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Reviews For Tropic of Virgo
Reviewer: Pkullen (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Hidden

Mustard and relish.  Poor Bella - Edward will save her!  Will Bella be allowed to sing with Edward since James is out?

Reviewer: lia47 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Opening Lines

Mostly just "you have beautiful eyes" once something about being able to see in my eyes that I have a very old soul......pick up line..  :)

Reviewer: EmberRayne (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Hidden

i dont like hot dogs. they gross me out.

Reviewer: Oliviamk1218 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Visuals

I'm really loving your story.  I can't stop reading.


Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Hidden

I hope she's ok!!! That's a long time to be pinned up!!!! I am so glad James is out of the contest.... Bella can't be mad could she????  I would think she will be glad he's gone....I hope Edward hurrys.....and definantly mustard!!!!!!

Reviewer: Life Is Everything (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Hidden

I just found this fic and spent the past two nights reading it rather than sleeping much.  WOW.  I am amazed.  Thank you for writing!


Hotdog: mustard and onions.

Reviewer: lia47 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 10:39 PM · On: First Listen

I really like  how you have totally changed the original story and yet followed it so well at the same time.  I am already hooked!

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Hidden

glad they got james, now they have to catch that victoria bitch. i like my hot dog the regular way, ketchup, mayo and mustard.

Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Hidden

seriously? another cliffie?

Reviewer: lia47 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Nocturnal Prelude

very good beginning!  I am looking forward to more

Reviewer: holtzgirl (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Hidden

Sweet Relish, Kraut, and mustard. :D

Reviewer: wretchedlyinlovewithyou (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Hidden

Just mustard. A lot of it. I am American, after all. Loved the chapter, glad James is out of the way. I hope Bella's voice is better for them to sing together tomorrow.

Reviewer: vaughnrocks (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Hidden

JUMBO franked footlong with chili cheese on it :)
this chap was good, and yay, he lost and found bella!!!
cant wait for more, and somehow wonder how hes gonna get here out :)


Reviewer: dunk07 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Hidden

Gah! Cliffiest cliffie EVER!!

Reviewer: Charis (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Hidden

ketchup, mustard, and onions..  not very ideal for kissing

Reviewer: pacpal (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Hidden

Are you kidding ending it there!?!? Hurry hurry hurry!!!
PS - just mustard on a dog for me!

Reviewer: dutchvales (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Hidden

Ok, so my first review was written at 5am when I got up to let the dogs out. I saw you had updated and read it right there shivering in the early morning cold (it's winter here, southern hemisphere style).
I just reread it and there is so much to say again. I've been struggling for weeks for a way to describe your writing and lo! You say it yourself so much better than I ever could " slow fades, tidy and resolved". And just as the crowd you leave us wanting more. Clever clever you.
Yet I really really miss the poetry, because it's the combination of succintness and the lyricism that make this sooo good.
There's a part of me that feels it's all a bit pat, too neat and tied up, but then I think that that goes with the genre, what do you think? And I love seeing James get his comeuppance! And vitriolic Victoria? Finally she shows her true colours (I'm still nervous about Jane...)
Anyway, thanks again for another incredible chapter,I can't wait for the next one.
PS: sorry about any typos/spelling/grammar mistakes, I'm writing this on a blackberry with no spellcheck...

Reviewer: cookies_fortune (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Hidden

awesome chapter.....i love ur writting....its so captivating and walways leaves me wanting

cant wait for the next chapter....

i like chilean style hot dogs called completos....means complete in spanish

they have tomatoes, avocado, mayo and this really awesome chilli sauce that my mum makes....its all kinds of epic yummyness...i highly recommend it...


Reviewer: meimei42 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Hidden

I like ketchup and relish on my hot dog.


Oh Boy!!! You can't leave it there like that!  You're killing me!  LOL.  I can't wait for the next update.  If Edward thought he was seeing red before....

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Hidden

OMG! I had to read that chapter twice. Excellent!

Reviewer: jabare (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Hidden

ketchup, spicy brown mustard, and relish--all under the hot dog on the bun.

Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Hidden

Edward's easy take charge manner with everything with Lauren was awesome to watch. It's kind of nice to see a fic where Lauren and Jessica aren't the hated gossipy bitches they're usually portrayed as. I was wondering how long it would take them to find Bella. I guess Jasper had a reason for feeling anxious? Surely Edward wouldn't have thought she'd just skip out on seeing their set.

I like mustard and onions on my hot dog. Or chili. Or cornbread. ^_^

Reviewer: Stardust1 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Hidden

Ahhh! please no...why, oh why did you finish it there?.  Damn, I want to know what's gonna happen now!.

Chesse and pinaple sause, that the best way to have a hotdog.

Update soon or I'm going to die,


Reviewer: loss4words (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Hidden

NOT A THING...on my dog.  but the cheddar dogs are WIN.

I don't like her numb legs.  That had to have lasted a while, and it will possibly longer until they can get the door unlocked?

Dirty James

I LURV this story

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Hidden

Victoria is always so nasty and mean. Thank God for little Jane!

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