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Reviewer: SiNFULSAiNT (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Road Trip
OhMeyGuhd!! Ive never had that good laugh since the last update of 'Edward Wallbanger'.I love this story and Alice with her Hulk attitude.LOL
Author's Response: Haha, thank you, I'm glad you're liking it.
Alice.x
Reviewer: HPsharpie123 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them
Haha. I like it already.
It's about time Bella showed some bitchiness ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad.
I hope you continue to like it.
Alice.x
Reviewer: just_troublesome (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
nice :)
Author's Response: Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: cheshiregirl (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
Hi! so, as the story was actually finhished I thought I'd post a review at the end...
I really liked it, specially how you made them grow up, but still remain true to themselves and their personalities and the fun stuff!
like you barely didn't realize when it happened... I dunno how to explain!
besides it's always fun to fantasize about kicking somebody's ass...
ohh and loved the time tattos!
well, thank you for the story and I'll be reading the other stuff soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked the story.
Yeah, I didn't want them to change too much, it just wouldn't seem real.
Alice.x
Reviewer: xassia (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
Euw mah God I just finished this story and I FRIGGIN LOVED IT.
Thanks for writing it xD seriously, it made the last couple of days a hell of a lot more fun ;P I even read it at school from my iphone XP
if that doesn't say how much I loved it.. =P
ohh, and the fake food at the end of every chapter? Fucking Brilliant!
I especially liked the food that involved chocolate covered twilight men XD
ANYWAY you rock, your writing skills rock too, and just keep writing ;p
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Chocolate covered Twilight boys is a must, :P
=D
Alice.x
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Family Reunion
ok, maybe it's just me, maybe it's just the way i was raised but if i did, much less said, half the shit these fucktard kids are, my parents would have BEAT THE SHIT outta me. seriously. Bella walks away from Renee like it's nothing? all these jaws left hanging open? are you kidding me?! my mother would have tackled me to the ground, slapped me in the face, and sat on me as she yelled at me. my dad probably would've held my legs still.
i'm really hoping something turns around in these last chapters because they are acting like giant babies and it is grating on my nerves. they're unbelievable.
is it bad that i really hope Bella gets her ass handed to her by Maria? that's how much her attitude is annoying, and who better to level her than a bitch in the mob!
Author's Response: It's not just you, I wouldn't get away with any of this either. The thing is Bella, Alice and Rose's parents aren't like ours. They have let them get away with what they want since they were kids. They have no control over them, that's part of the reason they were sent to Boot Camp. That's why they yell and walk away from their parents, because they can. They've been doing that their whole lives and they see it as okay and Charlie and Renee have done nothing to stop her, same with Rose's parents and Alice's parents.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Anger Management
this Esme is my hero! i friggin' love her. seriously. she's doing what i plan to be doing (maybe not in a correctional facility, though) and i love it. it's about time someone told those girls what's up!
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Road Trip
ugh, those girls seem like big babies, breaking things and having tantrums. i'm really hoping this camp turns them around because, as of now, they're annoying the hell outta me!
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Drunken Adventures
omg, their escape was hilarious. running in circles?! what was she expecting to accomplish there? and Forrest Gump? lol! yep, i would've yelled that too. i'm crying i'm laughing so hard. good stuff
Reviewer: lorijori (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
this is freaking awesome i love your story so thanks ^-^ ~XOXO~ LJ
Author's Response: Thank you.
I'm glad you liked it.
Alice.x
Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
LOOOOVE this story!!!! totally kept me riveted for the week i read it and i was majorly sad to see it end :(
i did however REALLY enjoy the ending though. i like how their change was subtle and that they didnt just completely turn around to being good.
thank you so much for this story!
<3's for you!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Yeah, I couldn't have them change completly, it just didn't seem realistic to me.
=D
Alice.x
Reviewer: Divaisdancing (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
I LOVED THIS STORY!
It was pretty fucking fantastic.
It had me laughing out loud.
Thank you for fucking writing it!
Author's Response: Lmao, thank you, I'm glad you liked the story.
=D
Alice.x
Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
lots of fun, love the mayhem, and you even threw in a perfect ending. really enjoyed reading your story
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked the story.
Alice.x
Reviewer: AmandaJayne86 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Drunken Adventures
Oh so funny! I love fics that make me laugh out loud continuously - I'm glad I have found another one. Thanks! xo
Reviewer: AmandaJayne86 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them
I love the first chapter. This story looks like it will be promising and oh so funny! xo
Reviewer: lilsabeth (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
Yay! Fucking great story!!!!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
That was a good story, I really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad.
Alice.x
Reviewer: vicki030186 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
i absolutely loved this story, i could not stop laughing all the way through and as my mum has kicked up hole hell over my over obession with my twilight books this my only outlet for getting my doseage of edward, and if all the other fan fiction is like this i think i'll be ok till new moon is realised in the cinema's
vicki
xxx
Author's Response: Thank you, it always makes me smile when people say this story made them laugh.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Alice.x
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
A truly amazing story line that kept me suctioned to my email to know when a new chapter had been posted. It was all that 'sauciness, teasing, fun, flirting, dirty-play, adventure, consequences and retaliation' that kept me coming for more. You made your characters so life-like, I was sure I was reading someone's diary, never mind my own past exploits. ha ha ha
I will miss my chapter treats and look forward to your next story, "The Family". I send you much love (to hurry and write faster) and anything chocolate covered on your fantasy choice. Thank you so much for this.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed reading Boot Camp. It means a lot to hear that it seemed real.
Thanks for leaving me all the amazing reviews, you never failed to make me smile.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Quirky_Girl (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
It's actually finished. I think I might cry. Ah, well, all good things must come to an end, no? It was awesome while it lasted.
On a side note, Emmett's parents seem to be pretty cool. I mean, they let Jasper AND Edward stay with them. I can't believe Charlie and Rosalie's parents let the boys sleep in their daughters's rooms, though. Unless, they started out on the couch...
Anyway, great job. I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Oh no, don't cry. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I do love Emmett's parents. Well, Charlie accepted that there was nothing that was really going to stop Bella and Edward sharing a room, and Rose always has a way of getting what she wants.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
awwwww!! i can't believe this story is ACTUALLY finished!! jeeze!! Oh goodness, i love this story......i wanna read more about them soooo bad!! well, good luck in your future stories!!
Author's Response: There is still Boot Camp - Extras, which I will get round to continuing soon.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Mimigrace (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 19 - A Quiet Night In
so what are they going to do in terms of birth control? cause i can't see you getting them pregnant (that would be kinda sucky).
maybe the girls are already on the implanon implant? thats the best option i can think of right now :P
Author's Response: No, there are no pregnant characters in this story.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Whispering_Willow (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
Excellent. I loved this story it was absolutely the best story I've read so far.
Great work =D
Author's Response: Thank you, that makes me smile.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Ash88 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
this has got to be one of the best stories ive read! i love dit! well done! so sad its finished!
Author's Response: Thank you, that's a very nice thing to say.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Raeluvs (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
congradulation!!! you finished!!!!!!! this story was amazing!!!! so much fun to read!!! thanks for a good time! lol
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed reading Boot Camp.
Alice.x
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