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Reviews For Tropic of Virgo
Reviewer: prat43ec (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Curtain

The little grin that my lover has on his face as he sees me for the first time on any day.

It makes me fly so high.

Reviewer: Alias (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Bloody Hale

Absolutely brilliant! Love that Bella is a darts pro. :-)

Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Curtain

What a super chapter!  This was exciting!

Reviewer: Lightgirl (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Curtain

Wow just wow-perfect and much like the audience....I want more!  

Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Curtain

My 8 month old daughter, Bella"s giggle!! (named before i read Twilight a year and a half ago!!!!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Curtain

Spinning around in circles until I feel dizzy :)

Great chapter. I love how Bella has tranformed in your story, from a shy, inexperienced girl to a girl who is brave enough to stand up and sing in front of seven thousand people.

The last two lines were beautiful. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Alias (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Visuals

I love how you work pieces from the original Twilight into your story. Genius!

Reviewer: mshaz (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Curtain

The first step out on stage and the uncertainty until the crowd give their approval of whatever performance they've been given. A play, movement project or singing. It doesn't matter. It all makes me feel like I'm high above the ground.

 

I wish I were at that concert, amazing chapter as always.

Reviewer: belwardislove (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 04:05 AM · On: Curtain

Yay for Bella!!! I'm so proud of her I got teary eyed at the end of this chapter *sniffles*

Reviewer: tigerwriter (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Curtain

Fanfiction.

 

Reviewer: hinakuu (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 03:41 AM · On: Curtain

running around at night, like i did when i was a child.

Reviewer: childrenwith4legs (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Curtain

I apologize for not reviewing every chapter like I should. 

I think this was one of my favorite chapters!  It was nice to see the explosion of Bella!  Starting with her being so shy and scared of voicing herself in daily life and petrified to sing infront of even one person to over 7,000 people and she's the center of attention and can handle.  And handle it well!   That was an awesome ride! 

You're writing is like magic, and keeps the reader interested.  Love your poetry.

Thanks for your awesome story telling!

Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Curtain

awesome :)

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Curtain

Awww that shit was the cutest everrrr.. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Curtain

Bellas strength in this story.This is the only fanfic out of the 100's I have read that makes me want to be Bella.

Reviewer: Ashmerlin (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Curtain

You ask, what makes me fly?

Your story I reply.

So I say make me fly, make me soar.

Feed my addiction and write some more!

 

XOXOXOXOX

Ashmelrin

Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Curtain

AMAZZZZINGGG!!!
loved it
just, amazing!
Oxo

Reviewer: AwesomeSauce76 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Curtain

What makes me fly? Your fucking writing!

Excellent, yet again!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Curtain

Driving with the top down- the winding blowing through my long hair with the radio blasting.  God I love living in San Diego...

Beautiful chapter- the fruition of Bella and Edwards texts.  To quote Lily Allen "...who'd have known when you flash upon my phone, I'd no longer be alone"...

Brava!

Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Curtain

Dancing and singing, makes me fly.

I'm so glad that Edward didn't play the DIVO of Rock and Roll and got jealous becos Bella got front credits. For a while though I thought he would, and I was thinking, how can he be so stupid?? he JUST got the girl... soooo relieved... :D

I really loved the way Edward played Jessica... well thought, indeed... and well deserved that broken nose... no bad deed goes unpunished... well, at least in your fic :P

Your Bella really has turned herself into a sexy sexy kitten :P That honey scene was hot :P And I especially liked how you mixed the iPhone into all of this... particularly since that piece of hi-tech device has been pivotal throughout the whole story :D

I love that Sarah McLachlan's song!!! :D I think it's the first time I recognize a song in your whole fic **drops head in shame ** LOL

**Sigh** "The world" yes...yes indeed ;)

Fantastic, awesome update!!

Thanx :D

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Curtain

Great job!  I loved them playing together!  "What's next" "The world"  that was perfect.

Reviewer: Inwen (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Curtain

I would have to say that reading this story makes me feel pretty euphoric, especially after that last chapter. Other then that, a really good laugh a thon with my friends brings nothing but joy and happiness to my life. What a great way to end that chapter, absolutely loved it...the world.

Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Curtain

lovely. new books by my favourite authors make me fly. because i'm a nerd like that. <3

Reviewer: Artie (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Curtain

Loud thumping music, driving fast and swimming naked (not necessarily in that order).

Thank you for another sweet, hot chapter and this amazing story, which I fear will be ending shortly.

Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Curtain

is this fic about to end?? NOOOO!! i'd miss their words too.. i really like their exchanges.. i'm so gonna miss them. =( and go jessica!! for punching victoria! haha.. didn't see that coming but i'm so glad she did. hehe..and i love love how edward took care of bella. he is sooo sweet. =) thanks for this update.. please don't make it end soon.. please..

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