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Reviewer: thot-2 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Pizza and Boys
Another great chapter. I am sooo loving this story and this Bella. I would love to see more......a companion story would be fantastic. However, I HATE slow updates and if you follow through with the "missing moments" how much longer would we have to wait for updates? If you think you can do both and make updates on a regular basis I say go for it!
Author's Response: Thank you.
I know how you feel about slow updates, so if i do post the story I will do my best to keep updates regular.
Alice.x
Reviewer: antifairytalestory (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Pizza and Boys
GO ON!! GO OOOOOOOOOOOOONNN!!
Author's Response: Haha, I shall.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Fnarks (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Pizza and Boys
I would love to be able to read a companion story of one shots or mission moments. Hehe. this story really is rapidly becoming one of my favorites! :)
Author's Response: I've already started writing it, I think I'll post the first moment after I post the next chapter of this one.
-Does a victory dance- Haha.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: margaretthedevil (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Pizza and Boys
Yay! It finally got validated. =3 I liked this chapter even though it was too short! -cry- Can't wait until the real antics begin! ^^ I kind of hope that they won't get -too- loveydovey and stay badass, please? Because I notice that happens sometimes in other stories.
P.S. I would totally love a companion story to this!
Author's Response: I apoligise for it being so short, and in advance cause the next ones sort as well. However after that, with what I have planned, they will be longer.
Don't worry, even though they are infatuated (not love at first sight like usual) they will still be bad ass and love causing trouble.
Good, cause I've already started writing it. Haha
Alice.x
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Pizza and Boys
"...because you smell like cat shit." Best line yet! I would be interested in a companion story. *eagerly raises hand in the air*
Author's Response: Haha. Glad you like it.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Twilight_fan_girl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Pizza and Boys
xD Yes!!!!! Finally someone hit him!!! Seriosuly if it wasn'tfor the fact that hers not real i would have long ago. I don't like puppys so i wouldn't mind hurting him :D But really handing over the ipods AND phones? That's just torture i might have died, like litrally. And seriously i say someone knocks out aro coz he's just creepy. Honestly just make him eat shit or something.
you rock like totally...write more pleaseeeeeeeee!! I'll beg! *puppy dog eyes and pout* xoxo
Author's Response: Haha, same here, shame he's fictional and I can't actually hit him, so I just make another fictional character do it for me. =D
Yes, torture is correct, I'd have cried - a lot - if it were me.
Haha. Shouldn't be long until the next update.
Alice.x
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Pizza and Boys
YEP. totally interested. i surely enjoyed it, but it was just too short. bur keep 'em coming :)
Author's Response: Haha, then you'll be upset to find the next chapter is a short one too. My apologies.
Alice.x
Reviewer: memegan_rox (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Pizza and Boys
GAHHHHH! she should have kissed him when she had the chance, although im sure they'll make up for it in the future ;) POST AGAIN SOON
Author's Response: Yes she should have, but I'm slightly evil. Haha.
The next chapter is with my beta, so shouldn't be long.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
Ooh, our guys are bad boys in this story? I love it, can't wait to see the trouble the six of them can get into. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Haha, they do like causing trouble in this story.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Yazzy (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Pizza and Boys
This is like amazing but how can you stop there? =[
i need to know whats gonna happen in class...lol
i would read it =]]
continue soon please
xXx
Author's Response: Haha, cause I'm evil. :P
Don't worry though, the next chapter is with my beta.
Alice.x
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
ugggggh! update soon. it is so unfair to make us fall for a story annd then take forever to update :(. LOL
Author's Response: Sorry. I posted the next chapter at the end of last week, it's taking a while to be validated, so either the queue is unbelievably long or the validator is busy.
I apologise though.
Alice.x
Reviewer: mysticsavantpixie58 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
OH MY GOD!!! keep going, that was hilariously awesome!!!! I WANT MORE. NOW!!!!
Author's Response: Haha, glad you like it.
The next chapter is in the queue waiting to be validated so you shouldn't have to wait too long.
Alice.x
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
I'm spinning!!!
Willpower - the girls downfall??? I'm sure they'll meet up with these three again, and again, and again.....etc.
Very realistic portrayal of rebellion. I can't wait for Bella to get lost looking for her room LOL
Author's Response: Haha, they don't have much will power, so they wont be able to control themselves for long.
Bella getting lost will be fun to write I have it all planned haha.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: brooklyn (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
Great chapter!! I'm glad the boys have made there apperance. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: vivian_swan (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
Can you please write faster.... Sorry for the impatience... but your stories are so funny and realistic... Its so edgy and I LOVE IT SO MUCH... i wonder what will happen... the characters are so related to real bitchy hot teens, which i love so much... Please write faster... i so love your stories.. I also love how bratty they are and at the same time stars of their own kind. What a perfect way to punish hot adolescent drunky shopaholics with placing them in an isolated place with punishments and boys... i think excellence is the key term!!! LOVE IT!!!! this is my favorite!!!
Author's Response: Haha, don't worry about it, I've been known to be impatient too. I will try to keep the updates close together. I now have more time to write, so you shouldn't have to wait too long for the next chapter if all goes to plan.
Really glad you are enjoying it, and if it is making you laugh, bonus!
Thank you for the review.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Sunshine_Ingenue (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
I really like your story. It's fin to see the new spin on the characters. Bad girls. Oh yeah.
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you like it.
Alice.x
Reviewer: missloonylovegood (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
Yay!!!! The boys have been introduced! I'm so excited ^.^ I had thought, at first, that it was only a girl's bootcamp. I am looking forward to the next chapter, so don't leave me hangin'!
Author's Response: Haha, girls only? Ah I couldn't do that. With the boys in the picture just think of the chaos they will create.
Thanks.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Mastaspammip (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
ahh finally the boys!!! so they are inmates too lol..
Author's Response: Haha, yes I couldn't keep them out of the story for much longer. Yes they are, like the girls, delinquents. Think of the mayhem they will cause.
Thanks for the review.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Vi0lentSerenity (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
I'm pretty picky about the stories i review for but this is a great story. I cant wait to see where it goes. Im so excited to see the boys appearance. who the hell wouldnt raise their hand? I was really bummed because i thought i had to wait two weeks for the next update but then you got the next chapter up so quickly. i love it.
But anywhoo, great plot and set up. Normally im not a fan of the girls being wild and badasses so to speak, but i'm really looking forward to see what hell they are gonna raise. as well as to see what exactly the boys are doing there.
Author's Response: First, thanks for reviewing. =D. Haha, true I'd be suprised if someone didn't raise their hand (even if if was just in their head). I try to keep the updates close together and I now have more time to write, so if all goes to plan you shouldn't have to wait long between chapters.
Glad you like it, I hope you continue to like it.
Thanks.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Fnarks (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
phew! I'm glad that the boys are delinquents too! For a little while I thought that you might, just might, be mean and make the boys guards/sergents/etc instead.
Author's Response: Haha, that would be mean, but the trouble they could cause as delinquents is just too much fun.
Thanks for the review.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Yazzy (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
im proper loving this
update soon
xXx
Author's Response: Yay! Haha.
Thanks for reviewing.
Alice.x
Reviewer: elemirehum (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
wooo, i am so glad that they have finally met, i was starting to get scared that the prison guards were going to be our hunky men and im happy they r not, jst some bad boys ; ) hotness!!
i cant wait for the next part x
Author's Response: Haha, the boys were always going to be fellow boot camp resedents, the trouble that the six of them will cause is just too much fun for them to be anything else.
Thanks for the review.
Alice.x
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
gawa gawa gawa!! woop woop, they are here!! yay.. love it!
Author's Response: Haha.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: margaretthedevil (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
Woohoo! I didn't think the guys would actually be delinquiets themselves! Nice surprise. Update soon. ^^
Author's Response: Ah, just think of the trouble they will cause.
Thanks for the review.
Alice.x
Reviewer: earthgirl16 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
yay the boys lol keep writing
Author's Response: Haha, I shall.
Thank you for the review.
Alice.x
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