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Reviews For Tropic of Virgo
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Dazed and Invited

Edward's overreacting again to things that he doesn't even know are true.  Oh, well...he'll get over it, but probably make everyone pissy in the process.  And Edward would make me something simple...cranberry and Grey Goose.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: AmayaBlack (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Curtain

Good music, worlds of love and the freedom of the air. Good chapter!!! I like it a lot

Reviewer: little frog (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Overture

Coke slushy, with a dash of cherry slushy! Oh yea!

Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Melodic

some days cereal and some days I make bacon, and either pancakes or waffles.

Reviewer: chinaberry (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Curtain

This story.

Reviewer: twilight0507 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Visuals

Medium 5 Creams, 2 Splenda, McDonalds or Dunkin : )...Your story rocks!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Curtain

yay, very good chapter!!! :)

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Curtain

Read it again. I love Sarah McL and Possession was the song that sold me on her and this chapter. I had to live that performance again. Awesome!

Reviewer: Anson Longbottom (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Curtain

Singing, watching my children giggle, and reading your story!!! : )

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Visuals

I loved the shopping trip.  It gave Bella a chance to get to know Alice a bit better.  I am looking forward to the awkward concert with the Wolves!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Curtain

I love the way Alice describes things, it's so... animated lol.  So cute at the end with the two of them.

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Phenomena

I liked your take on the van accident.  And I love their correspondence via the blog even more!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Opening Lines

Hahaha!  I loved the idea of Bella wearing that shirt.  Too funny. 

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Happysunshine_x3 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Curtain

Beautiful performance, both by Bella and the author. Your words are very captivating. :)

I truly relate to Bella so much in this story of yours; the yearning for someone, the insecurity, the desire to actually 'live.' And wonderful song choice, very much my favorite of Sarah's.

What makes me fly is the feeling of accomplishment, the feeling of bliss once I've conquered something, whether that be experiencing the trials of love, or managing to make peace with an old enemy.

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 11:35 AM · On: First Listen

So Bella's becoming acclimated to dreary, rainy Forks.  I can't help wondering how long it will be before she (or Edward, for that matter) make the connection between the blog accounts and the real people.  But I really like the pacing so far!  It seems I have a lot of catching up to do.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Alias (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Curtain

Wonderful! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: kinsano (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Curtain

I love your story!!!!!!  

Reviewer: niven (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Curtain

Just beautiful, love your story so much!

Reviewer: wretchedlyinlovewithyou (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Curtain

Reading the climaxes of lovely stories makes me fly.  And going really fast.  Great chapter, feeling the conclusion, and happy that they are all going to make it.

Reviewer: tamalady (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Curtain

Dancing makes me fly.  Don't want the story to end!

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Nocturnal Prelude

Interesting start!  I've heard a lot of good things about your story, so I wanted to check it out.  Though after that scene with Edward and Jessica, I kind of need some brain bleach, lol!  I can't wait for them to meet in Forks!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Twilam (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Overture

I just love every slushy I can get my hands on.

I'm a slushy addict,

I go to meetings and stuff.

well no not really...

but I am addicted to them,

that and your story ! 

Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Curtain

Thank you!  GReat Chapter!

Reviewer: Nessie_Bella_Edward (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 05:44 PM · On: First Listen

the song New Born by Muse is roaring in my head. esecially the line: The love for what you hide For bitterness inside Is growing like the new born.

this ficc is brilliant. the characters are different and i like the idea of the Quileute Wolves being a band. love the name 2. Love it!!

Reviewer: Nessie_Bella_Edward (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Nocturnal Prelude

I love this ficc i cant stop reading it. i love the way u changed the characters 2. Awesome!!

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