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Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
So squeal all you want. cause here's a review 1 what took you so long to update ? it was driving me nuts. i'm completely in love with thsi story. thouugh i thought they were going to be gurads. but i still love it. update soon .
Author's Response: Haha. Yay!
I had a lot of revision to do, but after tomorrow I shall be able to write as much as I normally can. Hopefully you wont be driven nuts again.
Glad you love it, that makes me smile.
Alice.x
Reviewer: beetlejuicelover (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
:) I was so happy to see another update. I love that Rose made James bleed. I can't wait to see how the rest of their day is going to be. Will they have any classes with the boys?
Author's Response: Haha, Rose does throw a very good punch.
Of course. I've got part of the first lesson after their lunch planned in my head.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Jacqui (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
Haha I should have known the Volturi will run the bootcamp :-D
Now I'm wondering who the roommate is... hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Lol, well I just had to have the Volturi in the story.
Haha, It wont be long until you find out who the roommate is.
Alice.x
Reviewer: vivian_swan (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
PLEASE WRITE FASTER!!!!I DESIRE FOR MORE! Your stories are , so far, the best and most funny shit that ive ever read! Its total love!
Author's Response: Thank you. Haha, well after tomorrow I should be able to write as much as I want to again, so updates shouldn't be too far apart.
I'm glad you like it, that's awesome.
Alice.x
Reviewer: KrystalCullen (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
Love this story, especially now that the boys are in it!! Bad girl Bella is funny.
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you like it and are finding it funny.
Alice.x
Reviewer: cresponina (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
Great build up. I am assuming that the boys are in the boot camp system too... if so one can only imagine the trouble the six of them could collectively create.
Author's Response: Thanks, haha, yes they are and they do love to cause as much trouble as the girls do.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
ooo, nice;)
Author's Response: Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: childrenwith4legs (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
Ahhhh, we meet the boys!
Good chapter, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: LauraJen (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
YAY!!! OUR BOYS!!!
Author's Response: Haha. Who doesn't love the boys of 'Twilight'?
Alice.x
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
Yay for the boys!!! I have a feeling if Edward was smiling at me I wouldn't have much will power either. In fact, I can feel myself melting into a puddle just thinking about it.
Author's Response: Haha, yes I do believe that Edward has the smile to make all will power just fade away into nothing.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Justread (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Road Trip
I LOVE this story! All too often we see the timid, shy, defenseless Bella, and I love this bad ass Bella. Alice and Rosalie have always been a little bad ass, but this... this is amazing.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like it.
Haha, I do find writing bad ass Bella fun.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Jacqui (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Road Trip
I realy love your story and bad ass Bella ;-)
Can't wait for the boys...
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you like it.
Thanks for the review.
Alice.x
Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them
i can already tell im going to like this story:)
Author's Response: =D
Thanks for the review.
Alice.x
Reviewer: memegan_rox (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Road Trip
i cannot wait for the boys to appear!! im sure it'll be just as great as the rest of these chapters were :)
Author's Response: Thank you, gladness.
Thanks for reviewing.
Alice.x
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Road Trip
i also have this feeling. weird huh ? i love it. i'll read it, but not now. my effing mom just took me on a 7 day trip without computer.i have to update myself around here
Author's Response: Thank you glad you like it.
7 days with out a computer? What's this madness? Haha
Alice.x
Reviewer: Neurotika (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Road Trip
I absolutely love this story. Cant wait for a new chapter!
xx
Author's Response: Gladness. It shouldn't be long until chapter five is up, I write most days.
Thanks for the review.
Alice.x
Reviewer: brooklyn (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Road Trip
Can't wait for the Cullen men in uniform!!
Author's Response: Haha, that's sure going to be fun to write.
Thanks for reviewing.
Alice.x
Reviewer: earthgirl16 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them
OMG, i love this story. i really like this whole new take on bella and the girls and i can't wait for the boys to come into it. Please, please, please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Yay, glad you are liking the story.
Thanks for reviewing.
Alice.x
Reviewer: missloonylovegood (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Road Trip
hahaha! I love their little escape plan. The girls should have made a lot of noise to warn Bella not to climb through. she could have escaped through the front door. ^.^
Author's Response: Haha, I'm sure there shall be a lot more escape plans throughout the story.
Thanks for the review.
Alice.x
Reviewer: beetlejuicelover (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Road Trip
*does little happy dance* Yay chapter four but reading your end note I can't wait for chapter five. Lol! If my parents were sending me away I think my house/room would be a lot like Rosalie's. As I said before I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Haha, I felt like being slightly evil which was the cause of the end note. :P
Thanks for the review.
Alice.x
Reviewer: vampirelust7 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Drunken Adventures
Damn, that shit was hilarious! Whoa, my stomach and head hurts from laughing ;) Great!
Author's Response: Lol, sorry for causing you pain, but I'm glad it made you laugh.
Thanks for reviewing
Alice.x
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Road Trip
haha love it!! i love a man in a uniform!
Author's Response: Haha, who doesn't?
Thanks for the review, glad you are enjoying it.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Shaz (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Road Trip
I like that the Bella we get to meet here isn't the typical Bella you read about. You know, like sweet, shy, clumsy, enjoys literature, walks on the beach... LOL haha ok so not the beach maybe but mostly Bella is always this nice, clumsy girl and it gets boring...this Bella is a rebel and I LOVE it! :D
Reeeally eager to read the next chapter, you are doing a fantastic job!:D
Author's Response: Thank you. I agree, I like taking the characters and slightly changing their personalities and at the same time keeping some of their original traits, though I have changed Bella considerably haha.
I'm glad you like it and thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: bb1028 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Road Trip
I'm loving this lol Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you love it.
Alice.x
Reviewer: onelove0814 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Road Trip
Ah these girls are a handful! It reminded me of my high school years so I made my best friend and partner in crime back then read this even though she has not read Twilight and now she is hooked too! We can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yay! Haha.
Thanks to both you and your friend. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Alice.x
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