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Reviewer: vivian_swan (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 16 - A Midnight Wander

Oley Mascots!!! YEAH! I bet Lauren will be experiencing severe pain after they've skillfuly schemed against her. I believe it sould be more than just pain, because total humiliation is also a winner! -----and on to the story! Duh i love it, as usual. I am totally engrossed and i cannot wait for te next chapter! Or the one after that... and until it ends! Whooopy!



Author's Response:

Haha, glad you are still enjoying it.

Alice.x

Reviewer: kouklitsa (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 16 - A Midnight Wander

I don't know what Baked Alaska or Mango Mochi is but i like your story anyway! Could you please offer up some good ol' fashioned normal stuff that still tastes good?? I love your Edward by the way!!



Author's Response:

Haha, me niether, but people request them and I can't say no...google pictures of them.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 16 - A Midnight Wander

hey their littleexcape was really good =] i love the how edward and bella tease each other lol =] i cant wait for lauren to get her ass kicked =]



Author's Response:

Haha, hopefully Lauren's ass kicking won't dissapoint.

Alice.x

Reviewer: bella93 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

OMG AWESOME!!!!

KEEP GOING!!!

is there gona be a lemon???

Reviewer: Heatherina (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

I love it. I can't wait for them to get up to some naughty shenangins in the cover of the night. I'm very excited and eager for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Bella and Edward Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

Reviewer: twilightlover1 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

 plz continue

Reviewer: Bekkah (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

ohhh snapp...hahah im excited! i love badass edward he's GREAT & 10x sexier than he normally is!



Author's Response:

Lol.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: princessitavalevale (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

aaaw I love your story! i like the rebels bella, alice, rose, edward, jasper and emmet hehe

pls continueeee!!!!!!

XOXO



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Boom_Ox (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

ooooooo... loveeeed this chapter...

updateeeee quick xD

*



Author's Response:

Thank you.

You're in luck, the next chapter is with my beta now, so it shouldn't be long until it's up.

Alice.x

Reviewer: CeeClearwater (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

PEANUT BUTTER COOKIES!!! *eats them* thanks you!!!!  ok and i hate you by the way for ending it the way you did!! grrr i cant wait for the next chapter!! :D and as always i request sexy times with Bella and Edward  :D

 

ok so for next time how about we get mango mochi!! yummm



Author's Response:

Haha, you wont have to wait long for the next chapter, it's with my beta now.

Alice.x

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

EEEEEEEEEE

i actually squealed when i got an email saying there was an update here ;D

 

poor jasper that story is horrible, i HATE maria!!! and her mob family ;)

i love the ending too, wonder what they will get up too ;D



Author's Response:

Lol.

I hate Maria too.

You don't have to wait long to find out, the next chapter is with my beta now.

Alice.x

Reviewer: grosie (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

I loved this chapter! Please update ASAP, I can't get enough!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

The next chapter is half written, so it should be finished soon.

Alice.x

Reviewer: book_lover224 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

ha.  i was wondering when something like that was going to happen! cant wait for the next chapter. please update soon!! :)



Author's Response:

The next chapter is half written, shouldn't be a long wait at the rate I am writting it.

Alice.x

Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

oh this is getting good



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: elemirehum (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

woowoo, ok i am loving this story!! jaspers backstory scares me a little bt i love the edward and bella in your story =]

love it love it love it

nd even though i know they have like just met, im hoping that some gud fun passion will occur in the next chapter =]

x



Author's Response:

Haha, thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: vampirelust7 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

These kids just don't get enough...of trouble, do they?



Author's Response:

Haha. No, I don't think they do. :P

Alice.x

Reviewer: SuperChick618 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

oooooooh!! i really liked this chapter! aside from finding out jaspers situation which is tres interesting - u let edward and bella have no interuptions! yay!

 

im so excited to see where this one is leading to! :D



Author's Response:

lol, thank you. Well it was about time someone didn't break up their kissing.

Alice.x

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

hey jaspers story was cool like i mean it was a good idea the ending was funny as well =]



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: ali_vera (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

Wow you're amazing. I totally love this story. Have you ever been to boot camp? It reminds me of my month and a half stay. Gag. But you're a genious so keep it up!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Nope, I haven't.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Seventeen Forever (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

YAY COOKIES!!!!!!!! i liked it, i thought jasper's story was very believable. I can't wait to see what the guys have planned! can we have baked alaska next?



Author's Response:

Thank you. I was worrying that it wouldn't be believable, so Yay! Lol.

Alice.x 

Reviewer: gee3195 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

Loved it. It was awesome. I can't wait for more!

 

xx. Gee.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

ohh man maria is crazy thats insane i wonder what edward has planned



Author's Response:

That she is.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Jojo3508 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

aw, poor Jasper. I hope in the end he finds some way of that mess!



Author's Response:

Hopefully he will.

Alice.x

Reviewer: kaystu (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South

how dare you end with that, now i'm all giddy and bouncing in my seat wondering what will happen with ExB!!!! damn woman, you're killing me, a swift update best be in the works, bc i am so in love with this story and anxiously await to read what comes next!! xox



Author's Response:

Haha, I do plan for the next chapter to be up quickly.

Thank you.

Alice.x

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