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Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Payback's a Bitch
:D
love it.
that mad bitch deserved that! and mike newton *rolls eyes* who is he trying to kid?!?! facing up to jasper.. i love angry jasper :D
and nice bit of hotness at the end!
Author's Response: Haha, I love angry Jasper too ... it's the bad boy thing. :P
Alice.x
Author's Response: Haha, I love angry Jasper too ... it's the bad boy thing. :P
Alice.x
Reviewer: grosie (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Payback's a Bitch
Loved this chapter! Thanks for updating so fast.
Author's Response: Thank you ... and your welcome. lol.
Alice.x
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Payback's a Bitch
hey lol loved the ass kicking and they got a swing at mike as well brilliant lol =] the ending was cool as well =]
Author's Response: Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Blood donor (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Payback's a Bitch
=] need i say more?
Author's Response: Mmmm, nope ... A smile is good, it makes me smile in return.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: freesiagirl171 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Payback's a Bitch
nnnooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo please dont stop it's awsome i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: lol, I shouldn't smile at the word 'no', but I like that you want to keep reading, so I'm smiling.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Miz (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Payback's a Bitch
haha i love this story, i had a friend end up at one of these bootcamp things back in high school and it seems similar, although his was a wilderness training one...
Author's Response: Oh, wilderness training, fun(!) lol.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Payback's a Bitch
oh my godddd
AMAZING!!
seriously, LOVE IT
cant wait for more
Oxo
Author's Response: =D
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: TwilightIsMyLifeNow (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Payback's a Bitch
As much as I don't really like violence, Lauren had it coming ;) & also, it was hilarious - gosh, does that make me sound really, odd? Meh! :D
Anyway, I'm rambling, so I'll stop now ;)
For the good of my sanity; update soon! (please ;o)
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm not much of a fan on writing violence, but I think it fits in the context of this story.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Seventeen Forever (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Payback's a Bitch
Ok when the girls beat the crap out of lauren, that was hilarious!!! But my fav so far is when Jasper went all medevil on Mike. But the most hilarious thing about this story is that the girls have only been here for what like 3 days!!! OMG Every time this story is updated me and my 2 other friends like text, email, or call each other to tell that there is a new chapter. We love your story and can't wait to read more.
Can I have Fried Ice Cream next? :D
Author's Response: Haha, I do like Jasper being all dark and scary.
Yeah, the girls really know how to make the most of their time, don't they?
Thank you muchly.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Seventeen Forever (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Payback's a Bitch
Ok when the girls beat the crap out of lauren, that was hilarious!!! But my fav so far is when Jasper went all medevil on Mike. But the most hilarious thing about this story is that the girls have only been here for what like 3 days!!! OMG Every time this story is updated me and my 2 other friends like text, email, or call each other to tell that there is a new chapter. We love your story and can't wait to read more.
Can I have Fried Ice Cream next? :D
Reviewer: Seventeen Forever (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 16 - A Midnight Wander
YAY i get baked alaska!!! Ok This chapter was awesome. I couldn't wait to find out what they were going to do! and this fulfilled my wish. I can't wait to read on!
Author's Response: Lol, enjoy your food.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Payback's a Bitch
I loooooooooooooooooooooove it. i want to know the tattos stories! in the BCE(boot camp extras). please update soon. i love this fic.
Author's Response: Thank you.
It will be a chapter in extras, it will be the one after I've done all of their arrests.
Alice.x
Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Payback's a Bitch
mmm tattos interesing imcurous toknow what they mean or how they got them
Author's Response: There's a small paragraph about them in chapter two, but one of the chapters in extra's is going to be about them.
Alice.x
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 16 - A Midnight Wander
i love it. i cant believe i lost this chapter. twilighted usually alerts me when my favs are updated. huh, i love it. going to next chap to see laurens punishment
Reviewer: selene_romanov (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Payback's a Bitch
this story gets better and better, plz update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Payback's a Bitch
Another fun filled chapter, thank you. Glad everyone got their chance to get out a little of their anger. Don't know what Aro's so bent out of shape about, punching is a healthy form of dispensing pent up anger :) Maybe Lauren and Mike weren't the best choice of targets, but they did have it coming. You just don't mess with a bitch and not expect it to come back and bite you in the ass.
Thanks for the fun!
Author's Response: Haha, well Lauren and Mike aren't smart enough to realise that angering the six of them isn't the greatest choice.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: princessitavalevale (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Payback's a Bitch
yay! new chapter!
t4p!!! =) i really like it!
pls continue soon!!!!!
XOXO
Author's Response: Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: themoose-within (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them
I WAS TOTALLY THE 400th REVIEW ON THIS STORY. And felt the need to share that..... so hah!
Reviewer: themoose-within (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Payback's a Bitch
I'm sorry I didn't review last chapter! Will I ever be forgiven?
But yeah - basically, I did enjoy Lauren's beating. I thought it would have been a little more epic and brutal so was a little disappointed in that aspect; but Mike's misguided attempts at chivalry was great to watch AND unanticipated, so that more than made up for that.
Daisy Duke's are a classic, Bella's right. Sadly my own pair are too big... I must have shrunk or something. Damnit.
Author's Response: Of course you are forgiven.
Oh they ain't finished with Lauren yet, poor girl, I almost feel sorry for her. lol. I thought I'd make Mike man-up a bit, even if his attempts failed.
They are that. I need a new pair myself.
400th review! Wooo!
Alice.x
Reviewer: JayJayHale (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Payback's a Bitch
Holy crap, you drop F bombs like pidgeons drop poop on my windscreen. (Little fuckers! One day I will get them). And people think my Bella is bad ass...your one is downright MENTAL! :)
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, Bella in this story does like to swear a lot.
Alice.x
Reviewer: TeamAlice (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 16 - A Midnight Wander
I wanna have...... Seven layer chocolate cake! YUM!
Author's Response: Oh, that does sound yummy.
Alice.x
Reviewer: smilingrightnow7 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 16 - A Midnight Wander
I want fresh out of the oven Triple Chocolate Chip Cookies for the next review.
Still lovin' it
Author's Response: I've already submitted the next chapter, but I promise you will get your cookies with chapter eighteen.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: southern_belle123 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them
OMFG... that is the fuckingest coolest thing ever (sorry for the cussing, Not really thow :P) SOOOO SICKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: southern_belle123 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them
Is your name Alice, or do you just love her that much?? Dont worry ,,I LOVE her tooo :P
Author's Response: Yes, my name really is Alice.
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 16 - A Midnight Wander
Hmmm, I'd like to try the Mango Mochi, whatever it is, sounds yummy!
I'm thinking Lauren's getting a new bed assignment right now, for her own protection.
As for Bella and Edward, I don't think they're moving that fast, just enough to make it interesting, ya, that's it, interesting!
Thanks for the total time counts, but you left off Lauren's times. I'm thinking she's not being punished after all, but put there as a plant to keep an eye on Bella, Alice and Rosalie. I hope she's getting paid well!!! LMFAO
Author's Response: Thank you.
Lauren's time counts aren't there because I haven't actually decided how many months she has actually been there and how many she has left. As for her punishment, Aro doesn't think she has done anything wrong in the past few days, even though she did technacally leave her room when she wasn't ment to, he saw it as her keeping to the rules and wanting others to do the same. What he doesn't realise is that Lauren only wanted to get them into trouble, because that's what Lauren does.
Alice.x
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