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Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Call Time
Ahem (blushing furiously), making out behind the school building on the far side of the sports field. And no, I won't tell you what we were doing (lol).
AWESOME chapter!!!! I loved it, fabulous writing. Everything in this chapter rocked. Alice smacking Edward's hand (lmao). James being his slimy self and using Edward's politeness to finagle Bella away from him. Edward realising that Bella has always been there for him, even when it hurt her. Chief Swan with the seemingly random comment about Swans mating for life. Edward running back to be there for Bella. Bella making a fool of James on stage (whoo hoo!). And best of all, Edward telling Bella he loves her!!!!
I love this story. I cannot wait for you to post the next chapter. Please post soon....
AliciaZA
Reviewer: gdcver (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Call Time
I am surprised to realize that I don't remember. The first time I heard them and believed them, I was in my car during a rain storm parked in my boyfriend's driveway. I most recently heard them upon waking next to my husband of 14 years. Thanks again for your wonderful story. This Bella is cracks me up.
Reviewer: eviltigereye (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Call Time
loved this chapter! i cannot wait for more!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Call Time
Great chapter. James is such an Ass.
Reviewer: Cullenfan (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Call Time
Omg I loved the part where Bella stood on the stool. The mental image was awesome. Loved this chapter! :)
Reviewer: prat43ec (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Call Time
In my bedroom, about 1 in the morning, and he said them. The most beautiful voice saying the smallest words.
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Call Time
I love this chapter it was awesome. Way to come through Edward. Always looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Call Time
Great chapter. I really liked EPOV. I'm so glad managed to perform and do so amazingly well! Love this story so much. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: meadow11 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 04:42 AM · On: Call Time
Ahhh- I don't quite remember where I was- but it was from my high school boyfriend - and he was my first love...
This chapter gave me goosebumps!! And I love the ribbon around the wrist.........
Reviewer: AwesomeSauce76 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 04:13 AM · On: Call Time
Standing in the moonlight outside my college dorm in the parking lot.
Another breathtaking chapter!
Reviewer: stacyc19791 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Opening Lines
Thanks for writing an awesome story. I couldn't wait to find out what was written on her shirt! Can't wait to see what else you will come up with as more chapters are revealed!
Reviewer: tattoochic911 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Call Time
I am so in love with this story!
I heard those three little words for the first time in the back of a Toyota Camry wagon, parked on a side street, during a thunderstorm. It was a long time ago, but I remember it perfectly. Even though I hadn't thought about it for a long time.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Call Time
Awe! I knew she would be able to do it.
Reviewer: Kat-ryn (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 02:49 AM · On: Call Time
yeah!!
Reviewer: SecretlySeverus (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 02:39 AM · On: Call Time
Hell yea, Bella!! The t-shirt was an AWESOME idea! Is James going to be happy with the response... or mad at her for 'stealing' the spotlight? And will Breaking Dawn include Bella in their performance?!?
When I heard those 'three little words' for the first time I was definitely too young to remember... :-p But from non-family I hear them on a daily basis, from someone who really matters :)
Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 02:39 AM · On: Bloody Hale
LOVED IT!
Reviewer: keola (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 01:58 AM · On: Call Time
hey another great chapter. poignant anfd hilarious...the performance and tee shirt are ace! I am very grateful for the quick updates ,too I look forward to them.
Reviewer: belwardislove (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Call Time
As always you never failed to make me giddy with happiness reading about this two. really wishing Bella would perform with BD...*sighs*
To answer your question: I was at church, right after mass with my supposed BFF waiting for the crowd to disperse when he turned to face me and just blurted it out, red-faced and all. I know. I loved church so much more after that *grins*
Reviewer: B-RizzleDizzle (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Call Time
I don't remember the first time I heard them...but I remember the first time they mattered...I was in front of my Latin Class with my boyfriend our Senior year of high school.
3 years later...we got married...ah, happy endings.
I adore every chapter you write. It's always so poetic. I'm sure I've said this before, but I truly envy every word you write and wish I could make them my own. Great job.
Reviewer: EB Idealist 81 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Call Time
the frist time i heard those words from someone that meant it I was 17. We were on a boat dock feeding the ducks, we weren't really talking, just enjoying being there with each other. Soft music from his stock stereo in his 92 Chrystler LaBarron convertable was playing in the background and he turned to me, stared for a few moments and told me "I think I am in love with you"... SWOON ... aww the memories of first love....
Reviewer: belami (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Call Time
I could just picture James being a total jerk off.
Await next installment.
Reviewer: lilsabeth (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Call Time
I can't remember! Isn't that sad? I'm taking it as a sign it wasn't true love. lol.
Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Dazed and Invited
LOVED it!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Call Time
Outside around a camp fire is the first time I heard "I love you."
That was awesome, Bella making fun of James. Loved it!
Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Call Time
How perfect was this chapter??? They are finally letting show how much they mean to eachother. E turning back to watch her performance... B marking him as her own with her brown ribbon. We're seeing a lighter side of them, and they're still texting one another :D
B giving the performance of a life time!!! Leaving her stage fright behind (Edward helping through the connection but not literally holding her hand) and winning the audience by landslide!! She's grown so much, I'm so proud of her **snif snif** Wonder what Charlie is going to say...
And the t-shirt!!! I got to get me one of those!!!
And James... who is not, per-se, evil (or is he?? and Victoria??), but very manipulative and conniving... I don't get him... at all... if he didn't want to be upstaged why did he choose Bella to perform with him?? He should have known she was going to outshine him. So glad the audience didn't fell for his tricks... though I wonder if that's just a biased EPOV... or if they (Bella and James) planned beforehand, to perform in antagonistic roles like that to captive the audience.
Anyhow, loved the chapter :)... are we gonna get Breaking Dawn's performance next?? Can't wait!! Is Bella going to join in??? I bet she is ;)
Thanx, as I said, perfect chapter :D
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