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Reviewer: brown0520 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
word association: twilight: (Rob Pattinson...*all thoughts stop there* jk )
love.
fanfiction.
Tropic of Virgo.
Greatness. (something meriting the highest praise or regard)
Thanks.
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
word assoc: endings
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Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
O M G-will someone please implant these two with some coping & COMMUNICATION skills?!? Why didn't he just TELL HER about Tanya?!?! Its not like silence was part of the deal! UGH! Ur killin me softly! I can't wait til they know who they really r to each other!
Reviewer: spanglemaker (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
I get that Edward is inexperienced in actual relationships and a little bit emotionally stunted, but damn, I wanted to reach into my computer and slap him upside the head just now! Go get that girl and explain your shit to her!
I know, I know, this has to happen, there has to be the big meltdown so they can get it back together, but it's still hard as hell to read. I heart this story so hard it hurts, and love this Bella. Fix it fast, please!
So "twilight": For most of my life I would have said "Mom", because Twilight Time by the Platters was my parents' "song". But since my headfirst dive into the world of Twilight fanfic, twilight=sex.
Reviewer: GoodyGoody23 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
I love the symbolism you put into this story. The ribbon this chapter relates into the ribbon in Eclipse, and... you're just a brilliant writing and I am in awe of you. You make me want to strive to improve my writing and who I am. I adore this story and the mindblowing fluency of it.
Word association: twilight: apple: autumn: colored leaves: trees: life
Reviewer: alternate universe (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
my god edward is an idiot! run after her damn it=)
Reviewer: SureYouAre (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Urrrgggg, heartfail! It's so sad that two people who can communicate so well on-line with people they think are complete strangers can't talk to each other in person. Sigh.
Reviewer: darkchyld1980 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
That chapter made my heart gurt. :(
Can't wait to read what happens next.
Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Argh. Okay, I love these characters and your writing is beautiful. But this verbal dysfunction is getting a little unbelievable. Spit it out already. I just find it hard to believe he couldn't at least tell her it was a set up or something.
Reviewer: Proffy (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Why, why, why do people walk away without waiting for a response?
These kids are killing me. They are eloquent and articulate...as long as they're not talking to each other.
Reviewer: yeuxdor (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Ok I love this story and think you are just brilliant and love your poetry but you are asking for a lot of forebearance with this chapter! Surely he could not be that much of an idiot to let her leave like that. I have to say this is always a sore spot for me, when people let all sort of nightmares happen because they refuse to tell the truth so maybe this is my issue. But I really, really hope he is going to tear after her at the beginning of the next chapter and not let her go until he tells her the truth.
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Edward, honey, you are a little slow. Poor Bella :( Great update!
Reviewer: Livie (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Sigh.......Damn. That was awesome.
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
*sob* Why didn't he just tell her everything??? For someone so eloquent with lyrics and music, he sure sucks at expression himself. :) Wonder if Tanya will really give him the password and if his stuff is still on it??? Enjoyed it.
Reviewer: truthordare (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
okaaay .. him being this fucking stupid and slow is sorta pissing me off - these guys just can't catch a brake
Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Nocturnal Prelude
He is a f%^@ing idiot!!!!
Reviewer: Alys Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Unconfessional
For me, angry music is anything I can scream to... doesn't usually matter what exactly I'm screaming... so Disturbed, Linkin Park, something like that.
Jealous Edward is sexy, but jealous high school bitches is just... grrrr. Girls suck. Poor Bella. It's not her fault Edward was a man whore, just wasting time until she came along. He better make this right!
And I adore Emmett and his protective brother antics. He's so wonderfully funny and cuddly and sexy all rolled into one package. I want!
Reviewer: Amillyna (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
How much more angst do I have to take!? These stupid kids are driving me insane! I love the story, but...I dont know how much more I can handle!
Reviewer: chicabonita51983 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaegh. I think I'm going to pull my hair out and then smack some sense into the silly emo teenagers.
Okay... word association to twilight? I have to say "my old students" ... They're the ones who introduced me to the series.
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Imps
omgeesh!! why is their love sooooo complicated??
Reviewer: adeben (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Nocturnal Prelude
oh nooooo! this is going to leave me depressed all week. please update soon! i really hope alice or jasper kicks edward's ass. actually all 4 of them should get in on that.
Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Edward, Edward, Edward........my gawd he needs to learn to communicate....honestly. =( Poor Bella, she doesn't even understand why he's "mad" at her. Douche.
Please update soon!
Reviewer: CherBella (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:44 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
That's easy-- Twilight=Obsession :)
Gawd! If I had Edward/Rob's hair I'd be yanking my hands through it so hard I'd be pulling it alll out!!!
These two are so frustrating!! In a good way, (I keep reading) and in such a heartbreaking way. Why can't he just tell her that Tanya is blackmailing him?
She's going to end up going with James and something big is going to happen, I just have a feeling.
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Oh dear. Amazing, as always.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Short Ended Stick
Edward is such a stupid, dishonest f@#%. I mean, seriously...how hard is it to say "I've gotta do this because she's blackmailing me, I'd rather go with you?" Dude has some serious communication issues for someone who's a songwriter!!
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