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Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Angles
WOW! AWESOME! otherwise speechless right now.
Reviewer: Mastaspammip (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Angles
ahhhhhh they finally know its each other!!!
Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Angles
Q: How many accountants does it take to change a light bulb? A: What sort of answer did you have in mind ? LOL
OMFG!!!! They know!!! I'm so excited to see what happens next!!! And I would kill for a dress like Bella's for Halloween (though I don't think I could pull it off) :P
Awesome chapter!!! Hope you update real real soon!! :D
Thanx
Reviewer: tiderider (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Angles
more, love it, thanks great writing
Reviewer: Shelly2 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Visuals
You definitely have a gift for dialogue! I particularly enjoyed the discussion between Alice and Edward.
You also do a great job of showing both sides of a misunderstanding--Edward turns down the radio so he can hear Bella better, but she thinks he doesn't like her singing along to the radio.
Nice work!!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Angles
Ah they both know now.... I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Angles
Hmm, this makes my heart light and yet ache just a bit.....what will he do or say or text to her now? What will she do or reply? Will she feel that she has lost a friend and confidant or finally gained understanding? Same question to you Edward????
Reviewer: TheLambToHisLion (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Angles
gosh you make me wanna reread the entire thing all over again to see what edward finallyl sees in their exchanges.
lovely chapter(:
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Angles
AH! Finally! They are both realizing what happened! I had to go back and find the chapter where he first typed those lyrics (ch. 21...took me forever to find it! haha)I really love how they kind of realized it though..by him writing her those lyrics and then how she already knew them and starting singing along with him. I feel like it's a bad sign that she left before he woke up and all that. I hope she doesn't avoid him or something like that. I'm hoping that she was just shocked by her realizations and needed some time to think.And I'm kind of confused...was there importance in how she was thinking about when their mother died?? And the "Songs for Elizabeth" and how that made her feel like deja vue?? Great chapter! (why is my writing italicized?? Wont let me change it! haha)
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Angles
Just brilliant and AMAZING and I fricking LOVED it!!!
Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Angles
Omg. Did they finally figure out they been talking to eachother all this time? I can't wait to find out.
Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Angles
ahhhh, i can't wait for the next chapter!!! puuhhh-leeeeaasseee update soon!!!! like, now =)
Reviewer: Fairest of Them All (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Angles
It took them freaking long enough! I swear, they can be so daft! Please update soon
Reviewer: jennmo (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Angles
about time they figured it out, great job. hurry with next chap. can't wait to see what happens....
Reviewer: owlpostagain (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Angles
how many emo kids does it take to screw in a light bulb? nobody knows, they just sit in the corner and cry about it.
i'm pretty lame on the lightbulb jokes. and, incidentally, halloween costumes. but alice seems to have the lock on that one, hey sexy bella hey. fabulous chapter, i loved the first kiss in eleven days and seven hours, and of course, i CAN'T FUCKING WAIT for the next chapter cause they finally figured it outtt.
Reviewer: Shelly2 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Phenomena
Emmett was great in this chapter! His teasing banter with Edward and his reaction to Bella's shirt were a lot a of fun.
I love that in addition to their strong physical attraction to one another, Bella and Edward are also unknowingly seducing each other with words.
Reviewer: jasmineflava (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Angles
We're finally here! Yay! :)
It's not a proper review, no, more just a simple note of my excitement for this chapter and enjoyment xD.
Thank you for writing :). <3
Reviewer: MidnightStorms (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Angles
Ahahaaha I thought it was finally out!! Talk about a cliffy!
I'm literally vibrating with antisipation!
Love.It.
Mwah <3
Reviewer: Urs (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Angles
I am so estatic they found out the way they did. You did a great job sneaking that one in there, I didn't expect it at all. Wonderful chapter!
Reviewer: Shelly2 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Opening Lines
I know I'm coming to the party a little late, but I have to say that I really love this story!!!
I'm glad that Bella and Alice are starting to become friends.
The part where Edward says "Hi" to the computer screen was adorable and I like the different ways he described Bella's eyes.
I also liked the part where everyone was dancing except Edward. It was melancholy, but beautifully described.
Reviewer: sangwen (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Angles
so good!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Angles
Uh-oh....I think they both just figured it out...
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Angles
FINALLY. That was actually very subtle. Very tricky. I was confused at first =P
Loooooved the chapter.
Reviewer: prat43ec (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Angles
Ha.
Finally is all I have to say.
And I am so thankful to God that you updated. It'd been the most horrific day.
Love,
Prat.
Reviewer: vampgirl138 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Angles
Please, please update fast! I LOVE this story. Your poetry is amazing... Sexy and angsty and all that!
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