflora (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:34 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
obesession
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:34 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Twilight: obsession
Edward: clueless
Bella: empty
Tanya: manipulative bitch
Great chapter!
Reviewer: hermione (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
you left me crying..damn! what was he thinking?! apparently he's not! look at the price he has to pay! please soothe me soon?
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Dear God! Please tell me that Edward gets his head out of his ass and actually has a REAL conversation with Bella! This is getting painful! He is being stupid (well, I guess they both are to an extent, but him more so) and if he goes through with this he may be damaging things to a point where they are beyond repair. There will probably be more interaction between Debussy and Ordinary_Girl, so hopefully they can convine each other to say something. I'm going to be heading over to the thread for this story, but I was wondering if you have an outline and how many chapters you think it's going to be?
Kat M.
Reviewer: moonlipse (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:26 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Twilight: Pastels.
Edward was such a bumbling mess this chapter. Straighten that one up soon, pretty please. Oh, and have someone knock some sense into Bella and let her know that when she assumes she makes an ass out of you and me---or in this case, her and Edward.
Reviewer: harpychick (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
I think my heart just broke...
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
I love the cadence of your writing; it always leaves me wanting more. And this chapter left me wanting Edward to be able to process information a little quicker.
Reviewer: mopstyle (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Fucking idiot! Jesus. :shakes head: What a tool. I want to beat them both to bloody pulps. haha I so love that he just cannot sound sincere. And that he is literally one word shy of getting his point across, every time. One word! This Edward needs a lobotomy, or a vacation, and I'm hoping for some jealous enraged Bella. I still can"t believe that they have no idea that they're messaging each other. Not that it's obvious, but sometimes the timing is just too perfect. Thank fuck my HS life wasn't this difficult. What a difference a decade makes. Love
Reviewer: Milissa (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:49 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
edward
Reviewer: SecretlySeverus (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
OMG! Geez Edward, get a freaking CLUE! Why the hell won't he just tell her that Tanya is blackmailing him and that he loves her and that he's an asshole and OMG! Seriously!!! Any why didn't anyone else fill him in on the 'Phoenix' association?! They HAVE to know he'd be freaking out about it...
Twilight? Sunset... (only because I thought "sexy vampires" was a bit too obvious) :)
Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
really? you left us like this? update soon
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