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Reviews For Tropic of Virgo
Reviewer: swan_song (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Hidden

Mustard and sourkraut. This is a new thing for me... thank-you NYC!

 

This was such an intense and unexpected chapter! I am completely on edge. I love the bottle cap plot device! Amazing as always.

I have reviewed this story more than any other! It fills like two pages of my reviews.

Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Hidden

Great story!  Perfect Chapter!

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Hidden

oh...somebody's going to die now...Edward's going to lose his shit, just watch!

I still think she's going to end up singing with the band...looking forward to it... :)

Reviewer: Quinnlyn Kilara (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Hidden

WOW!!!  GO GO GO....more, please!

Reviewer: spanglemaker (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Hidden

Awww, get her out of that room! Don't leave her in there all week!

Now I'm going to be freaking desperate for your next update. That is, more desperate than I am ordinarily, which is pretty desperate.

Love that he said it, way back at the beginning of the chapter. And loves the whole capture of James. Nicely done and full of tension and suspense.

 

I can't eat hotdogs. Years ago a friend referred to them as being made up of the lips and assholes of animals (meaning the left over bits) and it just stuck with me. Now I look at a hotdog and I think "lips and assholes".

Reviewer: dazedx3 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Hidden

janes right hotdogs are gross. update asap cliffhangers are the devil

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Hidden

oh my goodness, that was so good, I am on the edge of my seat!

I liike chili and cheese on my hotdog :)

Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Hidden

Ok...I don't really get it.  Why the hell was Victoria mad at Bella?  Was it because Bella ended up drinking the water as opposed to the spiked slushie or whatever it was?  But I'm not concerned about Victoria--it's Bella that I'm worried about.  I feel so bad for her, being trapped in that little room.  The good thing is that it seems as though Edward knows she's in there, and is going to get her out :-)

I love both ketchup and mustard on my hotdogs.  Nothing too fancy.  I didn't used to like mustard, but I've really warmed up to it in the last few years.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Hidden

You can't leave it there!! Will Edward get in there and get Bella out??

Please, please, please update soon?

I like ketchup on my hotdog. XD

Reviewer: MarathonKeyGirl (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Hidden

How dare you cliffy us!

Reviewer: hayleyjane (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Hidden

noooooooooooooooooo

Reviewer: tattoochic911 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Hidden

Another great chapter! Can't wait for more! I like chili and cheese on my dog. It's not good for you, but damn it's good!

Reviewer: Kalimando (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Hidden

This chapter is made of awesome. I want to read the next one now! I'm all about the instant gratification.

On the hotdog: Nothing disgusting. I like it simple- a little ketchup, maybe a bit of mustard.

Reviewer: SureYouAre (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Call Time

Sitting on my couch with the boy who later grew up to be my husband.  The performance was perfect!  I'm so glad Bella didn't just let James walk all over her like he thought he did, but of course, she's growing into her own.  Can't wait to find out what Breaking Dawn does!

Reviewer: shadesofgray (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Call Time

still waiting for that for the stage directions on that one...

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Call Time

sitting on the bumper after 4wheeling in the mud.

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Hunting

cold steak

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Party Favors

she-devil.  red heals, red hose and red corset....

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Short Ended Stick

obsession

Reviewer: Twilam (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Call Time

I was probably very small and I don't remember it at all because my parents tell me all the time, but I know you're not talking about it that way.. I was at a beach in italy around midnight.

love the story and you better update as soon as you can cause I sure as hell can't wait !

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Call Time

Too long ago to remember the first time but I tell all my people that every day. I loved the way Bella managed James. I could picture the whole scene and laughed out loud when she waved. Brava!

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:02 AM · On: Seeking

You write so beautifully it makes me ache.  I think you must be influencing me.  Only 1 more chapter left to read and then I'm all caught up.  Then I'll have withdrawal symptoms.

Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Hunting

That was a great resolution.  I loved the gradual dawning realisation they both went through.  The little tugs on their memories.  Thanks.

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Aisle C

HOT and rainy

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Short Ended Stick

Oh God, my heart is breaking.  For a boy who's good with words, he really failed big time just then.  I hope he can make it right with Bella. 

Word association:  Twilight - hot men

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