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Reviewer: vivian_swan (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 9 - A Heist
Hahaha funny! finally! More intrigue! I wanna see how bitchy these girls get with Lauren around. More delinquent tactics i hope ;)
Author's Response: Haha, of course, it's what these girls do best.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 9 - A Heist
anogther good chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Pizza and Boys
I love it that she knocked Newton down with one punch. And she didn't even break her hand!
Badass...
Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Thank you, and thanks for the reviews on the other chapters too.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Emeralds
Yaaay, they finally got to meet the guys! I wonder what they're in for...
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them
Cool! I can't wait to see what kind of havoc these three hellions wreak on the place!!
Reviewer: beetlejuicelover (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 9 - A Heist
Yummy! *raises hand*
Yay! They got away with it..for now at least. I'm glad. I know they more then likely wouldn't have in real life but who cares. I can't wait to see what happens to the others as punishment. Also, I can't wait to read why Jasper is in here and to "see" him freak out. Loving it like always!!
Can we have some brownies or fudge next? *puppy dog eyes*
Nicole
Author's Response: Haha, like you said, they got away with it ... for now. :P
Jasper will explain all soon.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them
Awe, what a wonderful idea, I can't wait to see what you do with this. It reminds me of a daytime talk show, all that down home dirty, trashy goodness - like Maury or something. Look what you did, now I'm laughing at myself!
Thanks!
Author's Response: Haha, hope you like the rest of it.
Thanks for the review.
Alice.x
Reviewer: TeamAlice (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 9 - A Heist
hmmmm.... You know A fake dinner would be nice ; )
Author's Response: Haha, I'll get cooking.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 9 - A Heist
gah stupid Lauren, poor lil' Edward! cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Lol, thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: themoose-within (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 9 - A Heist
How did I know they'd have Lauren as a room mate? Magical...
I admire Bella's mad lockpicking skills. Very much so.
But still, I'm taking the cupcake request one step further - could we have cookie monster cupcakes? COOLEST THINGS EVER:
http://www.itsnicethat.com/index.php?id=2033
You must spend a fortune of money pampering us with these e-foods ;)
Author's Response: Lol. It was slightly evil of me to have them share a room with Lauren. :P
It's quite a skill she's picked up.
Can I just say those cupcakes are drool worthy, by all means have one.
Surprisingly imaginary food is quite cheep. Haha.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: RandomBlonde (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 9 - A Heist
I rather have ice cream but ill take the cupcake if i must...
I feel so sorry for Bells Ali, and Rose. They have to share a room with Lauren! I'd be mad at you if i didnt love this story so much...
Ok update soon, because its amazing. I think thats reason enough to update it...
~RandomBlonde
Reviewer: RandomBlonde (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 9 - A Heist
I rather have ice cream but ill take the cupcake if i must...
I feel so sorry for Bells Ali, and Rose. They have to share a room with Lauren! I'd be mad at you if i didnt love this story so much...
Ok update soon, because its amazing. I think thats reason enough to update it...
~RandomBlonde
Author's Response: How about a cupcake with a scoop of ice cream on the side? :p
Lol, it is a bit evil of me to give them her as their roommate.
Shall do.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: memegan_rox (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 9 - A Heist
hahahahahaahahahahaa, i knew she was going to be their roommate!! wouldn't there be a rule about boys in girls rooms & vice versa? oh well, like edward would follow it anyways :P love it, keep writing please :)
Author's Response: Lol, yes, it's one of the many rules of the boot camp, but like you say Edward doesn't listen to rules.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 9 - A Heist
i first thought edward had little experience with girls because emmett and jasper looked so shocked by his reaction to bella in the cafeteria now i'm beginning to believe he's just as pimp as bella ahhaha this is awesome, when will they flipping kiss already? :O
Author's Response: Haha, soon, I promise. :P
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: MyaLuv (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 9 - A Heist
Are the girls going to prank Lauren and piss her off?
Author's Response: Most certainly. :P
Alice.x
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 9 - A Heist
Damn I hate lauren. even ii am frustated now. but it was good to her, see bella almost kissing edward, at leaste she would know it was bella's territory. LOL. Updtae soon please :)
Author's Response: Lauren does seem to inspire hate, haha.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Blood donor (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 9 - A Heist
Ok I love this story. Seriously I do. I'd marry it if i could, but you know I don't think thats legal...
Please, please, please hurry up and write a chapter.
My soul will die a little every minute I have to wait.
I love it!
*10 is the best rating isn't it?
Author's Response: Haha, no, I don't think it's legal. :P
I do my best with keeping the updates close together. Now your soul dieing is going to make me feel guilty. I best get writing.
Thank you for the review and the rating. You made me smile.
Alice.x
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 9 - A Heist
Mmmmm, cupcakes! I hope everyone gets the flavour they like.
Hahahahaha - Lauren as the fourth! I can just see the hell she'll be put through!!! LMFAO!
Wow! Dinner at 6 and they have until 9 before bedtime???? What will they do? I can just see that as they only have one pair of boots, that said boots will get really mucky, then need to be cleaned and polished for some reason. I can just hear Rosalie now, "Shit, broke a nail!!"
This is getting so much more interesting. I do wonder what kind of 'Good behaviour' is required to get privileges?
Next treat?? Nanaimo Bars? Thanks!, you're the best!
Author's Response: Haha, yes there shall be a lot of mayhem since Lauren is their roomie.
I'm sure they'll think of something to fill the time lol. Ah yes the one pair of boots situation...that's going to be fun.
Nanamio bars? Don't actually know what they are ... google here I come.
Thank you, enjoy the cupcake.
Alice.x
Reviewer: sweetcrimefighter (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 9 - A Heist
Haha, love it! Love the end! Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 9 - A Heist
Oh no, fucking Tanya? Thats going to be a wild situation! I really love Edward and Bella in this story. He's very confident and smooth, but doesn't seem like an ass about it and she's confident and isn't being a bitch to him. Sounds like a recipe for a lot of funsexytimes! Thanks for the update and pass the cupcake!
Author's Response: Haha. I'm glad you like the way the characters are in this story. Lots od fun times to come. :P
Enjoy your cupcake.
Alice.x
Reviewer: LauraJen (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Sounds Like a Plan
Butter Pecan!
Uh oh...what are they up to now?? Such naughty girls! :-)
I'm loving this.
Author's Response: Haha, they are nevr out of trouble for long.
Thank you and enjoy your ice cream.
Alice.x
Reviewer: smilingrightnow7 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Sounds Like a Plan
Chocolate icecream please, with sprinkles if you don't mind. (:
still lov'n it, keep up the great work!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, enjoy your ice cream.
Alice.x
Reviewer: smilingrightnow7 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Sinful Teasing
Standing ovation... stimulating ... difference between a sin and a stick
My face will crack open from smiling.
~:-)
Author's Response: Glad it's making you smile.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Twilight_fan_girl (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Sounds Like a Plan
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooo write more quicklyyyyyyyyy!!!
Ooo i want bannana ice cream!! Coz i'm just that cool :P
You rock can't wait to see this plan!! xox
Author's Response: The next chapter is semi-complete. lol.
Thank you and enjoy your ice cream.
Alice.x
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Sounds Like a Plan
Mmmm, ice cream......
Love the plan, so far....Now, what are they trying to get back...Ipods?, wallets?, I'll have to go back and check what they took off of them....LOL
Maybe, more than their belongings will be gotten?????
Can we have frosted cupcakes next time???
Loved the running routine; Why did Bella keep passing Felix's group? Just faster or are they just slugs??!! Ha ha.
Author's Response: Haha, frosted cupcakes? You might just get you wish. :P
The way I had it in my head was that at the front of the building there is a path from the gates to the main doors. On either side of the path are two very larg areas of grass. Demetri was on one side and Felix was on the other. When Bella was running laps she was running the whole area, so she would run past where Felix was with his group. I hope that makes sense. Maybe I should have explained it more in the chapter.
Thank you for the review, enjoy your ice cream.
Alice.x
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