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Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

Oh my gosh my heart jumped when she screamed, love it

Author's Response:

Lol.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

Ah, a little of Jasper's past is revealed.  Wonder if it's going to catch up with him while he's still in the camp, or if Maria is just going to let text messages be enough.

Bella and Edward finally get some uninterrupted time.  Good for them!  After the crazy week they've had, it's good to get a little make out action.

Can't wait to hear about all of the night time fun.  I can only imagine what those six can find to do with less of the staff on hand to catch them.

Thanks for another fun chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Just thing of the trouble they can get into when it's bacically just them walking about the building.

Alice.

Reviewer: Twilight_fan_girl (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

OOoooooooooooh this should be good!!!! xD And lol she really is a bitch xD Come on write more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, please. Pretty please? Pretty gorgeous please with whipped cream, sprinkled AND a cherry on top??? :) Quickly!!!!! please xD

you rock xoxo



Author's Response:

Lol, shouldn't be long until the next update.

Alice.x

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

dang, i never ate peanut butter cookies eiither. I LOOOOOOVE IT. Update soonl, please



Author's Response:

Haha, thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

awesome!!! cant wait 4 u 2 update so i can see wat kind of mischief they get up 2 in the night! lol!

thats a sad story about Jazz.

PWEETY PWEETY PWEESE UPDATE SOON?!?!?



Author's Response:

The next chapter should be finished soon, so the wait hopefully wont be that long.

Alice.x

Reviewer: ashkan00dle (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

I love this story sooo much!!! I can't wait for the next bajillion chapters lol. I've constantly been checking the Most Recent list for this story it's my absolute favorite out of all the ones I've read and I've been on this site 24/7 for the past couple of weeks so you can imagine how many i've actually read lol. Keep it coming I love it!



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you. =D

Alice.x

Reviewer: bambieyes80 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

awwwwww i cant wait to see what they are going to do!!



Author's Response:

It shouldn't be too long a wait.

Alice.x

Reviewer: PyranicPhoenix (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

I can't stop laughing and gasping, its so funny and so interesting. I love it and must now say that rules are meant to be broken.



Author's Response:

Thank you muchly.

I agree, lol.

Alice.x

Reviewer: vivian_swan (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

Oh yay! more trouble!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FUN FUN FUN! :))



Author's Response:

Always, haha.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

hmmm i want to see an attempt at an escape



Author's Response:

Oh, don't worry there will be. All in good time. Haha.

Alice.x

Reviewer: grosie (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them

Officially my favorite story... LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

Yay! haha.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: elemirehum (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

lol, i hate you alot =D

we really need some fun times for their weekend fun =]

please say its on the way xx



Author's Response:

Haha.

Of course fun times are on the way.

Alice.x

Reviewer: 1234grace (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them

this is so good so far! can't wait til the next review! SO HURRY! lol.

Author's Response:

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

Maria?  Would that be his parole officer from his sketchy past???  Since Bella put her phone in her pocket, will this cause her problems in the next chapter..?

Mmmmm, cookies, with milk please?



Author's Response:

She's not a parole officer, but she is majorly involved in Jaspers past, which is quite colourful.

Her phone being in her pocket wotn cause her problems, but cause I'm in a good mood I'll tell you that she ain't going to have her phone for very much longer, none of them will.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: southern_belle123 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

FINNISH, OMFG FINNISH,,,,..... THIS IS MY , OFISHAL, FAV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Haha.

Wow, thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: iheartjasperhale (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

YAY MORE JASPER!!
he is so fucking sexy its unnatural :)
great writing im like in love with you.....not that im a leso or anything....you are a girl right??
haha ill just stop writing
xx

Reviewer: iheartjasperhale (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

YAY MORE JASPER!!
he is so fucking sexy its unnatural :)
great writing im like in love with you.....not that im a leso or anything....you are a girl right??
haha ill just stop writing
xx

Author's Response:

Lol, thank you.

Yes, I am a girl.

Alice.x

 

Reviewer: iheartjasperhale (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Boys will be Boys

your such a good writer!

amazing..needs more sex though ;) and more jasper



Author's Response:

Thank you muchly.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Bekkah (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

love the story...can't wait to find out who Maria is to Jasper & what's goin on with Jacob!!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

An update shouldn't be too much longer.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Yazzy (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

It makes me sad when you leave it like that ='[

I don't like cliffhangers

But...jasper and alice and emmet and rosalie finaly got it onnn!!!!

woop woop

continue soon please...without a cliffhanger?? XD

xXx



Author's Response:

Don't be sad. :P

Haha, yes, I thought since Bella and Edward keep getting to kiss then the other four deserved to aswell.

Alice.x

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

*faints*

you left us with a cliffie?

oh.my.god!!!

who is maria??!?! well in this story anyway ;)

 

since my last review ive been sitting here reading each chapter, i seriously love this story.

lauren sounds like a total mad-ass bitch, and i just love the 6 mainies in this, they are just awesome!!!

cant wait for an update, i will be waiting!



Author's Response:

Lol, Jasper will explain all in the next chapter, well, maybe not 'all' but he will explain quite a bit.

Haha, yes Lauren is a mad-ass bitch.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them

love this first chapter, especially the last line.

love how kick ass they all are ;D

Reviewer: PyranicPhoenix (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

I now feel compelled to look up Brooks and Dunn's 'My Maria.' This is an awesome story, and leaves me laughing everytime I read it. It gets a 10!



Author's Response:

Thank you, =D

Alice.x

Reviewer: kitkatkatie (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

I really like this story it reminds me of Were going where by vjgm and thats a compliment!!!!



Author's Response:

Oh wow ... thank you.

That is one of her stories I haven't gotten around to reading yet, but vjgm stories are always good so thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

Ooo, love the cliffie, and Bella's attitude still just cracks me up.  You're ideas are so great, thanks for sharing them with the rest of us!



Author's Response:

Thank you, it makes me happy that people are enjoying reading this and actually want to continue to read it.

Alice.x

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