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Reviews For Tropic of Virgo
Reviewer: jennifer_lyn215 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:59 AM · On: Party Favors

it's a three way tie...emilie from "the corpse bride", followed by sally from the nightmare before christmas.  but this past year takes the cake...sarah palin.  i even found a mini obama look-alike...

great chapter!

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Party Favors

I can't wait to see Bella's take on all this.

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Party Favors

Loved it!!

Reviewer: Bemused_Banana (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:47 AM · On: Party Favors

I was  Banana Fiary two years ago. I wore my costume to school.

Reviewer: Olinka (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Patience

Child labour, delivery, pregnancy, pain, death...

Reviewer: Bemused_Banana (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Party Favors

I was  Banana Fiary two years ago. I wore my costume to school.

Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Party Favors

What're ya doin making me feel bad for Tanya!!? Edward waaas very nice when he realized...

And Bella was a fucking ROCK STAR this whole chapter...she was not anywhere near pathetic,  the panties were awesome, and when she gave the speech in front of the class, and got Edward's shocked response...priceless! I love how she wouldn't let him kiss her either till he "cleaned up his mess!" Hah!

When Bella comes as a mermaid, is Edward going to figure it out? 

Best costume? In high school, I wore one of my mom's horrid multi-color striped housecoats with a towel on my head and went as Joseph and the technicolor dreamcoat.  good times.

Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Party Favors

Mmmm I think it was a ghost...a-la-Willow (in Buffy)...I'm shy, what can I say??

Awesome chapter...Bella...I didn't think she had it in her to be that naughty mmm pleasant surprise.

Sometimes we judge so hard a person when they do a bad thing, but we don't know where they come from, what's their history behind their actions...So Tanya has a bitch for mom, obviously that doesn't justify her wrongdoing, but we can understand her a bit more? We can even pity her...hope she can move on though. And what Edward did was really...thoughtful...and he forgave her...he's a good boy after all, has a great heart.

And the stunt that Alice!! :D

I can't wait for Bella at the party...hope Edward explains and be honest...for a change :P


Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Party Favors

Oh all that trouble for a poor low esteemed, misunderstood, broken girl!  In the end, she wasn't so horrible to Edward, but she was horrible to Bella.  Now, we know that Bella seems to be able to keep her eye on what she wants and isn't vengeance bound, but I really think that Edward needs to make this up to her-he could have been more honest from the start!  My best Halloween costume is when I dressed up like my friend Judy. 

Reviewer: SureYouAre (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Party Favors

not so skanky pirate... wow, words of wisdom from Slore-en Mallory?  Heh, who knew?  I'm really glad Bella didn't show up to the party before Tanya-gate blew over, but I'm pretty sure E.'s still got some groveling to do.   And a woot-woot for Rose!

Reviewer: little_star (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:39 AM · On: Party Favors

This is hands-down the BEST fanfic series on here. It's what makes me check the site obsessively, 10 times a day. Thanks for updating so I can go to bed now!

Reviewer: TwilightAddict_NYC (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Party Favors

More, more, more! I'm totally addicted to this story! Almost as much as I'm addicted to Edward! lol



Reviewer: mopstyle (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Party Favors

This is torture! haha. love it. love you. love virgos.

Reviewer: justareader (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Party Favors

When I was nine, my twin sister and I both realized we didn't have costumes for Halloween. We threw on an extra large t-shirt and went as conjoined twins. It was a little awkward, as I was, and still am, about half a foot taller than her and she has the tendency to walk very slooooowly. I also happen to live in an exceptionally cheap neighborhood, so people kept trying to give us only one piece of candy. insisting we shared a stomach. It was nice though, and I think it still holds the record as the longest period of time we've gone without fighting, a huge incentive being I didn't want to walk home shirtless. Great chapter per usual and I really liked how you explained Tanya!

Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Party Favors

so tanya has her own issues with her mom.. wow, i can't believe i'll say this but i pity her if she has to deal with her mom like that.. still what she did was awful since the whole band worked on it so hard and they thought it was lost. but thank God everything is settled now and bella and tanya didn't even meet at the party. i thought tanya would really require some PDA in front of everyone to humiliate bella, but that wasn't the case. she just wanted pictures. i wonder why she wanted just pictures so badly..if she wanted revenge or something, i thought she would really ask for more than that. was she just planning to show the pictures to her mom or something? anyways, overall, i am so happy about this chapter.. great! thanks for the update and please update soon. =)

p.s. about your question, we don't have halloween parties here.. i mean maybe some areas do, but mostly don't. so i've never been to a halloween party all my life.

Reviewer: Boo_Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Party Favors

So now I can't breathe while I'm reading? lol I am so in love with your story.  I'm almost embarassed to admit I've gone back and started reading it again, this time taking the time to let your poetry wash over me and look up all of the music you reference. (And in doing so, found some I love, thanks!)

Fantastic story, your words are magic, don't ever stop writing!

Looking forward to the next chapter (oh so much!)

Best costume:  Arabian Princess =)

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:26 AM · On: Party Favors

Great chapter.

I loved what they did Tanya! I do kinda feel sorry for her, though.

Why do I have feeling that Bella dressed up like her poem said and Edward will know who she is? If it is, it's about time!

I'm glad that this is all over.....right?

Please, please, please update soon?

My best halloween costume was when I dressed up as a gothic vampire. XD

Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Party Favors

OH thankyou with Tanya. I was so worried that she was going to try to sleep with him or something drastic. It was perfect.

Reviewer: gdcver (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Party Favors

Empress Josephine.  My date was a very sexy werewolf... I would have preferred a vampire.  Loved the chapter and look forward to your next update.  Cheers.

Reviewer: Jynxx (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Party Favors

Well, that went better than I expected!  I actually feel bad for Tanya - to have THAT as a parent has to be horrid!  Now, to get back to our Bella and Edward program... :-)

I'm curious as to how the big reveal will happen where they find out being each other's text pal.  There are so many possibilies.  Does one send a message near enough to the other that they notice the other receiving it?  Maybe causing a seed of curiousity to blossom?  Does Bella admit who she is texting with to ease Edward's feelings?  I'm dying to know :-)

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:09 AM · On: Party Favors

Great chapter and you even humanize Tanya. Honestly, I can sympathize with the girl, just a little bit. So Edward's a shipwrecked sailor and Bella's the mermaid who saves him. Wonder if that's the poem that clues him in...

Best Halloween costume... Statue of Liberty, 8 years old, complete with pointy hat and torch. :)

You Rock and congrats on your nomination!!

Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Party Favors

Jester when I was 5.. hand made


I voted for this story at the razzle dazzle awards

Reviewer: paris877 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:07 AM · On: Party Favors

awsome chapter !

Reviewer: spanglemaker (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:05 AM · On: Party Favors

Love this. And love that you managed to salvage Tanya by the end of it. This is a situation Edward can actually fix,, if the boy will open his mouth and speak! When, oh, when do they find out about their online connection??


I was the Statue of Liberty one year in grad school, complete with a functioning torch. There are drunken pictures out there on the internet....

Reviewer: iluvthecolts (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Truths

I just got done reading the whole thing so far.  Wow!  I really like it, but how many times can two people misunderstand each other?  I hope they find out they are who the other is writing to soon! 

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