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Reviews For Boot Camp
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Behind Bars

These girls crack me up. I can't wait to see what boot camp does to them.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you like the story.

Thanks for the review.

Alice.x

Reviewer: missloonylovegood (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Drunken Adventures

haha That was a great chapter. I loved that Rosalie was running in circles around the fire to keep the cop from getting her. Alice and Rosalie are violent little things, aren't they?

 

You should update soon, luff.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you liked the chapter. Haha yeah, they like to throw a few punches.

Chapter three should be up soon.

Thanks for the review.

Alice.x

Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Drunken Adventures

haha! awesome, adding to faves!



Author's Response:

Thank you for favouriting,

and thank you for the review.

Alice.x

Reviewer: beetlejuicelover (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Drunken Adventures

LOL! Running aorund the fire? I love it and I can't stop laughing. Sorry, I didn't review for the first chapter. I can't wait for chapter three.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad it made you laugh.

Thanks for the review.

Alice.x

Reviewer: peachykeenbean17 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Drunken Adventures

HAHAHAHAHAHA that' great!



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you like it.

Thanks for taking the time to review.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Drunken Adventures

i like the backstory, i can hardly wait until we see edward and bella meet =D



Author's Response:

Thank you, I think it will be the chapter five when the boys come into the story. I know I'm evil, but I want to get the back story sorted before I take you back to the camp.

Alice.x

Reviewer: vampirebyheart (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them

its really no problem im just glad you talk to me most people run the other direction screming



Author's Response:

No worries.

Alice.x

Reviewer: LenaBean (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Drunken Adventures

OMG, I could not stop laughing during this entire chapter. I really like this story and cant wait to see what becomes of it. Great Job and keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

I'm glad people are finding it funny.

Thank you for your thoughts.

Alice.x

Reviewer: vampirebyheart (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them

Well it kinda depends on what your in for.  for me yes cause i am a very violent person so i got sent to anger management but my friend was not and im not sure what she did to get in there but like i said sometimes they do and sometimes they dont.  but i think it would be a good thing to put into the story

glad i could help:):)



Author's Response:

Thank you, I think I will be putting it into the story. Thanks for your help.

Alice.x

Reviewer: onelove0814 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Drunken Adventures

Haha this story is hilarious! I can't wait to see where it goes! I love the girls and I think that would be how they acted if this was how their life was!

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad it made you laugh.

I will try and update as often as possible.

Thank you for the review.

Alice.x

Reviewer: vampirebyheart (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Drunken Adventures

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SOME OF THE SAME THINGS ME AND MY 2 BFFS DO ALL THE TIME!!!!!!!!

btw i have been sent to boot camp not fun

so if you ever need any help just come ask me

i can tell you toons of stuff about what me and my friends have done and are still donig

(im a bitch i know and yes be very afraid)



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you like the story.

I was going to make it up for the most part, guessing what it would be like, but I do have one question. Do they have counselling in boot camp or something like that? I might just throw it into the story even if they don't, but I thought I'd ask.

Thanks for the review.

Alice.x

Reviewer: ahhelga (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Drunken Adventures

Very interesting. I cannot wait to see what Alice, Rose, and Bella get into with this boot camp. I know this may be pushing it, but please continue soon!

that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline



Author's Response:

Thank you. Lol no you're not pushing it, I will try my hardest to write as much as I can, as quickly as I can. Chapter three is in progress.

Thank you for the review.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them

facking awesome!



Author's Response:

Lol, thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you for your thoughts.

Alice.x

Reviewer: twilightlover96 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them

I like how Bella, Alice and Rosalie are all bad ass. Keep writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I have done the second chapter, but I want to read through it a couple more times and edit some things before I post it. I will probably upload it tonight or tomorrow morning.

Thank you for the review.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them

Awesome story! i thought it was pretty funny also! good way of describing rose! cant wait till edward jazz and emmett show up!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad if I made you laugh, even if you only chuckled. Lol. The boys will be coming soon, but it'll be a few chapters until you read about them.

Thank you for the review.

Alice.x

Reviewer: blueeyedangel (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them

It sounds very fun and exciting, i can't wait to read more and see what happens.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I will try to be quick with updates, I know what it's like waiting haha.

Thank you for your thoughts.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Alyss In Wonderland (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them

haha! i love it so far! I can't wait for the next chapter, and to see where you go with this!

Gotta love foul-mouthed Rose, Alice & Bella, i can't wait for updates!



Author's Response:

Thank you, it's insane how fast this got validate, but I am half way through writing the second chapter so you shouldn't have to wait that long.

Thank you for reviewing.

Alice.x

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