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Reviewer: ertyuiop (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Family Reunion
ok they already have the max time to stay there so when are they goin to figure out that they can do wat ever they want and still not get time added
Reviewer: ertyuiop (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Newsflash
wow they are stupid they know people are lookin for them so they get drunk and make lots of noise. smart one
Reviewer: ertyuiop (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Better Accommodation
no you said there would be no GRAPHIC lemons not any lemons at all, you left me hangin.tear lol. really great story though i like the suspence i just feel like they could get caught at any min.
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Tales From the South
Hehehe sneaking in the middle of the night with a shirtless Edward, I love it. As soon as I saw Maria, i wondered if you had switched it up to a gang. Very well done. I feel bad for Jasper when he gets out.
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Defiance
It's not like Bella is getting pissed off for stupid reasons. The teacher wouldn't call her by the name she goes by and she tried to be nice and set him straight but it wouldn't work. Great chapter
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Boys will be Boys
In the morning, I'm making waffles! Haha. Tell me you know what that's from! Great chapter! I'm kind of secretly hoping that they end up getting along with Lauren....
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Roomies
You know, I was kind of hoping that the girls wouldn't like the guys at first. Like they butted heads on stuff and then finally got along, but as bella has mentioned, they have come in handy! Hahah
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 9 - A Heist
Okay, so you went through what Edward and Jasper had in their evelopes. What was in Emmetts? Hmm, now that makes me all the more curious about Jasper if Edward didn't want tot spill the reason. haha I wondered if Lauren was their roommate. Great chapter
Author's Response: Emmett just had an iPod and a phone.
Alice.x
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Sounds Like a Plan
Hmm I hope the plan works...Love that Bella talked back to demetri, i probably would have done the same thing. Makes me curious on what the boys did to get in there, especially jasper since people seem to be afraid of him. Great chapter
Reviewer: ertyuiop (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them
nice story i like it so far
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Sinful Teasing
I so loved that Bella teased him during class and that she is going to pay for that. Dominating Edward is hott!! The teasing was just too funny. Great chapter! It's now 2 am, so I am going to bed. Until next time.
Author's Response: Haha, teasing Edward is always a must.
Thanks for the reviews.
Alice.x
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Pizza and Boys
Aww, the guys are already taking the girls under their wings. Loved the mike scene. Awesome. Great chapter!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
I love Alice! Her reaction to their roommate's mess in the toilet cracked me up. i wonder who that is. Victoria maybe? Tanya? Great chapter.
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Road Trip
Man, I would be just as pissed as them. I've broken a few things myself. Haha, I've actually kicked my bathroom door in. You know in the doorway, it has that latch and then the doorway sticks out so the door stops there. Yeah, I kicked it past that point. I laughed when I found out what I had done. Great chapter!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Behind Bars
hahaha, I loved Rose's ramble about exploding and imploding. Too cute! Great chapter. Sucks for the girls though...
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that part, it's one of my favourite Rose moments in this story.
Alice.x
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Drunken Adventures
Aww the girls were just having fun, what's the problem? Haha. Great chapter!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them
Great intro chapter! I like that you put it so they just got off the bus. Very well done.
Reviewer: shelivesinafairytale (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
i actually read it all the way through and didnt get bored, well done!
I'm also glad it didnt turn intoa love triangle with jacob and i just generally enjoyed it.
:D(L)
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm happy you enjoyed the story.
Lol, I don't think any of my stories will ever turn into a love triangle with Jacob.
Alice.x
Reviewer: lyssalani (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
That was amazing!!! It made me crack up~
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad.
Sorry for the late reply.
Alice.x
Reviewer: southern_belle123 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
I love your story! I stoped reading it for a few months ad just randomly remembered today. I love that u finished and how u finished! I also wanted u to check out my story. ur review would mean a lot. I want to know what u think about it! It would seriously make my day! I only have 5 chapters up, but hopfully I will have more soon!
Its called Love never fails. OOh and btw its on fanfiction.net. if u don't find it, just search up southern_belle123 on the search thing and it will be on my profile. PLZ read it! It would mean a lot. Even if u don't like it!!
Jelena :)
Author's Response: Hey.
Thank you I am glad you liked the story, I'm sorry for the late reply.
I'll hopefully get round to reading your story soon, I've just got to catch up with the ones on my favourites list at the moment, I'm falling behind a bit.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Twilight_1012 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
this was amazzzingggg!!!! i totally loved it. such a great idea. luv ur writing, cant wait for more stories :)
Author's Response: Thank you.
I'm glad you enjoyed reading this story.
=D
Alice.x
Reviewer: Queen_apples (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
liked the story alot
Author's Response: I'm glad.
Thanks for reading it.
Alice.x
Reviewer: SiNFULSAiNT (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 29 - An Unwanted Visitor
Damn. You should've let Bella or Rose smash Maria's nose on the pavement-if there is one.Coz really,noses arent cheap to reconstruct.Heehee
Author's Response: No pavements, just grass, which is a shame.
Alice.x
Reviewer: SiNFULSAiNT (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 28 - A Family Reunion
USE THE FUCKING FIRE EXIT!! --I totally forgot to add that to my review from last chapter. To think that I actually shouted that on my screen. :D
During the Renee/Bella stand off,was kinda expecting her to go like,"If you didnt want me in your house or lives,you just had to say so.No need to fucking dump me in this fucking hell hole.That said,the first thing Im gonna do after i got the hell out of here,is to move out.And never talking to you assholes again."--Pretty dramatic huh?LOL
And on Lauren,if I was Bella,I would just gone,"Shoo fly.Dont bother me."With sneer,of course.-- thats just me,Im all for sublty.But what Bella said is so in character,so Im not complaining.:D
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Haha, I love the fact you actually shouted that.
I can see Bella saying that, it would have been funny.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: SiNFULSAiNT (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Oh Crap!
Jebus-titty-fucking-rice! GAH!! LOL
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