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Reviewer: TeamAlice (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Rise and Shine

please you want to know a dream I had last year? *you can use parts of this as one of bella's dreams if you run out of ideas* short version.:

I was sitting in a chair in this very small and grey hall way. It is this spy tower disgised as Macy's in a mall. there was a table in front of me and another empty chair next to it. suddenly some emergency lights start to flash. A bald white dude holding a gun rushes threw the door way and yells: "where is the Professor?!?!" I, not liking being yelled at, point him to the wrong direction *since I don't even know who he is talking about* "eight floor" I said. he gets in the levator and I smile and wave at him, he is so shocked he waves back. I know he wants to kill the proffesor, but since the hit man yelled at me I didn't like him. Once the elevator doors closed I got up and hit the button that stops it between floors and yell: "code Red" punching the alarm. I rush out into the mall and meet with all the other spies. The commander says we need to split up and meet back there at midnight for the ball, but to make sure to hide because a whale is on the lose. Everyone decides to go pick out their out fits since we are in a mall and its late and closed so we get free stuff. My friend starts to follow when I drag her to the other end of the mall because I thought we'd be safer from the whale (apparently it flys threw the air like its water) She complaines then follows me to the end of the mall. I see this realy nice seating area in a store and there is a long bar table. Then there is a cranny so I decide to see what is on the other side. I push through and see the beginging of...... Barnes and Nobel! and so I say: "lets get some free books!" So we freak and go pick out books for over an hour. Suddenly there is a bang and we turn around. The Commander is running at us and says: "Run! its the whale!" so we see the whale and run with the Commander. I get this idea when I see this mattress store. I say that we should trape him under the mattresses! We rig it so that when he swims by he gets sandwitched between them. He says "ughhhhhh..... You got me! but you forgot one thing..... I can deflate!" so he deflates and chases after the Commander. My friend starts to chase after him to help, but I grab her arm and say, "Better him than us..."

Yeah, then my dream morphed into something about leprechans and the cat lady down the street......

Morale: stay away from deflateable whales!



Author's Response:

That is one weird dream. I love how dreams morph into something else, which is just as random.

Thanks for sharing that, it made me lol.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Rise and Shine

awesome!!! i love this story!!!cant wait 4 it 2 be udated!!

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Rise and Shine

Haha, I now feel the need to pull out the Wii and play some Super Mario Brothers!  Awesome!  I love the fact that you're incorporating all of these wonderful little oddities (like the dream) into your story, it makes it much more fun to read.  Thanks for keeping it entertaining.

 



Author's Response:

Haha, Mario for the win!

Glad the story is entertaining you.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Boys will be Boys

Another fun filled chapter, thanks for the update!  It's going to be interesting to see how long our girls will stand for Lauren's snoring before they decided to do something to put a stop to it.  Or get her kicked out of the room or something.



Author's Response:

Lol, I'm affrid that they are stuck with Lauren as a roommate until she leaves the camp, but I'm not going to say when that shall be. :P

Alice.x

Reviewer: Heatherina (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Rise and Shine

I am once again procrasatnating on my term paper due to your excellentness. Good job lol.

Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Rise and Shine

I would imagine that you're a product of too much video playing or watched too much Barney!  LOL

At least this night, the girls will be so tired out, sleep will come a lot easier.  What time did Bella actually fall asleep?

I thought that Bella had one class with Edward - am I wrong?  I wouldn't doubt it.

Excellently long chapter, feel free to write them all that long.  Mmmm, pancakes!



Author's Response:

Lol, video games would be correct. Lots of 'Super Mario' and 'Mario kart' filled my childhood.

Rose fell asleep around about ten-thirty/eleven o'clock. Alice was about half an hour after Rose and poor Bella didn't get to sleep until about twelve-thirty. So she was staring at the roof for a good three and a half hours.

Yes, she has English with him after lunch ... also all the characters have 'study hall' for half an hour before lunch together.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Boys will be Boys

Mmmmm, I love pancakes!

So when do the guys break them out, after bedchecks I'm thinking.

Hmm, Lauren.....what to do with Lauren....can they complain that her snoring is too loud and have her re-assigned?

Will the girls get to 'chat' about Bella's kiss with Edward some more?  Please??



Author's Response:

Pancakes are yummy.

Haha, I'm affraid they are stuck with her as a roommate until she leaves the camp ... when shall that be? I'm not telling. Lmao.

I'm not sure yet, but since you asked nicely I might just fit another chat in somewhere.

Alice.x

Reviewer: selene_romanov (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Rise and Shine

when does bella have class w/ edward? 



Author's Response:

She has study hall with everyone before lunch and English with Edward after lunch.

Alice.x



Author's Response:

She has study hall with everyone before lunch and English with Edward after lunch.

Alice.x

Reviewer: vampirelust7 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Rise and Shine

No B&E interaction, damn! :(  Really good though.  I still miss My Edward.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, he'll be in the next chapter. Haha.

Alice.x

Reviewer: beetlejuicelover (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Rise and Shine

 Mario, Luigi and dinosaurs? lol I'm sorry. I've had a dream or two like that before..only there weren't any dinosaurs it was clowns. *shudders* I'm not even scared of clowns just in the dreams..

I loved this chapter and congrats on coming up with their schedules. I can't wait to see more of Bella and Em in French and Bella's chemistry class. I hope the next chapter is up soon.

Nicole



Author's Response:

Haha, dream clowns tend to be scary, I know haw you feel.

Thank you muchly.

Alice.x

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Rise and Shine

french toas, i like it. i never dreamed of mario but once i dreamed my  est friend was pregnant, and her belly was transparent, so i could see her baby swimming in it. LOL. Anyways, i love it :)



Author's Response:

Haha ... you had me laughing for about five minutes with that. Thanks

Alice.x

Reviewer: Nox (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Rise and Shine

that is a REALLY weird dream, but hey, i've had weirder so im not exactly one to talk, fun chapter!



Author's Response:

Haha, my mind scares me sometimes :P

Alice.x

Reviewer: vivian_swan (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Rise and Shine

Yay! Such rule breakers! I hope they never change!

Reviewer: Coxie (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Rise and Shine

Good chapter as usual! I love how the girls are such smartasses...it cracks me up! Great job!

Author's Response:

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: mary jane88 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Boys will be Boys

is this story on fanfiction????



Author's Response:

No, it's only on here, but I have been thinking adding it over there.

Alice.x

Reviewer: memegan_rox (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Boys will be Boys

the girls are probably going to be quite tired in the morning :) can't wait, so update soon :P

Reviewer: childrenwith4legs (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Boys will be Boys

Lauren snores... that bites!

Can't wait to see what happens in the morning wake up call!



Author's Response:

Haha, hopefully the wake up call won't disappoint.

Alice.x

Reviewer: childrenwith4legs (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Roomies

Finally!  They get to kiss!

Leave it to Emmett to not filter his brain to his mouth!

Gotta love Em!

Reviewer: Heatherina (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Boys will be Boys

Another excellent chapter. I'm so happy that you update frequently. It makes my day, which is actually quite sad lol.

Ok, break time over, time to go work on my term paper. Boo.

Thanks for the distraction!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I do try and keep them close together. Haha, well I'm glad anyway. :P

Oo, term paper, fun(!) haha.

Thanks for the review.

Alice.x

Reviewer: TeamAlice (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Boys will be Boys

yum pancakes! you know what is also good? French toast from this place near here. Delicious. An hour long wait out side for fiften dollar french toast, but SO worth it! best ever.... sweet.....goey.....yuuuummmmm.... *dies and goes to heaven*



Author's Response:

Lol, I've never actually had french toast, I think I must one day.

Alice.x

Reviewer: vampirelust7 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Boys will be Boys

Just a filler, but I liked it none the less. Can't wait for the next one ;)

Reviewer: Jacqui (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Boys will be Boys

great chapter! Lauren snores? SHIT :-D

Reviewer: Coxie (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Roomies

Great story! Yeah I think they need to find a place that no one knows about so they can have some alone time. =)

 

Reviewer: vivian_swan (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Boys will be Boys

YAY! UPDATE!!!! Some talking... i love

Reviewer: Twilight_fan_girl (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Boys will be Boys

Awwww that was a short one *pouts* Come ooooooonnnnn please write more, quickly. I'm really enjoying this and it's awesomness to the extreme. Pleeeeeeeaaaaassssseeeee write more quick it's sooo cool!

you rock xox

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