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Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

oh no!  I think they've been busted!  Too bad they were all too drunk off of their asses to put two and two together!

Kathy M.



Author's Response:

=P

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: thenxtmrscullen (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

great story!. i cant wait 2 see wat happens next!
fake food request:::Triple chocolate cake with Emmet on top!
ur a great writer. keep up the good work :)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much.

Alice.x

Reviewer: twizebra_09 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

DAMN! i think the hotel people know who they are. well, at least for them it was fun while it lasted. but hopefully Rose will find a way to escape again. i love it how they're drunk, very fun and easy going :) i would love to see the sight of Emment drunk :D 

p.s. love your writting like always.



Author's Response:

Lol, Emmett drunk would be funny to see.

Thank you. =D

Alice.x

Reviewer: jacoblackismybitch (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 22 - The Great Escape

have you ever read the book boot camp? really really good. its main character's name is garrett, which is why i ask. its a tearjerker. i strongly advise that you read it, you will never think of the adult world again. the book After goes in that same catagory. k, im done ranting now. Great story!



Author's Response:

No I haven't, but I will look it up.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: like_diamonds (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

I refuse to lower my pitchfork until the next chapter is up!

Oh nos! This looky bad to me =/ Silly loud drunks =)

Thankyou for the delicious Jasper - I mean, marshmallows! The couch was inspired. I think I need one!



Author's Response:

*Shouts over wall* Please put the pitchfork down. lol.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

hey cool chap awwwww they are gonna get caught =/



Author's Response:

Thank you.

*Nods*

Alice.x

Reviewer: bella2k9 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

aw please let them get away! another epic escape is in order i believe x

 



Author's Response:

Lol, I'm sorry, but it has to happen.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Caitlincullen1995 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

God i love this story!
Just keeps you wanting more!

Btw i would love a lemon tart served with a whipped cream covered jasper, just because he's sexy ;)

Author's Response:

*Grins like Emmett*

Thank you.

(Jasper is sexy)

Alice.x

Reviewer: neishari (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

Next chapter you could use babaganushy for your food tis very exotic

I LOVE UR STORIES!!!!!! Now can i has my imaginary apple?



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Yes, you can...enjoy.

Alice.x

Reviewer: neishari (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Letter's From Home

The choco-Edward really got my attention but couldnt it been Jasper? Any way i love your storie and your way chaper imaginary foods

sry i was spelling so bad but i am exited to read the rest of your storie!

B.O.L,Neishari∞                                                                                                              

 



Author's Response:

Haha.

Thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying my story.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 24 - A Brother's Advice

Names: Jaxon, Cole, Christopher and Kalynne



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

It would be great if the six of them could return as some kind of hero's, rather than something akin to dead skunk roadkill.  But maybe.....the security guards don't identify them as six escapees, but a rock band????? or even foreign exchange students!!!???  LOL   Was there any kind of reward posted for their return???  Maybe Alice could buy them out??!!    Hey, it could happen.....                                 (Courtesy of MySpace, Quizzes by Quibblo, Which Sexy Dessert Are You? )      I would love Edward's Frozen Banana on a Stick!                                                 -a frozen banana on a stick, hard, cold, covered in the smoothest, creamiest, sinfully delicious chocolate with crunchy, sugary toppings and of course, nuts, that I love to devour. It has the fruity surprise of a healthy food item, with all the naughtiness of a dessert. The best of both worlds!                                                     I  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Haha, they would make a very good rock band.

There most likely was, I didn't really think of that, but I suppose there would be a reward.

I'd love a frozen banana too. :P

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Quirky_Girl (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

They've found them!  Run!  (hids badly behind the hotel curtains, complete with shoes sticking out from underneath)

Did I mention I have you on my fav author list?  I think I deserve Alice's new shoes.  I mean, it's not like she's going to be wearing them anytime soon...

Lastly, I request the Cullen men's (to include Carlisle) clones.  That way, I don't have to fight the Cullen women for their husbands (let's face it, I'd lose), and I don't have to share!  Do you see the brilliance of my plan? ;)

Love the story and can't wait to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you, but I think Alice will fight you for them.

Haha, that is brilliant.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Seventeen Forever (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

AHAHAHA Drunk emmett is awesome! Drunk Jasper kinda scares me a little but that's how i am most of the time, moody. CAN'T WAIT TILL NEXT CHAPTER!!!!

 

I want a 6 tier vanilla cake with the characters faces on it... that would look cool!



Author's Response:

Lol, Emmett's fun.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

Darn, darn, darn, darn! Way to keep a low profile, guys! Oh well, it was fun while it lasted. *shrugs*

Although I do have to say, there's a big ole part of me screaming "RUN!" and wanting to reach through my computer screen and shake our favorite drunken fools...lol.

Very enjoyable chapter to read, despite the feeling of doom and impending sadness over the soon coming end of our...erm their fun that the end brought. Thanks for sharing their adventure with us! :)



Author's Response:

Haha, yes, they do need a good shake.

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

Alice.x

Reviewer: vannaaaaheartsjacob (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

oh no!!!!!

they CANT get caught!!

they need to buy an suv and a big car that can hold them all and just drive!!!!



Author's Response:

Lol, good plan, but it has to happen.

Thank you.

Alice.x

 

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

Hm, ill have some chocolate fondue with jackso rathbone in it. id also go for some Rpattz, but people say he doesnt shower, so... LOL. I LOOVE IT. i was wondering when it would all be over. i mean, things can only go that good for a while, right ?



Author's Response:

Yummy. Lol.

Yeah, but they'll find ways of having fun, it's just Demetri and Felix will be there yelling at them. :P

Alice.x

Reviewer: chellik (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

please make them escape and have the whole shit time on the run thing... please dont make them go back!! PLEASE!!!!!

 

chellik x



Author's Response:

Lol, I'm sorry, but it has to be done.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

Don't worry, I won't be here with pitchforks, I didn't think they would be able to get away with it for long. And especially with their names across the news and pictures too.

I guessed as soon as Rosalie said Emmett's name that they would recognise who they are!

But great chapter anyways :D



Author's Response:

That's good to hear, yeh, it kinda has to happen.

I was wondering if people noticed that Rosalie said all their names in front of the men. Oops for drunkeness.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Goddessa39 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them

Oh man.... hehehhe. I am really looking forward to chapter two. Onward!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

Alice.x

Reviewer: kellilh95 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

Please don't send them back to bootcamp!



Author's Response:

I'm sorry, it has to be done.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Regetta (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

Oh my god, please update! You can't leave it there! 

Well, you can... but take pity on your poor readers =P



Author's Response:

Haha.

I'll try and not take too long on the next chapter, I just want to make sure I get it right.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

I think you nailed it with the Dun Dun Duuuunnnnn.

i can't wait to see what's in store for them next time around!



Author's Response:

Lol.

They'll still have fun, just Felix and Demetri will be there yelling at them. :P

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Barbiegirltwilighted (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

nice... but their in some deep shit...  ^_^



Author's Response:

Yeh.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: absoluteTE (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash

Uh oh

Author's Response:

*Nods*

Thank you.

Alice.x

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