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Reviewer: jess25 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 25 - New Shoes
Loved it
Author's Response: =D
Thank you
Alice.x
Reviewer: Kate77 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 25 - New Shoes
Edward, Emmett and Jasper sandwitch with cheesecake in between. mmm If your story was that dessert, thats what it would taste like.
Author's Response: One word ... Yummy! Lol.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: redsnapdragon (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 25 - New Shoes
This story continues to be delicious! I'm still worried about the money trail they're leaving in their wave. But they sure are living it up while they can :) Thanks for the fun.
Author's Response: Yeah, they just want to have a lot of fun at the moment.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: LovesHisGoldenEyes1901 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 25 - New Shoes
Of course you gotta have the shirtless Edward with whip cream and chocolate syrup! That's just like a no brainer! I love your story, and I literally squealed when I saw you updated. Can't wait for more!
-LovesHisGoldenEyes1901
Author's Response: Lol, it makes me oddly happy that people get excited about my story being updated.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 25 - New Shoes
gahh!
LOVE IT!
cant wait for more
Oxo
Author's Response: Yay!
Thank you.
Alice.c
Reviewer: chellik (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Better Accommodation
NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! you cant make it end like that!!
good chapter except for the whole cliffhanger bit. I'll be waiting in ernest until the next update!!
Chellik x
Author's Response: Haha, glad you like it though.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: kitkatkatie (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 24 - A Brother's Advice
Oh my GOD i love this story soooo much thank you i have no idea what is going to happen at the end but i hope you do! Great story update soon!
Author's Response: I have some idea, lmao.
Thank you.
The next chapter is in the queue.
Alice.x
Reviewer: themoose-within (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 24 - A Brother's Advice
OH, and it was a great chapter. I forgot to mention that. I particularly enjoyed Angela's little bit in there.
I noticed the credit card thing last chapter! Hah, masters of deciet indeed...nat. Well, a bit seeming as how they actually escaped in the first place. But still.
Author's Response: Lol, everything couldn't be perfect with their escape.
Thanks for the double review, =D
Alice.x
Reviewer: themoose-within (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 24 - A Brother's Advice
So, I'm amazed. For probably the first time you won't get a review from me saying how I neglected schoolwork to read this, because I actually held off until after my last exam was finished! Aaaahmazing.
I name things really weird names, like Ferdinand and Alfred and Gregor (although there's a legit reason behind that one) so you probably don't want my input :P
It's great how everyone has grown from wanting actual food to just a selection of the guys. Occaisionally the guys drizzled in something like chocolate, but I doubt the chocolate is the main attraction. Look what you've done to us!
Author's Response: Woo, I hope you did well in your exam.
Haha.
Yeah, I did notice that a few chapters back. I have a lot of dirty minded readers, it's okay since I'm pretty dirty minded too. :P
Reviewer: Regetta (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 24 - A Brother's Advice
Awesomeness, update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you.
The next chapter should be up soon.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Kate77 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 24 - A Brother's Advice
Edward Emmett and Jasper yum
Author's Response: Yup, 'yum' is good word choice with those three. Haha.
Alice.x
Reviewer: blovesvampires (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 24 - A Brother's Advice
I knew they shouldn't have been using there credit cards. They can be easily tracked, I was wondering if you would put something like that in :) I can't wait for the next chapterrrrrr :) xxxxxx
Author's Response: Yeh, they all kind of forgot about it in all the excitement. They were just so happy to be out of Boot Camp that they didn't think about everything.
The next chapter should be up soon.
Thanks.
Alice.x
Reviewer: blovesvampires (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Better Accommodation
"I would say ‘knock yourselves out’ again, but TeamAlice took it seriously last chapter. :P"
That cracked me up :L:L:L
WOOO! Edward and Bella with no interuptions ;) I wonder what the other 4 are up to at that moment too. :) xxx
Reviewer: blovesvampires (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 22 - The Great Escape
This is my favourite chapter! I really hope they stay out of that stupid Camp. :D I love how Rose came up with the idea. I love it even moreeeee than beforee :) xxxx
Reviewer: blovesvampires (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Letter's From Home
Aww, Alice calms Jaspr down. That's sweet. :) I loved the letters. I knew they wouldn't approve of Bella. ;) xx
Reviewer: blovesvampires (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Visitors
Hahah, I love Edwards parents, they crack me up. :) xx
Reviewer: blovesvampires (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 16 - A Midnight Wander
I've been reading this story since you started writing it, but I forgot to review, so I'm making it up now. I love this story. I think it is HILAROUS! :) xx
Author's Response: Thanks for coming back to review.
I'm glad you like the story.
Alice.x
Reviewer: bthebohemian (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 24 - A Brother's Advice
Hahah. I was thinking that the Boot Camp could track there credit cards and they shouldn't be using them. :L I wonder how long they will last outside of Boot Camp. Love the banner BTW. It's awesome :) xxx
Author's Response: Thank you.
JayJayHale did an awesome job with the banner. :D
Alice.x
Reviewer: RandomBlonde (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 24 - A Brother's Advice
I think its mandatory for emmett to have a brother named Emerson. ... ok that was totally random but hey...i really like that name.
Really fantastic chapter! please please PLEASE do not send them back to boot camp...that just wont be fun...well ok... it will be...ok update soon!
I'd like coffee ice cream please! lol
~RandomBlonde
Author's Response: Haha.
Thank you muchly, but I ain't saying if they stay free or not. :P
Alice.x
Reviewer: Seventeen Forever (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 24 - A Brother's Advice
hm... i've always liked the names luke, connor, and jake for boys. for his little sister... i like the name nikki
LOVE THIS STORY, can't wait to read more, can i have angel food cake with edward serving it in all white and angel wings.... haha cheesy but yeah
Author's Response: Thanks for the name suggestions.
The next chapter should be up soon, it's getting beta'd at the moment.
Alice.x
Reviewer: AngelFromMyNightmare (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 24 - A Brother's Advice
i like thinking of emmett from a big family...it just makes sense for him to have brothers and sisters
how cute hehe
Author's Response: Same.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: jasmineflava (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 24 - A Brother's Advice
Names! *squee*! :D
Aidan, :D
Finbar!
Shannon!
Finbar...cause, well, it's my history professor's name and I had my history exam 2 days ago.
It's ridiculously perfect. "Emmett, where's Finbar?" I CAN SEE IT NOW!
...Aidan seems perfect for an Emmett-brother. Shannon seems to be quite feminine and delicate but "don't-fuck-with-me" in a Rosalie type way, which I reckon Emmett's sister would be - girly, but strong from living with those brothers!
Cheesecake would be lovely ;)
Tea and scones with jam would be even better :D.
Author's Response: Lmao, thanks for the name suggestions.
mmm ... Cheesecake!
Alice.x
Reviewer: Quirky_Girl (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 24 - A Brother's Advice
Ohhh, call Emmett's little sister Emily! See how cute it is? Emmett and Emily. And let her adore her big brother, plllllllleeeeeeease?
Author's Response: Lol, thank you for the name suggestion. Don't worry, the whole family gets along really well, and how could she not adore Emmett?
Alice.x
Reviewer: smilingrightnow7 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 24 - A Brother's Advice
Five year old sister's name: Alicia. Pronounced (E-lee-she-a)
Could care less about the brother's names :) (not that I could think of any anyway.)
Author's Response: Lol, thank you for the name suggestion.
Alice.x
Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 24 - A Brother's Advice
Another fun chapter, thank you!
Glad you included the fact about tracing the credit cards. I'll admit, that bothered me a little last chapter. Especially since they thought out everything else for the escape so carefully, it surprised me they would have overlooked such an important detail.
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks.
Well I couldn't have them make everything perfect, :P.
The next chapter sould be up soon, I'm just getting it beta'd at the moment.
Alice.x
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