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Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
Man, I love this story but I'm getting really frustrated with Edward. He's taking miscommunication and craziness to the extreme here.
Reviewer: Alys Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Imps
I know I'm supposed to want to be inside the mind of someone famous or historically or artistically significant, but I think maybe I'd choose my mother. Seems strange, but you see, I don't know her, and I think given the chance, that's how I would want to get to know her.
Oh no... Tanya is evil!!
Reviewer: EB Idealist 81 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
innocent
Reviewer: Alys Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:20 PM · On: The Goods
Kill Lauren, fuck Jessica, and marry Angela. Killing and fucking only happens once in this game, so I could grit my teeth and get that over with no problem, but the marrying is the one that matters... and Angela is the only one worth spending actual time with.
Yay! Edward finally asked Bella out on a real date! They're so cute and grown up! Can't wait to see what happens at that dinner... and the festival!! Keep up the great writing!
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
urgggggggggggh major fucking fail
:(
and yes i'm actually pouting like a child right now.
fucking fix it. ._.
...and this is me refusing to talk to you again until you fix it.
Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
What the fuck just happened. I mean, Edward choosing the wrong words and not saying enough to stop her from thinking the worst, and Bella, dear Bella, always jumping to coclusions...Damn that Bitch Tanya.
Twilight=Vampires
Reviewer: okgrdnfn (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
oh my goodness, i am crying! Very good but very sad! Please write more quick.
i sometimes have a hard time understanding the poetry that they write back and fourth, i can't always read between the lines but I guess that's why i'm not a writer.
thank you for this wonderful story though.
Reviewer: RoseIsMyHero (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
Yikes!!!
Reviewer: Alys Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Patience
Clowns, crowds, public speaking, small spaces, success, and dying alone. That's normal, right?
I really like the twists and turns you're throwing into the plot. They never seem forced or completely unrealistic, like some stories I've read. The poetry is beautiful, and I hope all the lovely ladies out there reading get to have their own pretty boy (or girl) to be a spark for!
Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
Aw, fuck no! You have got to be fucking kidding me! Man, all of my fics are sad today...damnit!
Please tell me this won't last long...this is sickening.
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
Wow. How did he fuck that up?
word association: mosquitos
Reviewer: Bemused_Banana (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
Beauty
Reviewer: Alys Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Aisle C
Sunny. It's always sunny and perfect... and most days I can't stand it. I fantasize about moving to Washington and living in the rain.
Reviewer: tiderider (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
toooo sad, fist shaking in the air, just talk already, damn text messaging slices of conversations, that keep them from communication. sorry small soapbox, better now
thanks for your writing and speedy updates
100/10
Reviewer: luvcellenest1918 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Nocturnal Prelude
Come join my new FB group about being addicted to TW FF!!! Its A place to discuss and recommend your favorite TFFs, get recommendations for new ones, and know that you are not alone in your addiction.
So we talk about how addicting FF is - and instead of listing 12 steps to recover we wrote 12 must reads and TOV is one of them! I spent most of the day talking about the update today! LOVE IT! So it be an honor for you to join! I also wanted to know if it was ok to post your pic for your story on the page...?
http://www.facebook.com/photo_search.php?oid=95063598724&view=user#/group.php?gid=95063598724
Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
Sometimes, I can't decide if I want to smack Edward upside the head or give him a hug. Bella too, for that matter, since for all that they're both brilliant words, really suck at communicating with each other. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Reviewer: Alys Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Games
Vulnerable - how we want others to be, yet hate to be ourselves. And there you have Bella & Edward.
I know he's rarely a major player in these stories, but I wanted to say that I really like how you wrote Charlie, in this chapter especially.
Reviewer: AwesomeSauce76 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
Addiction
Reviewer: Alys Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Matters
It's a little random, but I usually sing "One Fine Day" when I'm doing chores.
Ahh, Bella and Edward... will they ever feel worthy of each other?
Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
I am crying so hard right now. That was so sad. Edward is suddenly on my hit list too. I really hope you fix this shit soon.
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
Wow, when I started this chapter I sure didn't expect the heart-fail it ended with. I am so torn between crying and slapping the crap out of these two. Edward needs to sit down with her and lay all his cards out on table and put his heart on the line, and hope Bella is open to hear what he has to say. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Twilight: Pain. Only because there is so much pain they go through to get to the place where they're happy, and because New Moon was horrid to read.
Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
twilight.....sick addiction
OMG that chapter was so sad! The parallels to New Moon were clever, but heartbreaking! It's amazing how Edward is such an amazing writer, but can't get the same words out of his mouth in a coherent manner. (Actually, my husband is exactly the same way...amazing writer, but can't get his ideas clear verbally...all our most important discussions have happened over e-mail or letters...I feel Bella's pain, except she's not even aware of it!)
Beautiful, beautiful chapter! I am literally DYING for the next one. Please hurry.
Reviewer: la_bella_sera (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
yearning
Reviewer: twidiehard0302 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
Oops - correction to my previous review - Tanya (not Lauren)
Reviewer: 3dwardluva (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Invited and Confused
i dream a lot, almost every night. I do everything in my sleep; sing, dance, walk, run you name it.
great chapter
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