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Reviewer: resaswim (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Better Accommodation

lol nice one for the cali stuff!!! I'm needing to go there soon!



Author's Response:

Me too.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: twizebra_09 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Better Accommodation

thank you for an EXCELLENT chapter. wait.wait.

can't they get caught cuase they could track the cell phones and credit cards? BUT PLEASE D0N'T LET THEM GET CAUGHT.! &&my imagination kinda worked out becuase there is no lemony goodnes; but its OKAY :]]

UPDATE :DD



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Yes, they could, that thought escaped them in all the excitement. You'll just have to wait and see what the consequences for that are. :P

Alice.x 

Reviewer: Csinut18 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Better Accommodation

I hope they dont get caught i like them on the run more imagination time for lemons in our heads



Author's Response:

Lol.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: LovesHisGoldenEyes1901 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Better Accommodation

I think I want a half naked Edward dipped in chocolate with marshmellows on top. Yummy:] I wouldn't want the chocolate Edward cuz when I ate him that would mean no more Edward:[ But, if I choose this one, not only do I get Eddie, but I also get chocolate! Hehe. Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next!



Author's Response:

Lol, good thinking.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: missloonylovegood (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Better Accommodation

*groans* You're a jerk. XP

 

There's NO WAY they can get away with this. The news stations will get word pretty quickly and they are rather distinctive looking teens.



Author's Response:

Lol.

That is true, but don't loose hope, it could go either way.

Alice.x

Reviewer: jennifer_lyn215 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Better Accommodation

i think i might combust if there is no sexytime!!!! gah!



Author's Response:

Lol, sorry about that, please don't combust.

Alice.x

Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Better Accommodation

I'm happy that they made good on their escape, but I get the distinct feeling that less would have been more if they wanted to keep their freedom too. As street smart as the six of them are, I'm surprised that they didn't realize that credit cards are traceable...not to mention checking into high end hotels under their own names. But maybe I'm just being a party pooper...lol. Either way, I hope they enjoy it while it last. It was definitely a fun chapter to read. :)



Author's Response:

Well, that little thought escaped their minds in all the excitement, it didn't escape mine though. *Grins wickedly*

lol.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Vamp_by_nature (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Better Accommodation

i dont hate you
i love you!!!!!
if you update soon
oh my god they escaped!!!!!!!!!!!
YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY!!!!!!!
love love love love love loved love this story soooooooooooooooooo so so so so very much!!!!
;)

Author's Response:

Lmao.

Thank you muchly.

Alice.x

Reviewer: mary jane88 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Better Accommodation

come on one little lemon plzz!!!



Author's Response:

Haha, sorry.

Alice.x

Reviewer: princessitavalevale (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Better Accommodation

yay yay yay!!

 

=)

 

continue soon pls!!

 

XOXO



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Better Accommodation

well, SF is my dream too. although is much harder for me, considering im brazillian and everyhtin...I looooove it. update soon, please.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: ashtoncullen2010 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 22 - The Great Escape

wowww im so happy they finally escaped. but i wonder, do they get caught and have to go back or do they just stay hidden and never go backk?

hmmmm..... hahaha i really enjoy this story. pleasee continue with the next chapterr its making me anxiouss(:



Author's Response:

Haha, you'll have to wait for the next few chapters to find that out.

You won't have to wait long, the next chapter is with my beta now.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: twizebra_09 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 22 - The Great Escape

so freakin good(:

i really hope there plan works out for the best. cuhs demitri and felix were getting annoying and reminded me of my past p.e. teachers.!

&& i would love an oreo/edward sundae



Author's Response:

Lol, Felix and Demetri are a pain. Shame you had teachers like them.

That sounds yummy. :P

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 22 - The Great Escape

Nice I hope they make it out of town without getting caught. What will they do for money????



Author's Response:

They won't have to worry about money if they can keep away from the boot camp, you'll find out why at the begining of the next chapter.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 22 - The Great Escape

And ... they're out!  Now the question is, are they going to remain out, or is their fun going to be short lived?  Will their be happiness and mayhem in their futures, or our six rebels destined to more punishment at the hands of Aro and his ruthless crew?  I guess we'll just have to sit tight and see.  Can't wait!  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Lol, very good questions that will all be answered in time. :P

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 22 - The Great Escape

Mmmmm, Oreo cupcakes, with a dollop of Edward - Scrumptious!!!

I agree that this chapter turned out right.  Too bad Mr. Walker wasn't left something to remind him of the group - like several sheets of toilet paper with a rude comment on it!  One sheet for every essay they owed.  LOL

If they kept the leftover food items for the escape - not knowing how far from civilization this place was, it could be their only source of food for a while.  As long as they stay away from my Oreo Cupcakes!!!

Sure glad the group are acrobatic types.  I was sure Bella would hit the wall, at least once, before barely getting over.  He he he he  I sure hope they don't get caught, at least too soon.

Excellent work!



Author's Response:

Haha, poor fella.

They know what city they are in, Edward is the only one that knows roughly where they are within that city, because of Nessie and his aunt and uncle. No doubt Emmett will have packed as much food as he could though. I'll make sure to keep them away from your cupcakes. :P

Damn, that would have been funny. Why didn't I think of that? Lol.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: TeamAlice (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 22 - The Great Escape

 I am sooooo not listening to you any more! I *metaphorically* punched myself and now I have a headache and a bruise! on the plus side.... I now attract all the bad boys and bikers...they think I'm tough. I tell thim I got in a bar fight with a man twice my weight, two feet taller than Me, Horns on his forhead and a sour disposition...



Author's Response:

Lmao, oh dear.

I seriously can't stop laughing now, thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: chellik (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 22 - The Great Escape

EEEK!! DO THEY GET CAUGHT!?!?

I'm nervous already for the next chapter cos im such a geek 8-) haha well done x



Author's Response:

lol, I ain't going to tell you that. :P Just cause I can.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Vamp_by_nature (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them

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Reviewer: green-eyed storywritter (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 22 - The Great Escape

Oh yeah - leaping a wall and jump through barbed wire ain't easy,I can tell you from experience (and you really don't want to know why did I jump, or from were - I shudder just remembering).

Good chapter, anyway!



Author's Response:

Lmao, oh dear.

Thank you muchly.

Alice.x

Reviewer: twizebra_09 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Sinful Teasing

laughed a lot in this chapter.

bella is a teasy person



Author's Response:

That she is.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: twizebra_09 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Pizza and Boys

EXCELLENT! mike is annoying and deserves what he got. 

L0VED this chapter.



Author's Response:

Yes, yes he did. Lol.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: redsnapdragon (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 22 - The Great Escape

Just read all 22 chapters today - what a fun story!  Love how ballsy they all are.  Thanks for a great read, please keep writing! :)



Author's Response:

Wow, the fact you read it all in one day makes me smile.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: smilingrightnow7 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 22 - The Great Escape

This isn't going to end now that they've escaped is it?!?!?!?!?!?! Please don't do that! I will jusat be depressed



Author's Response:

Not yet, no. I've still got a few things I want to put into this story (one of which I'm hoping will cause a few jaws to drop) so there's still a bit to go.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Wolf_Lover (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 22 - The Great Escape

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!?!?!?!?!??! that chapter was hauling some serious ass!?!?!?oh yeah that was totally wicked!?!?! you have to post aas quickly as possible because i'm addicted to Boot Camp!?!?!?

Peace Love & Twilight

Wolfie



Author's Response:

Haha, thank you.

The next chapter is under construction.

Alice.x

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