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Reviewer: RaeRae (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 28 - A Family Reunion
holy-shit-what-the-crap-is-Maria-doing-there? lol
Author's Response: Haha, yay! I got the desired effect.
Thanks.
Alice.x
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 28 - A Family Reunion
Hey awwww loved emmetts famly =] omg the ending CLIFFY or what lol =]
Author's Response: I love his family too, haha, yeh the next chapter should be fun.
Thanks
Alice.x
Reviewer: Mishcabe (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 28 - A Family Reunion
omg this chapter was amazing, i felt like i was going through withdrawal when i waited longer than usual for another chapter to come up. would i be able to have chocolate covered jasper and emmett?
Author's Response: Lol, I'm sorry for the withdrawal.
Thanks.
Alice.x
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Family Reunion
I would definatly say you achieved the perfect desired effect of holy-shit-what-the-crap-is-Maria-doing-there? I can just imagine her being Royal Bitch of the century. I bet Alice could still kick her ass though; Alice may be small but dang that girl has some serious fire in her. I almost hope you put in a show down between Alice and Maria.
Author's Response: Wow, your a fast reader, =D.
Yeh, she is a complete bitch and not in the fun way the girls are, she's just a bitch.
Thanks
Alice.x
Reviewer: princessitavalevale (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Family Reunion
thanks for the chapter!!!
omg! wht is Maria there?
continue soon pls!!
XOXO
Author's Response: Haha, yeh, the next chapter should be fun with her there.
Thanks
Alice.x
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash
Ahhh crap! Thier gonna get busted...NOOOOO
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Family Reunion
ooh things are heating up. brilliant and i cant wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, it should be fun.
Alice.x
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 22 - The Great Escape
That was the coolest jail break ever!
Author's Response: I like to think so, lol
Thanks
Alice.x
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Anger Management
Hell, I think I will supply the girls the bat for Demitri and Felix
Do I have a proble with authority? Maybe just a little sometimes
Author's Response: Lol, the girls would appreciate that.
Thanks
Alice.x
Reviewer: themoose-within (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Family Reunion
Oooh London. I'M SORRY FOR NOT REVIEWING I'M A HORRIBLE PERSON.
I'll be around though, except for a week around the 20th when I'll be flat out at a horse show. But because you're amazing I'll try to catch up on any missed reviews at once that's finished.
ANYWAYS. Maria sounds like a giant bitch. I demand Alice's snark to come into play for at least 2 lines... it's just always the best.
Oh, and antipyro's request did it for me. So much that I can't even think of anything else I want, except side orders of pizza, Emmett, and Jasper (who am I to discriminate against the 3?)
Author's Response: Lol, you're not a horrible person, don't worry about it.
Oh she is, and Alice will certainly get a few words in. =D
Thanks.
Alice.x
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Family Reunion
holy-shit-what-the-crap-is-Maria-doing-there? - yes, you managed that effect.
i love it. update soon, please. oh, and nice trip to london !
Author's Response: Haha, yay!
Thanks
Alice.x
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Visitors
Can't wait to read the letter as well
Reviewer: itunesx221 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Family Reunion
ahhhh maria
how could u leave it like that? ur evil
Edward statue made out of snickers!
Author's Response: Haha, the chapter had to end somewhere, *grins wickedly*
Thanks
Alice.x
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 16 - A Midnight Wander
Oh Lauren is so gonna get her ass kicked...such a delicious thaught
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 16 - A Midnight Wander
Oh Lauren is so gonna get her ass kicked...such a delicious thaught
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South
Awesome!
Reviewer: JayJayHale (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Family Reunion
I was realy divided bout this chapter! I wanted to read it as fast as possible to find out the suprise but then I didn't want to rush it...lol so I did a lil of both. Awesome chap and Maria should be fun to play with...it's fun watching Jazz squirm. I mean I love the kid but he doesn't get too many squrmy moments!
JayJay!
Author's Response: Haha, Maria is fun to play with, but a she's a bitch, and not the fun kind like the girls. :P
Thanks Jay.
Alice.x
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found
Oh hell no! Not maria
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Defiance
love that you put in the schedules
Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Family Reunion
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Rise and Shine
Bella's classes sound like torture for the most part...how crazy is that
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Family Reunion
:O Maria?!?!! What the!! I don't trust her one bit, although.. I knew she'd be in it at some point.. should be interesting ;D
Emmett's family sound so funny, would love a sibling in that family, would so cool ;D
Have fun in London :)
Author's Response: Ah, you shouldn't trust her. :P
It would be awesome.
Thanks.
Alice.x
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Boys will be Boys
No such luck that this is a dream for Bella...ggggrrrrrr what a day
Reviewer: TeamAlice (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them
Of COURSE that was a vote for violence! who didn't vote for violence? *looks confused* I'll hurt them! lol
Author's Response: Lol, you make me giggle.
Can't wait to complete the next chapter, I only have half a page at the moment, but Maria is a bitch, Jasper is pissed, and Alice is ready attack. It's all fun
Reviewer: Jacquelyn Swan (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Family Reunion
It's more like holy-fucking-balls-what-the-fucking-hell-is-that-skanky-ass-bitch-doing-here. At least thats my take on it.
Author's Response: Haha, that is a good way of looking at it.
Alice.x
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